8/12/2011 c1 Amber0522
can u update plz!

9/15/2010 c8 4Masked Mirage
If you have ever read The Hunger Games series, then the feel of this fic is the same way I felt when I was reading those books. I can't explain it, but it had that sense of foreboding, and the war was quite similar. Your fic had a few mistakes but overall it was very, very well-written. A definite fave. :)

8/4/2010 c1 Ookami-Lover
sad but great chapter! keep up the great work!

I wonder if Ash is really dead...because they only did find his hat (right?).

7/25/2010 c1 5pokemonSLR
lol i love this fanfic

interesting-

the chapter title was from the prophesy in pkmn2000 'in to thine hands,bring together all 3,treasure conbined tame the beast of the sea'

i should know every word to that movie-the best movie!

i like the sound of this.

hang on a sec

i swear when iread the manga, red(whom ash is based of) went missig and yellow found his hat/or was that somethig else

and yellow was trained by green(whom gary is based off) to defeat the elite4 lol

but i do love your plot aura baby!

7/24/2010 c8 8CJWrites
I love your story and how it is so realistic but i also think it's too realistic. i guess i dont know what to think. well i dont like how you killed off so many people. well yeah so thats it i guess keep writing

7/24/2010 c8 TheFlutterbyEffect
Wow... This is pure brilliant! I've just read all eight chapters in one go — which is stupid cause now I want to read more :P — and it's faultless. The characters aren't OOC and the fluff is there in the right places. Cassidy and Butch were hilarious and I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen with Delia as well as more pokeshipping! Please update soon and don't give this fic up!

7/10/2010 c7 1trex abby
This story is great. Keep it up! :)