for The Empty Child11/15/2012 c3 
5Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom
This is a really fascinating story. Please post more, soon.
-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.
5Pearl Bramble of WillowbottomThis is a really fascinating story. Please post more, soon.
-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.
8/24/2010 c3 2RomanaLadyPresidentOfGallifrey
er... what year was the chronicles of narnia set in? did they have big tv's and cartoons on them then? spongebob has only been around for... what?... mmm, ten years? i understand you are trying to make the story work and please understand i am not intending to seem nasty or rude, i genuraly like your story. (i supose people could pick on my spelling, for i am orthograthicaly challenged)
2RomanaLadyPresidentOfGallifreyer... what year was the chronicles of narnia set in? did they have big tv's and cartoons on them then? spongebob has only been around for... what?... mmm, ten years? i understand you are trying to make the story work and please understand i am not intending to seem nasty or rude, i genuraly like your story. (i supose people could pick on my spelling, for i am orthograthicaly challenged)
3/6/2010 c3 mandariini
Your spelling is horrible and becaue that your story is hard to read... BUT I like it anyway a lot. I guess you're not going to continue this story, but don't stop writing. You have potential to be amazing writer:)
Your spelling is horrible and becaue that your story is hard to read... BUT I like it anyway a lot. I guess you're not going to continue this story, but don't stop writing. You have potential to be amazing writer:)
1/30/2010 c3 Lucy Pevensie396
I Absouletly postivley, love,love,love this story!:)
I Absouletly postivley, love,love,love this story!:)
11/24/2009 c1 3Kaleena DragonMaster
I like it so far! Just one question...Did you get the title of this story from an episode of Doctor Who?
3Kaleena DragonMasterI like it so far! Just one question...Did you get the title of this story from an episode of Doctor Who?
11/5/2009 c3 anonymous
poor lucy! Please continue! I can't wait for more!
poor lucy! Please continue! I can't wait for more!
10/19/2009 c3 69LucyCrewe11
I think out of all the stories you've done, this one may be my favorite. I really like it alot so far, and I really think more people should be reviewing this. Keep up the great work.
BTW: One mistake I noticed is that when someone asks a question in your chapter, you didn't always use a question mark, sometimes you just used a period. Other that that, I didn't notice any errors or major typos.
Please update again as soon as you can.
69LucyCrewe11I think out of all the stories you've done, this one may be my favorite. I really like it alot so far, and I really think more people should be reviewing this. Keep up the great work.
BTW: One mistake I noticed is that when someone asks a question in your chapter, you didn't always use a question mark, sometimes you just used a period. Other that that, I didn't notice any errors or major typos.
Please update again as soon as you can.
10/18/2009 c2 LucyCrewe11
Very good chapter! I really enjoyed it and there don't seem to be any words missing in this one, so it was easier to read, too. I really like the new twist on this story so far; and how you still kept it in modern day AU.
Can't wait for the next update.
Very good chapter! I really enjoyed it and there don't seem to be any words missing in this one, so it was easier to read, too. I really like the new twist on this story so far; and how you still kept it in modern day AU.
Can't wait for the next update.
10/17/2009 c1 LucyCrewe11
Very nice! I like the new twist on your rewrite of the orphan story, and I can't wait to read more. I did, however, notice some missing words(for example, at one point it says something along the lines of, "Lucy was clutching a" and it cuts there without saying what it was she was clutching). Other than that, it was very good. Please update again soon.
Very nice! I like the new twist on your rewrite of the orphan story, and I can't wait to read more. I did, however, notice some missing words(for example, at one point it says something along the lines of, "Lucy was clutching a" and it cuts there without saying what it was she was clutching). Other than that, it was very good. Please update again soon.