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43drakensis
I very much enjoyed this and would be glad if you someday continued it. Even if you don't, thanks for writing the parts thus far.
43drakensisI very much enjoyed this and would be glad if you someday continued it. Even if you don't, thanks for writing the parts thus far.
6/2/2012 c1 NotreallyHere
Please update this story. It is worderfully written, and it captures the girls essence very well.
Please update this story. It is worderfully written, and it captures the girls essence very well.
2/18/2012 c6 NotreallyHere
I love this story, and now that your back I hope you intend to update it. The girls are still in character and I can’t wait to see what the mysterious Nymph will do.
I love this story, and now that your back I hope you intend to update it. The girls are still in character and I can’t wait to see what the mysterious Nymph will do.
9/30/2011 c6 5Sonicthehedgewolf
This story is freaking awesome! U totally need to finish when u get the chance
5SonicthehedgewolfThis story is freaking awesome! U totally need to finish when u get the chance
9/30/2011 c4 Animationlasi
I am so happy that you chose to put this story back up. Honestly I don't think it's as bad as you think it is, but I understand that we are all our own worst critic.
I love how you took W.i.t.c.h, a series with a fairly epic scope already, and made it feel like the most wonderful mash-up of 'Mahou-Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha', 'Treasure Planet', 'Atlantis' and probably a few other of my favorite things I'm forgetting to mention. I really enjoyed how in-depth you went into explaining what happened to the girls, and how a lot of this series mechanics work in general. I also like that you chose to do your own thing with the series instead of going to the comics and writing your own version of the Arkhanta ark or what have you.
Some of the dialogue seems a bit odd for the characters, like when Matt saw the girls dying, but while it seems a bit odd in retrospect, the majority of the jokes and the interaction between characters seems real and true to the show. The first chapter was especially interesting and well thought out.
As for your character, Starder, (don't think I spelled that right) he's not as annoying as you seem to think he is. I think he works well as the know it all character, and he seems to be flawed enough (his constant bragging of his intelligence, for example) that he is essentially human. The bits about the charming smile might seem to make him a bit gary-stuish, but the girls aren't all going gaga over him, they just noticed he's attractive. That's not unrealistic. Given the situation he has found himself in, it's believable that he would have worked on his people skills in order to survive. That being said, I would still tone it down a bit.
Granted, I've only gotten about half-way through your story thus far, but I am enjoying it. This story even helped shape much of my own personal W.i.t.c.h headcannon, and I still enjoy reading it.
I hope you chose to come back to Dragon Sisters someday, it's just as good as I remember and one of the scant few reasons I still read w.i.t.c.h fanfiction when the majority of it is 'five-letter-word-new-guardians-YEY!' Please keep up the good work.
I am so happy that you chose to put this story back up. Honestly I don't think it's as bad as you think it is, but I understand that we are all our own worst critic.
I love how you took W.i.t.c.h, a series with a fairly epic scope already, and made it feel like the most wonderful mash-up of 'Mahou-Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha', 'Treasure Planet', 'Atlantis' and probably a few other of my favorite things I'm forgetting to mention. I really enjoyed how in-depth you went into explaining what happened to the girls, and how a lot of this series mechanics work in general. I also like that you chose to do your own thing with the series instead of going to the comics and writing your own version of the Arkhanta ark or what have you.
Some of the dialogue seems a bit odd for the characters, like when Matt saw the girls dying, but while it seems a bit odd in retrospect, the majority of the jokes and the interaction between characters seems real and true to the show. The first chapter was especially interesting and well thought out.
As for your character, Starder, (don't think I spelled that right) he's not as annoying as you seem to think he is. I think he works well as the know it all character, and he seems to be flawed enough (his constant bragging of his intelligence, for example) that he is essentially human. The bits about the charming smile might seem to make him a bit gary-stuish, but the girls aren't all going gaga over him, they just noticed he's attractive. That's not unrealistic. Given the situation he has found himself in, it's believable that he would have worked on his people skills in order to survive. That being said, I would still tone it down a bit.
Granted, I've only gotten about half-way through your story thus far, but I am enjoying it. This story even helped shape much of my own personal W.i.t.c.h headcannon, and I still enjoy reading it.
I hope you chose to come back to Dragon Sisters someday, it's just as good as I remember and one of the scant few reasons I still read w.i.t.c.h fanfiction when the majority of it is 'five-letter-word-new-guardians-YEY!' Please keep up the good work.
9/7/2011 c6 28Imagen99
I do hope you'll eventually return to this, since it is a spectacular piece of fiction that you already must've put an immense amount of work into. Please.
28Imagen99I do hope you'll eventually return to this, since it is a spectacular piece of fiction that you already must've put an immense amount of work into. Please.
9/6/2011 c1 Imagen99
I have just found this again, and i am very glad i did. It was an amazing piece of writing, and i'm glad you might be continuing it, and this is before i read the edited chapters! :)
I have just found this again, and i am very glad i did. It was an amazing piece of writing, and i'm glad you might be continuing it, and this is before i read the edited chapters! :)
5/28/2011 c6 Sootfeather
Wow...I can't believe I haven't found this story earlier. I don't think that I have ever seen a W.I.T.C.H. fic as great as this one. You are a really talented writer!
