for Wanna do bad things with you9/26/2011 c1 
8AmazonWariorPrincess
That was HOT! Though I think you were right with labeling it horror... the end was kind of gruesome. The beginning was jizz-in-my-pants worthy though!
8AmazonWariorPrincessThat was HOT! Though I think you were right with labeling it horror... the end was kind of gruesome. The beginning was jizz-in-my-pants worthy though!
8/10/2010 c1 Sn3kers
Hey there! I don't know if you've showed this to other people other than the ones just on FF.net. If so you MUST know what people think about this. If not I, personally, want to let you know that the darkness threaded through the end, was LOVELY. It was splendid and I loved every biting moment, however short the moments were. Write more! For the reader's sake!
Hey there! I don't know if you've showed this to other people other than the ones just on FF.net. If so you MUST know what people think about this. If not I, personally, want to let you know that the darkness threaded through the end, was LOVELY. It was splendid and I loved every biting moment, however short the moments were. Write more! For the reader's sake!
7/24/2010 c1 pinkieh
That was great! It was kind of- well, I busted out laughing at the end. Not because it was that funny, but that's just the kind of thing that's funny to me.
That was great! It was kind of- well, I busted out laughing at the end. Not because it was that funny, but that's just the kind of thing that's funny to me.
10/17/2009 c1 metallicarfan
Wow, the ending was just wrong on so many levels. Up til then it was great.
Wow, the ending was just wrong on so many levels. Up til then it was great.