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8/27/2012 c1 
1inklover93
I have a truly obscene amount of knowledge in my head that I will probably never need or even really want but this one taught me something. I did not know what a Lacunae was until this and now that I know I use it everywhere. You earned me an A in my English class when I used it in a research paper so thanks for that. But other than that, it was great having these fillers. There is so much untouched moments between the two that I am so happy that I get to see here.:)
1inklover93I have a truly obscene amount of knowledge in my head that I will probably never need or even really want but this one taught me something. I did not know what a Lacunae was until this and now that I know I use it everywhere. You earned me an A in my English class when I used it in a research paper so thanks for that. But other than that, it was great having these fillers. There is so much untouched moments between the two that I am so happy that I get to see here.:)
3/23/2012 c20 HGrangerSnape
My favorite is the one in which Spots and Cloud have a long chat about their humans. Keep updating! :D
My favorite is the one in which Spots and Cloud have a long chat about their humans. Keep updating! :D
10/15/2011 c20 5EnharmonicAngel
I don't know why, but I imagine Numair as being like a super-tall version of Will Turner (Pirates of the Caribbean) o.o probably because their basic description is somewhat the same. XD
5EnharmonicAngelI don't know why, but I imagine Numair as being like a super-tall version of Will Turner (Pirates of the Caribbean) o.o probably because their basic description is somewhat the same. XD
10/15/2011 c18 EnharmonicAngel
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
This entire one-shot made me laugh hysterically. I'm, like, not even kidding.
LOL, Numair is one of the reaons I'm such an N fangirl. Uhh...play Pokemon: Black and White, and you'll understand XD
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
This entire one-shot made me laugh hysterically. I'm, like, not even kidding.
LOL, Numair is one of the reaons I'm such an N fangirl. Uhh...play Pokemon: Black and White, and you'll understand XD
10/15/2011 c14 EnharmonicAngel
o.o I laughed at Daine when he kissed her, because up 'til then she'd been oblivious, and IT WAS SO OBVIOUS XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
Like, really. I figured it out in Wolf-Speaker. AND THAT WAS THE FIRST BOOK I READ XD
o.o I read them in this order:
1. Wolf-Speaker
2. Emperor Mage
3. The Realms of the Gods
4. Wild Magic
See, when I bought them at that time, Wild Magic was currently not there o.o
o.o I laughed at Daine when he kissed her, because up 'til then she'd been oblivious, and IT WAS SO OBVIOUS XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
Like, really. I figured it out in Wolf-Speaker. AND THAT WAS THE FIRST BOOK I READ XD
o.o I read them in this order:
1. Wolf-Speaker
2. Emperor Mage
3. The Realms of the Gods
4. Wild Magic
See, when I bought them at that time, Wild Magic was currently not there o.o
10/15/2011 c8 EnharmonicAngel
"And don't let her eat any berries, if you can help it."
"Kitten, or Alanna?"
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD lol. I've always loved Tamora Pierce's books, but I only just recently started getting into fanfics about them.
"And don't let her eat any berries, if you can help it."
"Kitten, or Alanna?"
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD lol. I've always loved Tamora Pierce's books, but I only just recently started getting into fanfics about them.
10/15/2011 c2 EnharmonicAngel
LOL XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
This entire thing made me laugh hysterically. I GIVE IT A COOKIE! Then again...I give everything I like a cookie o.o SO NOW, I GIVE IT A SLICE OF CAKE! With cookie bits. Because everyone loves cookies X3
LOL XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
This entire thing made me laugh hysterically. I GIVE IT A COOKIE! Then again...I give everything I like a cookie o.o SO NOW, I GIVE IT A SLICE OF CAKE! With cookie bits. Because everyone loves cookies X3
9/24/2011 c14 Alpecca Ankaa Black
I LOVE this chapter! I think you captured the essence of all the characters perfectly here!
I LOVE this chapter! I think you captured the essence of all the characters perfectly here!
6/23/2011 c7 Mia
Something I find a bit annoying (in Tammy's books as well) is that animals that are apparently as intelegent as humans (like Cloud) talk in a sort of unintelegent way. The whole "chattering like magpies thing" just seems...I dunno. Not right?
I don't actually know anything about writing (other that a few workshops) so take all my advice with a grain of salt. :)
Something I find a bit annoying (in Tammy's books as well) is that animals that are apparently as intelegent as humans (like Cloud) talk in a sort of unintelegent way. The whole "chattering like magpies thing" just seems...I dunno. Not right?
I don't actually know anything about writing (other that a few workshops) so take all my advice with a grain of salt. :)
6/23/2011 c6 Mia
Another awesome story - it's not daft! :)
A few more run on sentances again ("Crouching, he closed his eyes and concentrated, feeling the magic dancing across his skin – he would never in a thousand years have admitted it, but he'd spent quite a bit of the past week practising his flying, partly so he could actually teach her and partly to try and avoid making a fool of himself."). Again, replace the hyphin with a period, and it should work.
Keep writing Tammy fanfics, you're so good at it!
Another awesome story - it's not daft! :)
A few more run on sentances again ("Crouching, he closed his eyes and concentrated, feeling the magic dancing across his skin – he would never in a thousand years have admitted it, but he'd spent quite a bit of the past week practising his flying, partly so he could actually teach her and partly to try and avoid making a fool of himself."). Again, replace the hyphin with a period, and it should work.
Keep writing Tammy fanfics, you're so good at it!
6/23/2011 c5 Mia
Just be careful of run-on sentances. Your last paragraph was made up of only two sentance, both of which went on for some time. It'll sound better if you break them up - like saying
"She realised he must have been sitting there all night, ever since she had fallen asleep. She wanted to tell him that he didn't have to, but she fell asleep again before she could form the words."
Instead of
"She realised he must have been sitting there all night, ever since she had fallen asleep, and she wanted to tell him that he didn't have to, but she fell asleep again before she could form the words."
Other than that, (once again) excellant work!
Just be careful of run-on sentances. Your last paragraph was made up of only two sentance, both of which went on for some time. It'll sound better if you break them up - like saying
"She realised he must have been sitting there all night, ever since she had fallen asleep. She wanted to tell him that he didn't have to, but she fell asleep again before she could form the words."
Instead of
"She realised he must have been sitting there all night, ever since she had fallen asleep, and she wanted to tell him that he didn't have to, but she fell asleep again before she could form the words."
Other than that, (once again) excellant work!
6/23/2011 c4 Mia
Reviewing again! The only complaint I have about this chapter is that you never mention where they are - or why Alanna wants to see him (not that it's really important). Other that that, great!
Reviewing again! The only complaint I have about this chapter is that you never mention where they are - or why Alanna wants to see him (not that it's really important). Other that that, great!