for Kaleidoscope3/27/2010 c1 alguien22792
aw i love when someone writes their relationship
as bittersweet XD
great story!
aw i love when someone writes their relationship
as bittersweet XD
great story!
3/20/2010 c1 Celestialfae
Normally i wouldnt cry at such a story but this one made me cry because it reminds me of a similar situation in my life.
My mom died about 3 years ago, and no matter how my dad seems to be faring he too is starting to unravel. im worried sick. so please pray for him and hope that maybe he will snap out of it.
Great story. keep making more.
Normally i wouldnt cry at such a story but this one made me cry because it reminds me of a similar situation in my life.
My mom died about 3 years ago, and no matter how my dad seems to be faring he too is starting to unravel. im worried sick. so please pray for him and hope that maybe he will snap out of it.
Great story. keep making more.
12/28/2009 c1 
7EchizenRyomaLover
That was so sweet and touching! You did a spectacular job in using the kaleidoscope as a metaphor to life, and Watanuki's relationship with Doumeki. I agree that life is a kaleidoscope that constantly changes, never repeating its patterns. I loved it!
7EchizenRyomaLoverThat was so sweet and touching! You did a spectacular job in using the kaleidoscope as a metaphor to life, and Watanuki's relationship with Doumeki. I agree that life is a kaleidoscope that constantly changes, never repeating its patterns. I loved it!
12/17/2009 c1 90jessica499499
Very well written and thought out! I love the kaleidoscope reference and the sweet ending! Write more please!
90jessica499499Very well written and thought out! I love the kaleidoscope reference and the sweet ending! Write more please!
11/26/2009 c1 10Valerie Blakewell
It was good! You portrayed them well. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.
10Valerie BlakewellIt was good! You portrayed them well. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.