for Tomas Sturm, Imperial Commissar5/11/2010 c1 
8Numbuh six-sixtysix
Well, as intro chapters go, that wasn't half bad. Granted Ciaphas Cain's would be pretty damn good, but... Wait, how in the Emperor's name did he convince the supply people to let him have both a hellpistol AND a powerfist? Damn, I want to see more now...
8Numbuh six-sixtysixWell, as intro chapters go, that wasn't half bad. Granted Ciaphas Cain's would be pretty damn good, but... Wait, how in the Emperor's name did he convince the supply people to let him have both a hellpistol AND a powerfist? Damn, I want to see more now...
12/14/2009 c1 7Madork Gunna
From: Madork Gunna
To: Da Boss
I likes da stury, can da boyz come an bash sumezing too? I wanna have dat dakkabox! An is dere gonna be shume otha gits frum Toyhamma?
7Madork GunnaFrom: Madork Gunna
To: Da Boss
I likes da stury, can da boyz come an bash sumezing too? I wanna have dat dakkabox! An is dere gonna be shume otha gits frum Toyhamma?
11/17/2009 c1 1Silvertie
Lol penlights.
Very nice, this Commissar seems to be a nice mix of manly and commanding; however, Ciaphas Cain is no hero. He can be likened to a Rincewind of the 41st century- he survives by running like hell and heroing by accident; so I'm not sure how Sturm can be a student of such without being a wuss.
Other than that, let's see some more asskicking.
~ M-O-A-R ~
1SilvertieLol penlights.
Very nice, this Commissar seems to be a nice mix of manly and commanding; however, Ciaphas Cain is no hero. He can be likened to a Rincewind of the 41st century- he survives by running like hell and heroing by accident; so I'm not sure how Sturm can be a student of such without being a wuss.
Other than that, let's see some more asskicking.
~ M-O-A-R ~