for Ugly12/26/2009 c1 
8Chokopoppo
So I wasn't going to review, but then I found out that you have one review. This ** me off, seeing as NatsuXGiro is the BEST DAMN COUPLING IN K.G. EVER IN ALL OF TIME.
Ahem.
Anyway.
This one's cute, which is a bit different than what you normally do with this pairing. Usually, they're gloomier than this, which is usually my thing, but I think I like it better this way. I'm totally not repeating myself over and over again. Shut up.
I like the concept, and the writing style is very nice. If anything, I would say to give Natsumi a little more emotion in her questions. You know, he calls her homeworld ugly, and she's all, "Oh. So...does that mean you think that pekoponians are ugly?" You know. That sort of thing.
I love these little shorts. Keep up the good work! ^^
~The Choko
8ChokopoppoSo I wasn't going to review, but then I found out that you have one review. This ** me off, seeing as NatsuXGiro is the BEST DAMN COUPLING IN K.G. EVER IN ALL OF TIME.
Ahem.
Anyway.
This one's cute, which is a bit different than what you normally do with this pairing. Usually, they're gloomier than this, which is usually my thing, but I think I like it better this way. I'm totally not repeating myself over and over again. Shut up.
I like the concept, and the writing style is very nice. If anything, I would say to give Natsumi a little more emotion in her questions. You know, he calls her homeworld ugly, and she's all, "Oh. So...does that mean you think that pekoponians are ugly?" You know. That sort of thing.
I love these little shorts. Keep up the good work! ^^
~The Choko
10/31/2009 c1 14Yu-Gi-Ah 2.0
HAPPY HALLOWEEN XD! I Know I already commented on these on Livejournal but I had to write again ^_^ Totally adorable fic *giggles* It's so cute when Giroro blushes ^_^.
14Yu-Gi-Ah 2.0HAPPY HALLOWEEN XD! I Know I already commented on these on Livejournal but I had to write again ^_^ Totally adorable fic *giggles* It's so cute when Giroro blushes ^_^.