for Fireside Rants4/2/2010 c4
5Cowgirls Angel Rita
hahahahaha...love the story so far!
Finns is definitely the best...so far...
keep writing,
Cowgirls Angel Rita
5Cowgirls Angel Ritahahahahaha...love the story so far!
Finns is definitely the best...so far...
keep writing,
Cowgirls Angel Rita
3/31/2010 c4
32Fanless
"I don't care what he says." WAHAHA.
I love how formal and pompous THE Dark Ace sounds here, with a bit of sly humor. And he's so hilarious when he gets mad! Totally sulky. Your take on him is very funny.
How about Piper next?
32Fanless"I don't care what he says." WAHAHA.
I love how formal and pompous THE Dark Ace sounds here, with a bit of sly humor. And he's so hilarious when he gets mad! Totally sulky. Your take on him is very funny.
How about Piper next?
3/31/2010 c4 Amethyst
Bravo, i'm inclined to agree with the Dark Ace on the last paragraph. personally, i say you should do Piper next (if she agrees) i'm curious to see what that one has in store. update soon
Amethyst
PS, tell Finn i agree with him, and that he is the MASTER BLASTER! :) (sorry, fangirl moment)
Bravo, i'm inclined to agree with the Dark Ace on the last paragraph. personally, i say you should do Piper next (if she agrees) i'm curious to see what that one has in store. update soon
Amethyst
PS, tell Finn i agree with him, and that he is the MASTER BLASTER! :) (sorry, fangirl moment)
3/31/2010 c4
14KatieCharlotte
and equally Finn and the Dark Ace remain wonderfully in character! i love it how the DA argues that he and Aerrow are not compatible before stating that he's only 14 X3 the way Finn's is written captures his attitude perfectly.
i'd love to see what you do for Piper :D
14KatieCharlotteand equally Finn and the Dark Ace remain wonderfully in character! i love it how the DA argues that he and Aerrow are not compatible before stating that he's only 14 X3 the way Finn's is written captures his attitude perfectly.
i'd love to see what you do for Piper :D
3/31/2010 c2 KatieCharlotte
haha, such an original idea and i like it! only read Aerrow's so far but i do like how he's very balanced his approach to all of his matchmaker fans :)
haha, such an original idea and i like it! only read Aerrow's so far but i do like how he's very balanced his approach to all of his matchmaker fans :)
3/29/2010 c4 Jess
I wanna see Cyclonis' statement along with the others! =D Interesting so far, keep it up!
I wanna see Cyclonis' statement along with the others! =D Interesting so far, keep it up!
3/28/2010 c4
17Untoldtitan27
*jumps up and down* Do HArrier I wanna see what he thinks! (I hate him so prepare the torture devices LOL) And Piper! I wanna know what she says about all the videos of Aerrow and her together that the fans got a hold of! XD
Laterz,
Luna
17Untoldtitan27*jumps up and down* Do HArrier I wanna see what he thinks! (I hate him so prepare the torture devices LOL) And Piper! I wanna know what she says about all the videos of Aerrow and her together that the fans got a hold of! XD
Laterz,
Luna
3/28/2010 c4
7The SPAZtastic Lawlrus
: I love this! Especially Aerrow's. It sounds like something he would say, and I agree, no one is THAT accepting. I loved the other two as well, very good!
Keep updating! Please! Oh, and I suggest that Piper goes next. Or Stork. Or Master Cyclonis. Hell, any of them would be great.
7The SPAZtastic Lawlrus: I love this! Especially Aerrow's. It sounds like something he would say, and I agree, no one is THAT accepting. I loved the other two as well, very good!
Keep updating! Please! Oh, and I suggest that Piper goes next. Or Stork. Or Master Cyclonis. Hell, any of them would be great.
3/28/2010 c4
64Saffronica612
hahahah
well, you've made me laugh at least. All I can picture is my fat, lazy cat, Duke, in a huff when he gets his tail wet. That's what dark ace seems like to me.
great job!
64Saffronica612hahahah
well, you've made me laugh at least. All I can picture is my fat, lazy cat, Duke, in a huff when he gets his tail wet. That's what dark ace seems like to me.
great job!
12/23/2009 c3
10LadyLombax
I like it. I can't wait to find out what Piper's reaction is going to be. Lol, Keep up the great work and get those statments published plz!
10LadyLombaxI like it. I can't wait to find out what Piper's reaction is going to be. Lol, Keep up the great work and get those statments published plz!
12/12/2009 c3
32Fanless
Hahahaha! Brilliant! I love how you wrote the whole thing in IM-speak or whatever you might call it. Internetese, perhaps? :D "Hearing" Finn say "OMG" and "srsly" is totally worth it, and even though I haven't seen any other episodes than the one you showed me yet, I think this totally matches his happy-go-lucky personality. Chicka-cha!
Also, of course, I love the "Finnfare" pun ^_^
Next is Stork? Oh boy! He's my favorite :D Besides Finn, of course. Sorry, Finn.
32FanlessHahahaha! Brilliant! I love how you wrote the whole thing in IM-speak or whatever you might call it. Internetese, perhaps? :D "Hearing" Finn say "OMG" and "srsly" is totally worth it, and even though I haven't seen any other episodes than the one you showed me yet, I think this totally matches his happy-go-lucky personality. Chicka-cha!
Also, of course, I love the "Finnfare" pun ^_^
Next is Stork? Oh boy! He's my favorite :D Besides Finn, of course. Sorry, Finn.
12/10/2009 c3
64Saffronica612
wow. all i can say is wow
i mean, i've seen in the first chapter how well you can write formally, and now i see a whole other side of your writing.
i have to say, you are extremely talented. maybe because i don't text or IM, but many of the terms are pretty unfamiliar to me (I actually had to google what 'XD' meant the first time I saw it on . Yeah, I know, I live under a rock)
well, amazing chapter, I can't wait to see Stork!
64Saffronica612wow. all i can say is wow
i mean, i've seen in the first chapter how well you can write formally, and now i see a whole other side of your writing.
i have to say, you are extremely talented. maybe because i don't text or IM, but many of the terms are pretty unfamiliar to me (I actually had to google what 'XD' meant the first time I saw it on . Yeah, I know, I live under a rock)
well, amazing chapter, I can't wait to see Stork!
12/10/2009 c2
32Fanless
Aw. Aerrow is so sweet. :D I hope to be that accepting of my fans when I get published. But not, perhaps, as innocent. xD
Yeah, what's up with that deleted text? o_O
Can't wait to see Finn spaz over this!
32FanlessAw. Aerrow is so sweet. :D I hope to be that accepting of my fans when I get published. But not, perhaps, as innocent. xD
Yeah, what's up with that deleted text? o_O
Can't wait to see Finn spaz over this!
12/10/2009 c1 Fanless
I think it looks great so far. I love interview fics and interactive stuff like that, so this should be a lot of fun. The intro is pretty darn official-sounding, at least to my ears. Veddy nice.
I think it looks great so far. I love interview fics and interactive stuff like that, so this should be a lot of fun. The intro is pretty darn official-sounding, at least to my ears. Veddy nice.
