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2LarkInDecember
Aw! I loved this one. Though I did feel sympathetic for Sally when she had to tell her story. Its great! And yes I want to read more! There so many things unresolved! Keep going. I love it! : )
2LarkInDecemberAw! I loved this one. Though I did feel sympathetic for Sally when she had to tell her story. Its great! And yes I want to read more! There so many things unresolved! Keep going. I love it! : )
12/4/2009 c7 23Prats 'R' Us
aww poor Sally, I can't help but think that this was too easy, and what's Oogie supposed to do hm? Update soon please!
23Prats 'R' Usaww poor Sally, I can't help but think that this was too easy, and what's Oogie supposed to do hm? Update soon please!
12/1/2009 c6 2LarkInDecember
Aw, I almost cried when Jack found Sally. I feel so bad for her! Look out Nytes, Jack is **!
Nice way to end this chapter, there's obviously many unresolved issues left. I can't wait for the next one! ^^
2LarkInDecemberAw, I almost cried when Jack found Sally. I feel so bad for her! Look out Nytes, Jack is **!
Nice way to end this chapter, there's obviously many unresolved issues left. I can't wait for the next one! ^^
12/1/2009 c6 23Prats 'R' Us
I didn't think that sewing up Sally would hurt her, poor thing. Jack take my bazuka, it may help with your fight oh tall and probably reall old one. Make them pay! Great chapter.
23Prats 'R' UsI didn't think that sewing up Sally would hurt her, poor thing. Jack take my bazuka, it may help with your fight oh tall and probably reall old one. Make them pay! Great chapter.
12/1/2009 c5 Prats 'R' Us
oh dark, poor Jack, OMGosh what are they doing to Sally? Please update soon.
oh dark, poor Jack, OMGosh what are they doing to Sally? Please update soon.
11/30/2009 c5 2LarkInDecember
This one was so much darker! I loved it!
The part with the mayor made me chuckle a little, but damn, I was like teetering on the edge towards and then the cliffhanger and I was like "OMG!"
I WILL TOTALLY be anticipating the next chapter! Can't wait till then! : )
2LarkInDecemberThis one was so much darker! I loved it!
The part with the mayor made me chuckle a little, but damn, I was like teetering on the edge towards and then the cliffhanger and I was like "OMG!"
I WILL TOTALLY be anticipating the next chapter! Can't wait till then! : )
11/29/2009 c3 23Prats 'R' Us
oh no! oh no! oh no! oh no! oh no! What happened? What happened? What happened?
update soon please
23Prats 'R' Usoh no! oh no! oh no! oh no! oh no! What happened? What happened? What happened?
update soon please
11/29/2009 c4 2LarkInDecember
Okay, I'll admit, I was NOT expecting anything like that. Wow, that was a surprise! This is getting more and more interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! : )
2LarkInDecemberOkay, I'll admit, I was NOT expecting anything like that. Wow, that was a surprise! This is getting more and more interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! : )
11/28/2009 c3 15Calm-Waters
Wow! To anyone that thought Oogie was the one that had Sally, you'll be in for a surprise! You'll never guess why she was taken! It's TOTALLY out there! I mean TOTALLY. Tehe, thanks to all that have replied. Your totally awesome!
15Calm-WatersWow! To anyone that thought Oogie was the one that had Sally, you'll be in for a surprise! You'll never guess why she was taken! It's TOTALLY out there! I mean TOTALLY. Tehe, thanks to all that have replied. Your totally awesome!
11/28/2009 c3 2LarkInDecember
Oh my god!
This is epic! I was practically biting my nails
at the end of this chapter. I was totally expecting Oogie to be the one who had Sally. Oh I hope she'll be okay!
I can't wait until the next installment! : )
2LarkInDecemberOh my god!
This is epic! I was practically biting my nails
at the end of this chapter. I was totally expecting Oogie to be the one who had Sally. Oh I hope she'll be okay!
I can't wait until the next installment! : )
11/27/2009 c2 14cartoongal11
Interesting.
Quiet interesting so far.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you so much. :)
14cartoongal11Interesting.
Quiet interesting so far.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you so much. :)
11/27/2009 c2 2LarkInDecember
Omg!
I feel so bad for Sally in the beginning. She seems so defeated.
I feel bad for Jack to. He's suffering so much.
This is a good addition. You simply MUST keep going. I'm hooked now! I'll be looking out for the next post! : D
2LarkInDecemberOmg!
I feel so bad for Sally in the beginning. She seems so defeated.
I feel bad for Jack to. He's suffering so much.
This is a good addition. You simply MUST keep going. I'm hooked now! I'll be looking out for the next post! : D
11/27/2009 c1 LarkInDecember
This is a good start. It was gripping and emotional and I was speeding through the page 'cause I loved it so much.
There's a few small errors with your mechanisms but I really don't care about perfect grammar when it comes to fanfics so its all good. Keep going! : )
This is a good start. It was gripping and emotional and I was speeding through the page 'cause I loved it so much.
There's a few small errors with your mechanisms but I really don't care about perfect grammar when it comes to fanfics so its all good. Keep going! : )