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33BiblioMatsuri
"Intolerable Light". Timmy bursts into flames when he goes nuts. Foreshadowing? And wow, that was scary.
On a completely unrelated note, I kept imagining this in the style of old Nightwish. (If you've never heard of that band, please just ignore that.)
33BiblioMatsuri"Intolerable Light". Timmy bursts into flames when he goes nuts. Foreshadowing? And wow, that was scary.
On a completely unrelated note, I kept imagining this in the style of old Nightwish. (If you've never heard of that band, please just ignore that.)
5/12 c3 BiblioMatsuri
Ah, so that's why people started calling him that. (Well, that specific phrase had to come from somewhere. It's not like anyone used it when he was alive.)
Ah, so that's why people started calling him that. (Well, that specific phrase had to come from somewhere. It's not like anyone used it when he was alive.)
5/12 c1 BiblioMatsuri
Child born thrice? The first thing I think of is "reincarnation" - but who (and what) might he have been in previous lives, and why didn't he die at the end of them?
Child born thrice? The first thing I think of is "reincarnation" - but who (and what) might he have been in previous lives, and why didn't he die at the end of them?
3/5/2010 c4 30unknown20troper
Awesome!
Your poems are wonderful, and the phrasing, the use of words is perfect, poetic.
30unknown20troperAwesome!
Your poems are wonderful, and the phrasing, the use of words is perfect, poetic.
1/22/2010 c1 36Stephy825
The poem is really deep...and in that way it confuses me. But it really nice...and deep. O_O;
36Stephy825The poem is really deep...and in that way it confuses me. But it really nice...and deep. O_O;
11/23/2009 c2 55Linzerj
Awesome poems, Digi-Dolphin. I like them alot. So...Timmy is cast from Life and from Death, and the Ghost Zone doesn't want him, just like they don't want Danny...I get it now. This rocks, great job!
55LinzerjAwesome poems, Digi-Dolphin. I like them alot. So...Timmy is cast from Life and from Death, and the Ghost Zone doesn't want him, just like they don't want Danny...I get it now. This rocks, great job!
11/19/2009 c2 1GodOfStorms
I like this poem it gives me some goosebumps but It does leave me a little sad as tells me that Timmy is never going to get his life back. :( Poor Timmy, I hope things are better than the poem portrays. Keep up for good work.
P.s Timmy's life is he merely bound to life by magic or is there something more keeping him bound
1GodOfStormsI like this poem it gives me some goosebumps but It does leave me a little sad as tells me that Timmy is never going to get his life back. :( Poor Timmy, I hope things are better than the poem portrays. Keep up for good work.
P.s Timmy's life is he merely bound to life by magic or is there something more keeping him bound
11/17/2009 c1 6Mistress Panda
That's interesting. Timmy is actually a changeling? Or is it the fact that when he got his fairies, he was reborn again to a different person?
And if that's the case that he is a changeling, would all of the kids with fairy godparents be changelings? I wouldn't be surprised. It would explain how some fairies resemble their godchildren.
Either way, this was a well-written poem that flowed rather nicely. (T_T I can't write poetry to save my life...) And I look forward to the next installment of Burning Black.
P.S. Seriously, you deserve more reviews than what you're getting. ^_^
6Mistress PandaThat's interesting. Timmy is actually a changeling? Or is it the fact that when he got his fairies, he was reborn again to a different person?
And if that's the case that he is a changeling, would all of the kids with fairy godparents be changelings? I wouldn't be surprised. It would explain how some fairies resemble their godchildren.
Either way, this was a well-written poem that flowed rather nicely. (T_T I can't write poetry to save my life...) And I look forward to the next installment of Burning Black.
P.S. Seriously, you deserve more reviews than what you're getting. ^_^
11/14/2009 c1 5Theturtlesketchbook
DUDE that there is deep! Made my lil bro cry (And I added in a scary story involing this...but still it made him cry)
5TheturtlesketchbookDUDE that there is deep! Made my lil bro cry (And I added in a scary story involing this...but still it made him cry)
11/14/2009 c1 CursedRoses
I'm going to say... I'm very confused. I'm never really good at these sort of things. It's a very intriguing and well written poem, however. Maybe this will all be explained in some new chapters? ;)
I'm going to say... I'm very confused. I'm never really good at these sort of things. It's a very intriguing and well written poem, however. Maybe this will all be explained in some new chapters? ;)
11/14/2009 c1 17K. C. Ellison
According to Ancient Mythology, fairies were believed to steal human babies from their families and replace them with changelings (fairy babies).
17K. C. EllisonAccording to Ancient Mythology, fairies were believed to steal human babies from their families and replace them with changelings (fairy babies).