for Operation Scarlet Haze5/5/2011 c2 
4Ash Veran
Checking out a reflection totally doesn't count as looking back. They need to add an italics button so I can be properly sarcastic.
Anyway, I did like the details. So, is this Roth related to the other Roth from Scorpia? Or just an unfortunate coincidence? Please, do tell.
4Ash VeranChecking out a reflection totally doesn't count as looking back. They need to add an italics button so I can be properly sarcastic.
Anyway, I did like the details. So, is this Roth related to the other Roth from Scorpia? Or just an unfortunate coincidence? Please, do tell.
7/23/2010 c2 9TheMysteryReviewer3624
Yet another amazing story from my new favourite author. I would say update soon, except that I know from personal experience that no matter how many people ask you to update soon, the story comes when it comes. (Which, for me, is not often.)
9TheMysteryReviewer3624Yet another amazing story from my new favourite author. I would say update soon, except that I know from personal experience that no matter how many people ask you to update soon, the story comes when it comes. (Which, for me, is not often.)
5/9/2010 c2 36ObsessivelyOdd
This is really good. Can I ask - does STING stand for anything? I've got Sabotage Technology INtelligence, but can't think of G. *sigh*
Only thing to watch is that occasionally you slip into first person when you're using plurals (we and us instead of you)
Bravo on writing an entire multichapter in the second person btw, I'd never have the guts.
And yeah, update soon? Pleeeaaaase? :D
36ObsessivelyOddThis is really good. Can I ask - does STING stand for anything? I've got Sabotage Technology INtelligence, but can't think of G. *sigh*
Only thing to watch is that occasionally you slip into first person when you're using plurals (we and us instead of you)
Bravo on writing an entire multichapter in the second person btw, I'd never have the guts.
And yeah, update soon? Pleeeaaaase? :D
2/26/2010 c1 EriKaBalDeL
it's interesting..
though i don't like to read so much thoughts at once.. is the entire story going to be from alex's point of view? or from one person's point of view for that matter?
it's interesting..
though i don't like to read so much thoughts at once.. is the entire story going to be from alex's point of view? or from one person's point of view for that matter?
2/10/2010 c1 39Sylvr
this is great-you have a couple really wonderful lines in here, which I might borrow if you don't mind. Very good work-i'd reccomend it to anyone.
please update soon!
~slvrstar
39Sylvrthis is great-you have a couple really wonderful lines in here, which I might borrow if you don't mind. Very good work-i'd reccomend it to anyone.
please update soon!
~slvrstar
12/15/2009 c1 TheSkullHat
Brilliant. I normally detest second person, but this is actually really good. Congratulations, you are officially the first person to get me hooked (snicker) on a second person fic. Can't wait for your next chapter!
TheSkullHat
Brilliant. I normally detest second person, but this is actually really good. Congratulations, you are officially the first person to get me hooked (snicker) on a second person fic. Can't wait for your next chapter!
TheSkullHat
12/7/2009 c1 abbs
wow I really like this! Keep it up!
wow I really like this! Keep it up!
12/1/2009 c1 2HikaInStyle
Hey it's cool, I love the way you did 'you' instead of 'he'
Please update soon
2HikaInStyleHey it's cool, I love the way you did 'you' instead of 'he'
Please update soon
11/23/2009 c1 CloudySky
wow, I hadn't even noticed it was in 2nd person... Very well done. It's both though-provoking and funny, in a slightly creepy way (must be the pov). This first chapter would actually work decently as a stand-alone, but it's great as an intro too. I'm very curious to see how the rest of the story will look.
cloe
wow, I hadn't even noticed it was in 2nd person... Very well done. It's both though-provoking and funny, in a slightly creepy way (must be the pov). This first chapter would actually work decently as a stand-alone, but it's great as an intro too. I'm very curious to see how the rest of the story will look.
cloe