for John's Day Off5/10/2010 c6 
7underthedarkness
Please update this *gets on knees and begs*
I looove the story and check bak everyday but alas you have not yet graced us wit the next chapter button!
*Pulls at hair and runs in circles*
I'm makin' teh world turn!
Roxas walks in and smacks me*
Thats Demyx's job...
So I'm a gonna go crazy waiting while you dont update!
Please this is such a good story its a bit of a sad waste
*puppy saix face*
7underthedarknessPlease update this *gets on knees and begs*
I looove the story and check bak everyday but alas you have not yet graced us wit the next chapter button!
*Pulls at hair and runs in circles*
I'm makin' teh world turn!
Roxas walks in and smacks me*
Thats Demyx's job...
So I'm a gonna go crazy waiting while you dont update!
Please this is such a good story its a bit of a sad waste
*puppy saix face*
4/10/2010 c3 underthedarkness
Wow clean freak much? I love this story! he reminds me a little of mr. monk I liked that show too v.v too bad it got cancelled ohh well the world keeps on spinnin and fans like us write fanfiction.
I love this story! And that song is good too!
Wow john has some boring taste in book...
THANK YOU!
Wow clean freak much? I love this story! he reminds me a little of mr. monk I liked that show too v.v too bad it got cancelled ohh well the world keeps on spinnin and fans like us write fanfiction.
I love this story! And that song is good too!
Wow john has some boring taste in book...
THANK YOU!
11/27/2009 c6 18becoafamu
oh my god. drugged-up john is the best kind of john thus far. :D his inner monologue is just... so ridiculous. my favorite part was when he addressed leon directly as 'mister maple' and everyone was all 'zuh wtf?' nice.
my other favorite was The Advanced Compendium of Professional Literature, Chapter 37 – The Throws of Passion, a book i wish existed, except it should be 'the throes of passion,' not throws. :) SPELLING NAZI STRIKES AGAIN. i once had a role in a play where i was "gretel the grammar guardian." no, seriously, that was me. i wore overalls that said 'gretel' on the front. and a beanie.
NICE STORY. KEEP WRITING. :D
18becoafamuoh my god. drugged-up john is the best kind of john thus far. :D his inner monologue is just... so ridiculous. my favorite part was when he addressed leon directly as 'mister maple' and everyone was all 'zuh wtf?' nice.
my other favorite was The Advanced Compendium of Professional Literature, Chapter 37 – The Throws of Passion, a book i wish existed, except it should be 'the throes of passion,' not throws. :) SPELLING NAZI STRIKES AGAIN. i once had a role in a play where i was "gretel the grammar guardian." no, seriously, that was me. i wore overalls that said 'gretel' on the front. and a beanie.
NICE STORY. KEEP WRITING. :D
11/8/2009 c5 becoafamu
LOL tifa is so full of crap. i love it. i want to know who shouted 'frozen water'- was that sakuya? deactivated cannons was probably lucca, she likes that sort of thing- castlevania leon would say mummies- tifa probably said library, and leon said mundane items. so yeah, i bet sakuya said frozen water. mm hmm. :)
there's a really good trick for getting those indentations out of carpets- put an ice cube on the spot, and then while it's melting, use a comb to pull the fibers back up! (in my other life, i watch a lot of home and garden television. john and i would be totes bffs, LOL.) i vote, please have iris explain to john how to get indentations out of carpet, and then john will fall in love with her, except she's a mentally unbalanced robot. that sounds like a swell subplot. absolutely swell. ROFL.
OH NO JOHN LOST HIS CEREAL! he probably doesn't believe in the five second rule either, poor guy.
nice chapter ;) adios~
LOL tifa is so full of crap. i love it. i want to know who shouted 'frozen water'- was that sakuya? deactivated cannons was probably lucca, she likes that sort of thing- castlevania leon would say mummies- tifa probably said library, and leon said mundane items. so yeah, i bet sakuya said frozen water. mm hmm. :)
there's a really good trick for getting those indentations out of carpets- put an ice cube on the spot, and then while it's melting, use a comb to pull the fibers back up! (in my other life, i watch a lot of home and garden television. john and i would be totes bffs, LOL.) i vote, please have iris explain to john how to get indentations out of carpet, and then john will fall in love with her, except she's a mentally unbalanced robot. that sounds like a swell subplot. absolutely swell. ROFL.
OH NO JOHN LOST HIS CEREAL! he probably doesn't believe in the five second rule either, poor guy.
nice chapter ;) adios~
11/5/2009 c4 becoafamu
first can i just say that i LOVE the way you had john categorize everyone by color so that it's easy to tell who's talking when, even though he doesn't know their names? fabulous. and i love the colors you picked too. A BOY AFTER MY OWN HEART :D
a quick glance at your summary hath told me that miss reddish-gray is sakuya and mr. blue is another leon- i have no idea who either of those folks are if you'd like to tell me. and that means miss purple must be lucca! lucca is pretty much the coolest. love your character choices. i hope 'the mistress' is someone absolutely ridiculous. but i'm sure she will be :) i vote iris from megaman X. HA!
haha i love your little passage about how terrifying and violent the bible is. too true. and yet they somehow manage to make it so boring? also, i would like to name a cat norbert fingleberry. i have a pretty long list of hypothetical cats.
