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6tsukuyomi.sakurachi
*sob* Awww.. And here I thought this story would end up in tragedy. *wipes a tear* I'm so glad that they lived a happily ever after nonetheless. Though you didn't really finish the mystery of what happened to the secret organization of Snake. Since they are somewhat a branch organization of the black organization, does that mean that they too, are already taken down? Well, I guess it's good if it ends that way though I am a bit sad that Heiji had a little bit of bad old life. It's a bit sad that he isn't the same man he used to be. I just can't really imagine him to be wallowing in self-pity over the death of his wife. Oh well, thanks for the fanfic. It was really awesome and I had a lot of fun reading it even though there are times when the internet wouldn't just agree with you and sometimes I can't connect or access the webpage. You did a great job in writing this fanfic. Keep up the good work! *thumbs up*
6tsukuyomi.sakurachi*sob* Awww.. And here I thought this story would end up in tragedy. *wipes a tear* I'm so glad that they lived a happily ever after nonetheless. Though you didn't really finish the mystery of what happened to the secret organization of Snake. Since they are somewhat a branch organization of the black organization, does that mean that they too, are already taken down? Well, I guess it's good if it ends that way though I am a bit sad that Heiji had a little bit of bad old life. It's a bit sad that he isn't the same man he used to be. I just can't really imagine him to be wallowing in self-pity over the death of his wife. Oh well, thanks for the fanfic. It was really awesome and I had a lot of fun reading it even though there are times when the internet wouldn't just agree with you and sometimes I can't connect or access the webpage. You did a great job in writing this fanfic. Keep up the good work! *thumbs up*
12/26/2012 c30 Midnight1906
That's a nice way of putting "and they all lived happily ever after or has long as that lasted"!
That's a nice way of putting "and they all lived happily ever after or has long as that lasted"!
12/5/2012 c30 Guest
i really really really really... loved it! though i wonder if u had to get shinichi blind. mabe he could be blind but as time passes, panadora gradually healls him... i just dont get how he cant die from suffocation but can get blinded.
i really really really really... loved it! though i wonder if u had to get shinichi blind. mabe he could be blind but as time passes, panadora gradually healls him... i just dont get how he cant die from suffocation but can get blinded.
11/23/2012 c27
3Ever-the-Phantom
This story is so exciting! But...I thought Shinichi already told Ran he was Conan in Chap 16 Part 3, so I'm confused...
3Ever-the-PhantomThis story is so exciting! But...I thought Shinichi already told Ran he was Conan in Chap 16 Part 3, so I'm confused...
11/13/2012 c30
6Athina Dark-Angel of Death
Kind of would have liked to have seen Hakuba's freak out from them revieling everything, but oh well. good job
6Athina Dark-Angel of DeathKind of would have liked to have seen Hakuba's freak out from them revieling everything, but oh well. good job
11/11/2012 c30
13PureVampirePriestess
... - that was my mind. You blew it. My final though when I read the last line of the story was 'oh my gosh. It's done... Oh my gosh!' And then I couldn't think straight for a good five minutes. The end. Just- I don't like endings. *pouts* it was a fantastical story and I loved it to death, but I'm sad that it ended. Though I guess I should be happy that it had such a wonderful ending. Well. I'm sure ill be reading more of your stories in the future. On to more stories at an ungodly hour!
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13PureVampirePriestess... - that was my mind. You blew it. My final though when I read the last line of the story was 'oh my gosh. It's done... Oh my gosh!' And then I couldn't think straight for a good five minutes. The end. Just- I don't like endings. *pouts* it was a fantastical story and I loved it to death, but I'm sad that it ended. Though I guess I should be happy that it had such a wonderful ending. Well. I'm sure ill be reading more of your stories in the future. On to more stories at an ungodly hour!
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11/10/2012 c30
8Mai-chan63
TTATT awwww, I'm soooooo gonna miss this story! And yes I loved the ending toox, it was really sweet . happily waiting for your other stories!
8Mai-chan63TTATT awwww, I'm soooooo gonna miss this story! And yes I loved the ending toox, it was really sweet . happily waiting for your other stories!
11/9/2012 c30
14Shara Raizel
i thought that this was a rather interesting story. I'm going to miss reading it. :) looking forward to reading whatever you write next!
14Shara Raizeli thought that this was a rather interesting story. I'm going to miss reading it. :) looking forward to reading whatever you write next!
10/30/2012 c29 Shara Raizel
I really liked this chapter. It was tense and dramatic and i loved the confrontation with Gin. I look forward to reading the next chapter! Hope you can post it soon! :)
I really liked this chapter. It was tense and dramatic and i loved the confrontation with Gin. I look forward to reading the next chapter! Hope you can post it soon! :)
10/19/2012 c28 Shara Raizel
I really liked this chapter. I was a little confused though when you made the jump to the hospital room. I want to know what happened! :P
I really liked this chapter. I was a little confused though when you made the jump to the hospital room. I want to know what happened! :P
10/16/2012 c27
17Princess Rayen
You know...I'm pretty sad I've caught up...it's really good thus far.
17Princess RayenYou know...I'm pretty sad I've caught up...it's really good thus far.
10/16/2012 c15 Princess Rayen
If I haven't started reading a story from when the first chapter was published I usually won't review until the last chapter updated. In this case, I had to because this chapter was so amazing, it had me on edge and the ending was explosive. It was a great feeling.
Now another thing, I don't know if English is your native language or not but either way all the way through I've found multiple spelling and grammar mistakes. That's one thing I can't let stand, especially for a plot like this. Your plot is amazing but I'd love it even more if you'd read back and fix your mistakes; spelling, punctuation, tenses, syntax, all of these essential things make a story great and more. If you need someone to help you with this, I'll be happy to oblige. Otherwise, you're doing great! Keep it up.
If I haven't started reading a story from when the first chapter was published I usually won't review until the last chapter updated. In this case, I had to because this chapter was so amazing, it had me on edge and the ending was explosive. It was a great feeling.
Now another thing, I don't know if English is your native language or not but either way all the way through I've found multiple spelling and grammar mistakes. That's one thing I can't let stand, especially for a plot like this. Your plot is amazing but I'd love it even more if you'd read back and fix your mistakes; spelling, punctuation, tenses, syntax, all of these essential things make a story great and more. If you need someone to help you with this, I'll be happy to oblige. Otherwise, you're doing great! Keep it up.
10/14/2012 c27
14Shara Raizel
I must not be getting e-mails letting me know that this story of yours is getting updated anymore. :P
Anyway GREAT chapters. LOVE the drama. I hope kaito got to shinichi in time. i can't wait for your next update. I NEED to find out what happens next. _
14Shara RaizelI must not be getting e-mails letting me know that this story of yours is getting updated anymore. :P
Anyway GREAT chapters. LOVE the drama. I hope kaito got to shinichi in time. i can't wait for your next update. I NEED to find out what happens next. _
