for Fullmetal Warriors: Flood Waters2/15 c1 
8Angelic Fluffle
Listen. The beginning is great, but I HATE it when people never go past the first chapter. You have an amazing idea, but of course nobody's going to read it if you don't bother to finish what you start. At least mention in the summary if you are going to continue or not.
8Angelic FluffleListen. The beginning is great, but I HATE it when people never go past the first chapter. You have an amazing idea, but of course nobody's going to read it if you don't bother to finish what you start. At least mention in the summary if you are going to continue or not.
12/10/2009 c1 34DragonsRuleYourDreams12
Good job, you write very well! I am, however, unsure of wich cat is Ed and wich is Al. I'm guessing that Jumpfoot is Al? Do contenue. Please.
34DragonsRuleYourDreams12Good job, you write very well! I am, however, unsure of wich cat is Ed and wich is Al. I'm guessing that Jumpfoot is Al? Do contenue. Please.