Wow...I can't believe I haven't found this story earlier. I don't think that I have ever seen a W.I.T.C.H. fic as great as this one. You are a really talented writer!
4/4/2011 c6 5Cg2nenetwin
I really hope that this story gets updated. Its confusing, but in such a good way!.
-Nene^.^
5Cg2nenetwinI really hope that this story gets updated. Its confusing, but in such a good way!.
-Nene^.^
12/16/2010 c6 Cain Elrich
This story hasn't been updated in a long time, and I really hope that you continue it. I'm not a young girl(which was really weird thing to type) so your story appeals to other people.
This story hasn't been updated in a long time, and I really hope that you continue it. I'm not a young girl(which was really weird thing to type) so your story appeals to other people.
8/9/2010 c5 2delphinous
This story is very unusual to me, because most stories that i like to read I already know a vast amount of cannon for. I know very little cannon of this story, and yet it is one of my favorite stories. I truly enjoy reading stories like yours that have great breaks from cannon, where new worlds/reamls/lands are made by you, and yet you don't get too into the history of your created parts. I also like your major action sequences because they flow together well and it is easy to visualize what is happening. There are a lot of stories out there where the only way to understand the fight is to skip to the end and see who is dead. yours are fun to read. I know you said that you didn't know if you would continue writing this, but i hope you do.
Delphinous
PS. did you know that you can only reveiw once per chapter? i had to reveiw this on chapter 5 since i already reveiwed on chapter 6. lol.
PPS. I am an adult male, so you don't need to feel embaressed or think your story only apeals to teenage girls.
2delphinousThis story is very unusual to me, because most stories that i like to read I already know a vast amount of cannon for. I know very little cannon of this story, and yet it is one of my favorite stories. I truly enjoy reading stories like yours that have great breaks from cannon, where new worlds/reamls/lands are made by you, and yet you don't get too into the history of your created parts. I also like your major action sequences because they flow together well and it is easy to visualize what is happening. There are a lot of stories out there where the only way to understand the fight is to skip to the end and see who is dead. yours are fun to read. I know you said that you didn't know if you would continue writing this, but i hope you do.
Delphinous
PS. did you know that you can only reveiw once per chapter? i had to reveiw this on chapter 5 since i already reveiwed on chapter 6. lol.
PPS. I am an adult male, so you don't need to feel embaressed or think your story only apeals to teenage girls.
5/27/2010 c6 nessa671
Please update soon.
Please update soon.
5/5/2010 c1 Illusive Dawn
Hey there, just started reading this fic. Have to say it is very well written, and I will read the rest in short order. Before I do, however, I noticed that this story has not been updated in a while. To help you out, I want to address the issues you mentioned as your reason for removing the original. The errors and badly written parts, along with the character you hate can be fixed with ease. More notible is the sense of shame you seem to feel about writing a story based off a cartoon aimed at teen girls. To this I have two points to make. One, W.I.T.C.H. is a good show, and the comics are even better. Even though it has a young demographic it is NOT just for that group. Those are just the people who make up it's largest fanbase. People from preeteen to 20s and older of both genders are fans of this show. The fact that it is for a young audence dosn't change the fack that it is GOOD! Wall-E was a kids film, but plenty of adults loved it too. Be mature enough to not care so much about seeming mature.
The other point I want to make is that your story is good. To not continue it would be the true shame here. Even IF W.I.T.C.H. was a flop rather than a good show that deserves more viewers and fics, that dosn't change the fact that YOUR work is of a quality that I wish was more common on this site. I have read TWILIGHT fics I thought were gold (although not many) so don't worry about that. This is your story, and I truly hope younwill keep telling it.
Hey there, just started reading this fic. Have to say it is very well written, and I will read the rest in short order. Before I do, however, I noticed that this story has not been updated in a while. To help you out, I want to address the issues you mentioned as your reason for removing the original. The errors and badly written parts, along with the character you hate can be fixed with ease. More notible is the sense of shame you seem to feel about writing a story based off a cartoon aimed at teen girls. To this I have two points to make. One, W.I.T.C.H. is a good show, and the comics are even better. Even though it has a young demographic it is NOT just for that group. Those are just the people who make up it's largest fanbase. People from preeteen to 20s and older of both genders are fans of this show. The fact that it is for a young audence dosn't change the fack that it is GOOD! Wall-E was a kids film, but plenty of adults loved it too. Be mature enough to not care so much about seeming mature.
The other point I want to make is that your story is good. To not continue it would be the true shame here. Even IF W.I.T.C.H. was a flop rather than a good show that deserves more viewers and fics, that dosn't change the fact that YOUR work is of a quality that I wish was more common on this site. I have read TWILIGHT fics I thought were gold (although not many) so don't worry about that. This is your story, and I truly hope younwill keep telling it.