MORE FANFIC PLZ. hope your finals are going well. :D
first can i just say that i LOVE the way you had john categorize everyone by color so that it's easy to tell who's talking when, even though he doesn't know their names? fabulous. and i love the colors you picked too. A BOY AFTER MY OWN HEART :D
a quick glance at your summary hath told me that miss reddish-gray is sakuya and mr. blue is another leon- i have no idea who either of those folks are if you'd like to tell me. and that means miss purple must be lucca! lucca is pretty much the coolest. love your character choices. i hope 'the mistress' is someone absolutely ridiculous. but i'm sure she will be :) i vote iris from megaman X. HA!
haha i love your little passage about how terrifying and violent the bible is. too true. and yet they somehow manage to make it so boring? also, i would like to name a cat norbert fingleberry. i have a pretty long list of hypothetical cats.
MORE FANFIC PLZ. hope your finals are going well. :D
11/5/2009 c3 becoafamu
LOL it was tifa! now i feel clever. i want to know why leon left a waffle in john's house. if this plot point is not resolved POST HASTE, i will be incredibly disappointed.
your book titles continue to make me crack up. 'joey the sparrow goes shopping for laundry soap' sounds like it would've been my favorite childhood story had i access to it, narrowly beating out the movie 'tremors' starring kevin bacon, my actual childhood fave. LOL.
i also love how leon address john as 'guy.' still no word on my imprisoned deity theory though. MAYBE THEY WANT JOHN'S VIRGINITY?
LOL it was tifa! now i feel clever. i want to know why leon left a waffle in john's house. if this plot point is not resolved POST HASTE, i will be incredibly disappointed.
your book titles continue to make me crack up. 'joey the sparrow goes shopping for laundry soap' sounds like it would've been my favorite childhood story had i access to it, narrowly beating out the movie 'tremors' starring kevin bacon, my actual childhood fave. LOL.
i also love how leon address john as 'guy.' still no word on my imprisoned deity theory though. MAYBE THEY WANT JOHN'S VIRGINITY?
11/5/2009 c2 becoafamu
oh my god. oh. my god. i lol'ed. and yay plot! you do the suspense very well :)
my current theory is that 'john' is really some sort of all-powerful deity who was captured and inserted into the most ordinary human body possible so as to stay hidden. and now, these people are trying to capture him so they can release the god within and use his powers to take over the crossover universe.
we shall see if future chapters prove my theory correct. :D
things that made me LOL for realz:
'John was forced to abandon all trains of inner thought completely and throw himself out onto the harsh gravel of spontaneous speech. It hurt.'
and also your book titles. 'the unillustrated edition' is what killed me. i'm dead now. OOPS.
i was not able to tell from the description who the tall black-haired woman is- i thought at first she might be tifa, but she's quite clearly not. if she's from a fandom i'm supposed to know, i'm gonna feel stupid.
also, amen to john's fear of tall women- d00dz being afraid of tall women is my favorite. too bad i'm only 5'2" :P the metric equivalent of which i only know as "very short." curse the US and its random measurement system!
ON TO CHAPTER 3~
oh my god. oh. my god. i lol'ed. and yay plot! you do the suspense very well :)
my current theory is that 'john' is really some sort of all-powerful deity who was captured and inserted into the most ordinary human body possible so as to stay hidden. and now, these people are trying to capture him so they can release the god within and use his powers to take over the crossover universe.
we shall see if future chapters prove my theory correct. :D
things that made me LOL for realz:
'John was forced to abandon all trains of inner thought completely and throw himself out onto the harsh gravel of spontaneous speech. It hurt.'
and also your book titles. 'the unillustrated edition' is what killed me. i'm dead now. OOPS.
i was not able to tell from the description who the tall black-haired woman is- i thought at first she might be tifa, but she's quite clearly not. if she's from a fandom i'm supposed to know, i'm gonna feel stupid.
also, amen to john's fear of tall women- d00dz being afraid of tall women is my favorite. too bad i'm only 5'2" :P the metric equivalent of which i only know as "very short." curse the US and its random measurement system!
ON TO CHAPTER 3~
10/28/2009 c1 becoafamu
HEY LOOK YOU WROTE A FANFIC YAY!
can i just first say that your writing style is hilarious? i can totally see why you'd read some of the ** i've written and be like 'lol that's just like me!'
i have known people like mr. john. how sad is that? and i notice that this is in the 'misc games and game crossovers' section- which games is this going to be a crossover of? am i not allowed to know? i have no guesses, if you were going to ask.
you may be wondering why nothing is capitalized. it is because my shift key is broken. too many capital letters, and well, now you get nothin'.
why the f is john reading the scarlet letter? i mean, it's not the most terribly interesting of books, but still too interesting for this guy, i think. LOL. i mean, OMG, the extra-marital sex! TEH SEX! one would think that would be too much for him to handle xD
OMG I WANT TO KNOW WHERE THE WAFFLE CAME FROM.
please continue. ;)
HEY LOOK YOU WROTE A FANFIC YAY!
can i just first say that your writing style is hilarious? i can totally see why you'd read some of the ** i've written and be like 'lol that's just like me!'
i have known people like mr. john. how sad is that? and i notice that this is in the 'misc games and game crossovers' section- which games is this going to be a crossover of? am i not allowed to know? i have no guesses, if you were going to ask.
you may be wondering why nothing is capitalized. it is because my shift key is broken. too many capital letters, and well, now you get nothin'.
why the f is john reading the scarlet letter? i mean, it's not the most terribly interesting of books, but still too interesting for this guy, i think. LOL. i mean, OMG, the extra-marital sex! TEH SEX! one would think that would be too much for him to handle xD
OMG I WANT TO KNOW WHERE THE WAFFLE CAME FROM.
please continue. ;)