for Cowboys and Indians6/4/2012 c12 
23Macavroche
Great job! Loved loved loved! What's up with the "Bravo Yankee Echo" stuff! I'm intrigued!
23MacavrocheGreat job! Loved loved loved! What's up with the "Bravo Yankee Echo" stuff! I'm intrigued!
3/2/2010 c12 24LucyOfNarnia
Great story! Thanks for writing this. It really was a clever idea the whole Cowboys and Indians thing. Good job!
24LucyOfNarniaGreat story! Thanks for writing this. It really was a clever idea the whole Cowboys and Indians thing. Good job!
1/26/2010 c12 Newsieslover
Oh my gosh! This was amazing! Yeah, kind of late to comment, I know. But that was really good!
Oh my gosh! This was amazing! Yeah, kind of late to comment, I know. But that was really good!
1/24/2010 c12 20Austra
Very, very, very excellent! I love this story, and it's a good ending.
Keep up the good work!
20AustraVery, very, very excellent! I love this story, and it's a good ending.
Keep up the good work!
1/20/2010 c12 8Awkward.Quail
Oh that chapter made me so happy!
"Don't ruin the moment." LOL.
I shall be on the watch for a new story!
-Jodi
8Awkward.QuailOh that chapter made me so happy!
"Don't ruin the moment." LOL.
I shall be on the watch for a new story!
-Jodi
1/20/2010 c12 Eruanna Undomiel
I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER! I might cry! You girls did an excellent job. You need to do more stories like this very good! And thanks for the shout-out!
Eruanna Undomiel
I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER! I might cry! You girls did an excellent job. You need to do more stories like this very good! And thanks for the shout-out!
Eruanna Undomiel
1/20/2010 c11 Eruanna Undomiel
THIS IS GOING TO BE OVER! Don't stop it please! I really like this and I still can't wait for more!
Thank you for not killing Tibby.
Eruanna
THIS IS GOING TO BE OVER! Don't stop it please! I really like this and I still can't wait for more!
Thank you for not killing Tibby.
Eruanna
1/20/2010 c11 Awkward.Quail
The story is ending! It makes me so sad...
Well, can't wait to see what happens!
-Jodi
The story is ending! It makes me so sad...
Well, can't wait to see what happens!
-Jodi
1/19/2010 c11 6croll
Must admit I'm bummed it's over so soon, but hey, it's got to end I guess. Wait a minute! I'm going to apply an old, very true statement, stories end on the last page as much as they begin on the first. In other words they never end.
6crollMust admit I'm bummed it's over so soon, but hey, it's got to end I guess. Wait a minute! I'm going to apply an old, very true statement, stories end on the last page as much as they begin on the first. In other words they never end.
1/19/2010 c10 9Eruanna Undomiel
HOW DARE YOU GIVE ME CLIFFHANGER! So, now you better update really, really soon! ery good girls. I want that next chapter. And please don't kill Tibby. Please.
Eruanna Undomiel
9Eruanna UndomielHOW DARE YOU GIVE ME CLIFFHANGER! So, now you better update really, really soon! ery good girls. I want that next chapter. And please don't kill Tibby. Please.
Eruanna Undomiel
1/19/2010 c10 8Awkward.Quail
Why are the Delancy brothers so mean? Do they have no soul?
You better make sure that Tibby makes it throught the night!
Update Soon.
-Jodi
8Awkward.QuailWhy are the Delancy brothers so mean? Do they have no soul?
You better make sure that Tibby makes it throught the night!
Update Soon.
-Jodi
1/18/2010 c10 6croll
Oh my! Did not expect that! Haha, I love how all of the newsies want in on the fight. I sure hope he's okay! That would be So EXTREMELY sad if he died! I'm glad Jack is there for Tessa. Thanks for the quick update!
6crollOh my! Did not expect that! Haha, I love how all of the newsies want in on the fight. I sure hope he's okay! That would be So EXTREMELY sad if he died! I'm glad Jack is there for Tessa. Thanks for the quick update!
1/16/2010 c9 croll
I have really enjoyed this so far! The old lady and her pie was a nice touch. I love pie. =D update soon!
I have really enjoyed this so far! The old lady and her pie was a nice touch. I love pie. =D update soon!