for Monkey Gallimaufry2/6 c1 Lorrie the Ninja Elf
LOL He doesn't know what she's going to do to the super robot tomorrow when he pushes it too far.
LOL He doesn't know what she's going to do to the super robot tomorrow when he pushes it too far.
1/13/2011 c8 
63DarkFlameOfTheMonkey
I've happily explored this collection, and the last especially made me chuckle. It's been a while since I've read SRMTHFG stuff, but your work has made me genuinely curious about the characters again. What made me smile in the last chapter was the subtlety at the end. You describe the characteristics of the elements, keeping far away from names and characters themselves...yes, yes, so forth...and then, "Aha!" ^^
63DarkFlameOfTheMonkeyI've happily explored this collection, and the last especially made me chuckle. It's been a while since I've read SRMTHFG stuff, but your work has made me genuinely curious about the characters again. What made me smile in the last chapter was the subtlety at the end. You describe the characteristics of the elements, keeping far away from names and characters themselves...yes, yes, so forth...and then, "Aha!" ^^
11/18/2010 c8 17Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
A agree with your comparison, but the last line is lacking so how, it reads funny.
Water would freeze over (without the warmth to heat it?). (meaning Antauri would become cold without her (or even the others)
And here come ANOTHER plot bunny. I love your fics, they give me good ideas.
17Kosaten no KokinatsuyosaA agree with your comparison, but the last line is lacking so how, it reads funny.
Water would freeze over (without the warmth to heat it?). (meaning Antauri would become cold without her (or even the others)
And here come ANOTHER plot bunny. I love your fics, they give me good ideas.
11/18/2010 c5 1Glass lady
This is epic win. My two fav. characters having a funny little moment. In character and hilarious. Great job.
Are you still taking requests? If so, could you have Chinmay? (I thinks that's what they call the pairing. Correct me if I'm wrong.) I would also be interested in some pre-show Mandarin/Otto friendship.
1Glass ladyThis is epic win. My two fav. characters having a funny little moment. In character and hilarious. Great job.
Are you still taking requests? If so, could you have Chinmay? (I thinks that's what they call the pairing. Correct me if I'm wrong.) I would also be interested in some pre-show Mandarin/Otto friendship.
11/15/2010 c8 13Sniggyfrumps
Yes, a lot of people like to put Antauri and Nova as opposites. They aren't, really, as you point out here. This is short, but cute. ^^
13SniggyfrumpsYes, a lot of people like to put Antauri and Nova as opposites. They aren't, really, as you point out here. This is short, but cute. ^^
8/8/2010 c5 6Matanzo-El-Mono
Finally! Took me a while to find this. Actually, it took me a lot longer to get up the energy to find this.
I saw Sniggyfrumps' comic of this, and I felt it necessary to see the source material. As expected, I was not disappointed.
Despite one or two inconsequential differences, both versions of this were great.
Nice work!
6Matanzo-El-MonoFinally! Took me a while to find this. Actually, it took me a lot longer to get up the energy to find this.
I saw Sniggyfrumps' comic of this, and I felt it necessary to see the source material. As expected, I was not disappointed.
Despite one or two inconsequential differences, both versions of this were great.
Nice work!
5/31/2010 c7 13Sniggyfrumps
I logged in just so I could review this. For your information. ;)
It's so short but also very, very sweet. OOC? Well, you didn't make Nova all flirty and blushy - just wondering where the hell Antuari learned to dance. it makes me LOL to think he and Mandarin took dance lessons on Paralladoll. LOL, I say.
The 'he didn't cheat once' line just makes me smile because I am instantly reminded of the Cheating at the Pinball Machine moment from Big Lug.
13SniggyfrumpsI logged in just so I could review this. For your information. ;)
It's so short but also very, very sweet. OOC? Well, you didn't make Nova all flirty and blushy - just wondering where the hell Antuari learned to dance. it makes me LOL to think he and Mandarin took dance lessons on Paralladoll. LOL, I say.
The 'he didn't cheat once' line just makes me smile because I am instantly reminded of the Cheating at the Pinball Machine moment from Big Lug.
5/28/2010 c7 3Cancerous Galaxy
Aww, this was cute. Can you give me the link for the pic; I really want to see it
3Cancerous GalaxyAww, this was cute. Can you give me the link for the pic; I really want to see it
5/28/2010 c7 10beautybelle300256
Aw, wow. I'm not much for Antova, but this really pulled at my heart strings. Very nicely done.
As for critique, the only thing I have a problem with is more of a stylistic issue. I've noticed that whenever you talk about two people in your stories you almost always call them a "duo" which brings to mind more comic book hero images. Here, it would read more poetically/sensually/romantically if you simply said "two" (or even "couple") in the last line.
10beautybelle300256Aw, wow. I'm not much for Antova, but this really pulled at my heart strings. Very nicely done.
As for critique, the only thing I have a problem with is more of a stylistic issue. I've noticed that whenever you talk about two people in your stories you almost always call them a "duo" which brings to mind more comic book hero images. Here, it would read more poetically/sensually/romantically if you simply said "two" (or even "couple") in the last line.
5/27/2010 c6 17Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
Interesting, I've never really thought too much about Scrapperton. It's a bit short, but still good reading.
17Kosaten no KokinatsuyosaInteresting, I've never really thought too much about Scrapperton. It's a bit short, but still good reading.