for Susan11/28/2009 c1 
69LucyCrewe11
nice poem. I have to say it's MUCH more impressive than some-rather sad-attempts I've made at poetry before (Trust me, not pretty. LOL). Anyway, good work. It really shows Susan's character very well.
69LucyCrewe11nice poem. I have to say it's MUCH more impressive than some-rather sad-attempts I've made at poetry before (Trust me, not pretty. LOL). Anyway, good work. It really shows Susan's character very well.
11/28/2009 c1 35Dan Sickles
So beautiful! Just reading this poem makes me see how the years have passed and Susan has changed. There's a song you would like called "Caroline No" which has the same beautiful message. It's on the Beach Boys PET SOUNDS CD. Lovely poem - thank you so much for writing it!
35Dan SicklesSo beautiful! Just reading this poem makes me see how the years have passed and Susan has changed. There's a song you would like called "Caroline No" which has the same beautiful message. It's on the Beach Boys PET SOUNDS CD. Lovely poem - thank you so much for writing it!
11/28/2009 c1 90Lady Eleanor Boleyn
Very good! It doesn't run quite as well as some poems do - I think you'd be better off splitting the last line into two parts - but it's so poignant, that it doesn't matter. Truly. I really did enjoy it!
90Lady Eleanor BoleynVery good! It doesn't run quite as well as some poems do - I think you'd be better off splitting the last line into two parts - but it's so poignant, that it doesn't matter. Truly. I really did enjoy it!