for Walking Wounded11/13/2012 c15 
4Lotuskiss
I absolutely love you story! Please continue, it's good to see the Dark Angel characters, alive, well and in the flesh. So to speak anyway.
4LotuskissI absolutely love you story! Please continue, it's good to see the Dark Angel characters, alive, well and in the flesh. So to speak anyway.
10/24/2012 c15 Calistra
Love the story and lloking forward to more.
Love the story and lloking forward to more.
8/11/2012 c15 LucyK9
This is absolutely wonderful! I sure hope you haven't shelved this project - the story is addicting. Thanks!
This is absolutely wonderful! I sure hope you haven't shelved this project - the story is addicting. Thanks!
8/7/2012 c15 ssnyder9
I just read Exit Strategy and I have continued on to this story and your doing a great job...I could not stop reading! I cannot wait to see where your go with this story..thank you
I just read Exit Strategy and I have continued on to this story and your doing a great job...I could not stop reading! I cannot wait to see where your go with this story..thank you
8/5/2012 c15 17afickleflakes
I do hope you update soon. (: do your best! It has been a wonderful ride so far (:
17afickleflakesI do hope you update soon. (: do your best! It has been a wonderful ride so far (:
8/3/2012 c15 Guest
Please write more soon. I am glad that you updated despite the length.
Please write more soon. I am glad that you updated despite the length.
6/26/2012 c12 5ShadowMoonDancer
Hey, not sure if you've edited Exit Strategy yet but a suggestion if you have not. Put in something to show a story brake in the last couple of chapters at least, if not all of them. It makes it hard to read when the story is skipping around from person to person but there isn't anything to tell the reader that it isn't the same two people/situation/scene.
Also I've noticed slight problems with the lingo several of the characters use. As you write read those sections aloud and try to match the lingo they use in the show. It helps with me as I write some of my own stuff.
5ShadowMoonDancerHey, not sure if you've edited Exit Strategy yet but a suggestion if you have not. Put in something to show a story brake in the last couple of chapters at least, if not all of them. It makes it hard to read when the story is skipping around from person to person but there isn't anything to tell the reader that it isn't the same two people/situation/scene.
Also I've noticed slight problems with the lingo several of the characters use. As you write read those sections aloud and try to match the lingo they use in the show. It helps with me as I write some of my own stuff.
6/14/2012 c15 timetowaste247
Interesting commentary from Dix's perspective. I like how you had him try to sort out what parts of the gossip is true via commonalties.
Interesting commentary from Dix's perspective. I like how you had him try to sort out what parts of the gossip is true via commonalties.
6/13/2012 c15 1pielover62
Great chapter even though it was awfully short. I'm just glad you're still working on the story. I'll be here to read it as long as it takes.
1pielover62Great chapter even though it was awfully short. I'm just glad you're still working on the story. I'll be here to read it as long as it takes.
6/12/2012 c15 452max
I am happy that you finally updated! Granted like you said it wasnt much, but hopefully you will update soon!
This update was like a tease, so hopefully what you are going to have happen next is updated on here soon.
I am happy that you finally updated! Granted like you said it wasnt much, but hopefully you will update soon!
This update was like a tease, so hopefully what you are going to have happen next is updated on here soon.
6/12/2012 c15 Windfiredva
While I'm sorry this was so short, I'm ever so glad you haven't given up on the story. I eagerly await the next chapter.
While I'm sorry this was so short, I'm ever so glad you haven't given up on the story. I eagerly await the next chapter.
9/4/2011 c14 10Konoha's White Fang
Oh my God...this is, this is remarkable. This whole story is just brilliant and I seriously can't wait to read the next chapter but I do hope that Alec is just bluffing about them being dead. Because if he actually killed them...I don't know how Mole would react but I'm sure that it's not gonna be pretty.
Great work! Don't keep us hanging for long.
Take care and have a great week!
~KWF~
10Konoha's White FangOh my God...this is, this is remarkable. This whole story is just brilliant and I seriously can't wait to read the next chapter but I do hope that Alec is just bluffing about them being dead. Because if he actually killed them...I don't know how Mole would react but I'm sure that it's not gonna be pretty.
Great work! Don't keep us hanging for long.
Take care and have a great week!
~KWF~