for Don't die, love3/24/2011 c11 Darcyfan14
How sad to be in a situation like this.Great chapter.i can' wait for the next chapter.
How sad to be in a situation like this.Great chapter.i can' wait for the next chapter.
3/24/2011 c6 Darcyfan14
How sad for Bella to know she's dying,but for the family to see you love one dying and can do anything is worse. but Bella is so strong or maybe didn't hit her still. great story.
How sad for Bella to know she's dying,but for the family to see you love one dying and can do anything is worse. but Bella is so strong or maybe didn't hit her still. great story.
1/27/2011 c11 
2emo-licious-gummies
It's not really that sad when you start thinking about the fact that Edward will not let her die. But then again, she might just end up dying because she doesn't get changed or the venom just doesn't work like it is supposed to. We will never know until that actually happens.
What will happen with the Carnival? Will Charlie let her go? Update soon.
2emo-licious-gummiesIt's not really that sad when you start thinking about the fact that Edward will not let her die. But then again, she might just end up dying because she doesn't get changed or the venom just doesn't work like it is supposed to. We will never know until that actually happens.
What will happen with the Carnival? Will Charlie let her go? Update soon.
1/12/2011 c11 bamagal110
DANG POOR BELLA IT WOULD BE HARD TO KNOW YOU WERE DYING AND SO YOUNG BUT I HAVE FAITH IN EDWARD TO SAVE HER...
DANG POOR BELLA IT WOULD BE HARD TO KNOW YOU WERE DYING AND SO YOUNG BUT I HAVE FAITH IN EDWARD TO SAVE HER...
1/9/2011 c11 22gemma loves edward
Ahhhhhh poor Bella :( this was so sad but I still loved it love gem
22gemma loves edwardAhhhhhh poor Bella :( this was so sad but I still loved it love gem