for The Victorian Paupers3/27/2011 c7 
7living in dreamland
It's been over a year since your last update. I assume there is a good reason for this and begging for more won't help, so I'll just say that I enjoyed this story and I can just imagine the reunion.
7living in dreamlandIt's been over a year since your last update. I assume there is a good reason for this and begging for more won't help, so I'll just say that I enjoyed this story and I can just imagine the reunion.
1/22/2011 c3 Swanwhite of narnia
It was ironical that Lucy was wailing while Peter was practically totured by Lady Chadwick(I have half a mind to smack her and her daughter on the upside of the head). I mean, Lucy doesn't know that it was her brother(not to mention, her eldest brother).
It was ironical that Lucy was wailing while Peter was practically totured by Lady Chadwick(I have half a mind to smack her and her daughter on the upside of the head). I mean, Lucy doesn't know that it was her brother(not to mention, her eldest brother).
1/22/2011 c7 Swanwhite of narnia
Nice story...but maybe things went a little too quick...please update.
Nice story...but maybe things went a little too quick...please update.
12/7/2009 c7 47The Monster In Your Room
And here i was thinking Diggory would be Lucy and Edmund's tutor. xD.
Oh yes, i sense trouble on the horizon, too. :D Should be good.
47The Monster In Your RoomAnd here i was thinking Diggory would be Lucy and Edmund's tutor. xD.
Oh yes, i sense trouble on the horizon, too. :D Should be good.
12/6/2009 c7 Opera Dove
Nice! I was half-expecting Jadis to be trying to turn the siblings against each other.
Nice! I was half-expecting Jadis to be trying to turn the siblings against each other.
12/6/2009 c7 69LucyCrewe11
great chapter.
for some reason, my favorite part was:
"Fauns don't exist." Susan said
"Yet,I see one."Peter said .
Dunno why I found that so amusing, I just did. The rest of the chapter was really good, too.
Please update again soon.
69LucyCrewe11great chapter.
for some reason, my favorite part was:
"Fauns don't exist." Susan said
"Yet,I see one."Peter said .
Dunno why I found that so amusing, I just did. The rest of the chapter was really good, too.
Please update again soon.
12/5/2009 c6 9Cima1305
i'm glad to see they're with prof. kirk now! hopefully, their lives will get better and they will be back with ed and lu
9Cima1305i'm glad to see they're with prof. kirk now! hopefully, their lives will get better and they will be back with ed and lu
12/5/2009 c6 47The Monster In Your Room
This story is BRILLIANT.
I felt so sorry for Susan when she found out that Edmund and Lucy didn't remember her or Peter.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
47The Monster In Your RoomThis story is BRILLIANT.
I felt so sorry for Susan when she found out that Edmund and Lucy didn't remember her or Peter.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
12/5/2009 c6 garnetred
Excellent chapter. I am glad that the Professor adopted Peter and Susan. Should be interesting to see how Edmund and Lucy come into the picture. Please update soon.
Excellent chapter. I am glad that the Professor adopted Peter and Susan. Should be interesting to see how Edmund and Lucy come into the picture. Please update soon.
12/5/2009 c5 Opera Dove
Poor little things.
Were the apples foreshadowing "P.C."?
It snowed here in Texas yesterday. Didn't stay on the ground but it snowed all day. Gave me an idea for Worth but I'm not sure when I can write it.
Poor little things.
Were the apples foreshadowing "P.C."?
It snowed here in Texas yesterday. Didn't stay on the ground but it snowed all day. Gave me an idea for Worth but I'm not sure when I can write it.
12/5/2009 c6 69LucyCrewe11
Ooh, I like this chapter very much. The whole mood of the story started to feel a lot warmer as soon Digory Kirke showed up-I love that professor, he's such an old softie and such a great character from the Narnian series. I'm very glad he adopted them and that things are looking up, I hope he finds a way to get Edmund and Lucy back from Lady ChadWITCH soon, too.
please update again soon.
69LucyCrewe11Ooh, I like this chapter very much. The whole mood of the story started to feel a lot warmer as soon Digory Kirke showed up-I love that professor, he's such an old softie and such a great character from the Narnian series. I'm very glad he adopted them and that things are looking up, I hope he finds a way to get Edmund and Lucy back from Lady ChadWITCH soon, too.
please update again soon.
12/5/2009 c6 Soloyoyo
All the story is growing well, but this chapter is really interesting, describing how they interact as brother and sister, but tender that Susan is taking care of Peter just the same he take care of her. Please, keep going, I'm willing know how they are joined with the younger siblings and if somebody give a good lesson to Lady hypocrite-Chadwick...
All the story is growing well, but this chapter is really interesting, describing how they interact as brother and sister, but tender that Susan is taking care of Peter just the same he take care of her. Please, keep going, I'm willing know how they are joined with the younger siblings and if somebody give a good lesson to Lady hypocrite-Chadwick...