for The Cullens go to Westchester4/9 c4 Guest
love tihs story
love tihs story
6/1/2011 c4
5LovelyWeirdo
I love it.
Remeber dont let the PC's revenge get the cullens.
I just love twilight.
5LovelyWeirdoI love it.
Remeber dont let the PC's revenge get the cullens.
I just love twilight.
2/6/2011 c4 Suna
KYAAA! i cant wait for the next chapter! YAAAY! -takes out bag of marshmellows- YUMMILICOUS! WHOOO! RAISIN PARTAY! -THROWS A BUNCHA MARSHMELLOWS INTO THE AIR- WHOO! anyways, great story!
KYAAA! i cant wait for the next chapter! YAAAY! -takes out bag of marshmellows- YUMMILICOUS! WHOOO! RAISIN PARTAY! -THROWS A BUNCHA MARSHMELLOWS INTO THE AIR- WHOO! anyways, great story!
12/26/2010 c4 consideritdeleted
Great story! Maybe some more Renesmee POVs and an Alice POV. Please :)
Great story! Maybe some more Renesmee POVs and an Alice POV. Please :)
7/11/2010 c1 felican
your writing isn't bad, but i dislike spinoffs in general. im just writing this so you wont come to my house and rape my keyboard by forcing me to write this
your writing isn't bad, but i dislike spinoffs in general. im just writing this so you wont come to my house and rape my keyboard by forcing me to write this
7/7/2010 c4 Guest
Other Cullen girls pov's and read my story the clique visits forks for ideas about revenge =)
Other Cullen girls pov's and read my story the clique visits forks for ideas about revenge =)
6/26/2010 c4 Pumpkin507
Did this get discontinued?
Because the last update was in December...
(Well, that's what it says)
PLEASE UPDATE!
Did this get discontinued?
Because the last update was in December...
(Well, that's what it says)
PLEASE UPDATE!
4/16/2010 c4 Ella
Your writing is quite good, however try and describe your surroundings more. Also try and work on people's facial expressions and actions rather than clothing. Good job :)
Your writing is quite good, however try and describe your surroundings more. Also try and work on people's facial expressions and actions rather than clothing. Good job :)
1/10/2010 c4 U
omg ur awesome wtf u need to right slot more lol u should check out silver angel dusts storys no spaces
omg ur awesome wtf u need to right slot more lol u should check out silver angel dusts storys no spaces
