for A Morning In Paradise7/22/2012 c1 Guest
okay i love diana's mother is funny as heck bro
okay i love diana's mother is funny as heck bro
12/12/2009 c1 john777
Great story, keep writing
Great story, keep writing
11/29/2009 c1 
35EroSlackerMicha
Talk about bringing the house down...heh (cough)
Anyways, a nice sequel...
Now about that trilogy...(hint, cough hint)
keep up the good job.
ESM
35EroSlackerMichaTalk about bringing the house down...heh (cough)
Anyways, a nice sequel...
Now about that trilogy...(hint, cough hint)
keep up the good job.
ESM
11/24/2009 c1 AmazoniaV
I really liked this short story. Very nice, especially Hippolyta, who, I must say is very patient. And I loved the insight into Diana...all woman, knowing what she wants and getting it!
I really liked this short story. Very nice, especially Hippolyta, who, I must say is very patient. And I loved the insight into Diana...all woman, knowing what she wants and getting it!
11/23/2009 c1 craftyjinx
I like it and I always love your endings... (lol)... but I think you played it too safe. Stop worrying about it being x rated. You are an excellent writer... trust yourself... let yourself GO
.. Miss ya.. see you soon
I like it and I always love your endings... (lol)... but I think you played it too safe. Stop worrying about it being x rated. You are an excellent writer... trust yourself... let yourself GO
.. Miss ya.. see you soon
11/22/2009 c1 6Mami02
Oh! Wonderful sequel! So a fever prompted you, eh? Luckily for us its winter now, and colds and sneezes and runny noses are everywhere. Please let Fanci have them in full doses so that we'd have more like this! LOL! Seriously now, I've been waiting for a new one from you, Fance, besides artwork, of course. But I fear that if Kal is allowed to stay one more day, there might be a catastrophe! lol
6Mami02Oh! Wonderful sequel! So a fever prompted you, eh? Luckily for us its winter now, and colds and sneezes and runny noses are everywhere. Please let Fanci have them in full doses so that we'd have more like this! LOL! Seriously now, I've been waiting for a new one from you, Fance, besides artwork, of course. But I fear that if Kal is allowed to stay one more day, there might be a catastrophe! lol
11/22/2009 c1 30Arcadia81
A nice steamy fic. That's a nice way to wake up. I don't think any woman would complain about that.
Clark thinking of his wife bathing with other women? You naughty man! LOL! Mentally shaking his head. Yeah, right. I bet he wants Diana to describe it in slow detail.
Poor Hippolyta. I can imagine her shaking her head and thinking, "There they go again." When Hippolyta gets the engineers to check out the structure she should get her son-in-law to help fortify it since he's part of the cause of the problem. :p
If getting sick inspires story like this, you might want to get sick more often. Kidding! :hugs: Glad you are better!
30Arcadia81A nice steamy fic. That's a nice way to wake up. I don't think any woman would complain about that.
Clark thinking of his wife bathing with other women? You naughty man! LOL! Mentally shaking his head. Yeah, right. I bet he wants Diana to describe it in slow detail.
Poor Hippolyta. I can imagine her shaking her head and thinking, "There they go again." When Hippolyta gets the engineers to check out the structure she should get her son-in-law to help fortify it since he's part of the cause of the problem. :p
If getting sick inspires story like this, you might want to get sick more often. Kidding! :hugs: Glad you are better!
11/22/2009 c1 Spoons There Are
Fantastic follow on story. Nicely done.
I can see Hippolyta banning Kal and Diana from engaging in any sexual acts until all of Themyscira can be reinforced to withstand their passion.
Will there be another follow on story?
Fantastic follow on story. Nicely done.
I can see Hippolyta banning Kal and Diana from engaging in any sexual acts until all of Themyscira can be reinforced to withstand their passion.
Will there be another follow on story?
11/22/2009 c1 41ben10987654321
Well lets see here;
hot: check.
full of passion: check.
enough smut to keep anybody happy: check.
humour(always important): check.
Seems you covered everything fanci. The writing is great. Fantastic fic!
41ben10987654321Well lets see here;
hot: check.
full of passion: check.
enough smut to keep anybody happy: check.
humour(always important): check.
Seems you covered everything fanci. The writing is great. Fantastic fic!
11/22/2009 c1 13HELLACRE13
Wow you need to have some more fever inducing deliriums.lol.
Really great stuff as always. Your writing is excellent. Full of the right level of heat and passion and humor. I am soo jealous of Diana right now. Ha.
Poor Hippolyta. She must be thinking "Those two at it AGAIN. Merciful Minerva, we had three blessed hours of quiet...and here I'm ,finally, they are too tired to do anything for a while. This rate I'll have to have the whole of Themyscira surveyed and re-enforced. Oh well at least I am bound to get a grandchild or two..."
13HELLACRE13Wow you need to have some more fever inducing deliriums.lol.
Really great stuff as always. Your writing is excellent. Full of the right level of heat and passion and humor. I am soo jealous of Diana right now. Ha.
Poor Hippolyta. She must be thinking "Those two at it AGAIN. Merciful Minerva, we had three blessed hours of quiet...and here I'm ,finally, they are too tired to do anything for a while. This rate I'll have to have the whole of Themyscira surveyed and re-enforced. Oh well at least I am bound to get a grandchild or two..."