for Dragon Sisters12/13/2009 c6 
2delphinous
this story is great and i love the natural way the plot flows. i'm slightly disapointed because i wanted to see the girls work together to cancel the world destroyed weapon but i'm okay with them just escaping. i'll bet that the between chick takes them in and helpes train them into their full powers. i look foward to chapter7.
2delphinousthis story is great and i love the natural way the plot flows. i'm slightly disapointed because i wanted to see the girls work together to cancel the world destroyed weapon but i'm okay with them just escaping. i'll bet that the between chick takes them in and helpes train them into their full powers. i look foward to chapter7.
12/13/2009 c3 7DayDreamer9
This keeps getting better and better, and the thrill-ride obviously ain't over yet! I love the way your professor dude explained the facts to the girls, it all makes perfect sense :)
7DayDreamer9This keeps getting better and better, and the thrill-ride obviously ain't over yet! I love the way your professor dude explained the facts to the girls, it all makes perfect sense :)
12/13/2009 c2 DayDreamer9
Oh wow, this is getting crazy, you REALLY thought this out and it's awesome :) I loved your elemental power speech, it was tight. But what'll happen to the girls now? :(
Oh wow, this is getting crazy, you REALLY thought this out and it's awesome :) I loved your elemental power speech, it was tight. But what'll happen to the girls now? :(
12/13/2009 c1 DayDreamer9
Poor girls T_T Those nightmares were scary, but I still think that their adventures saving everyone were cool. You really did a good job with this. Onwards to the next chappie! :)
Poor girls T_T Those nightmares were scary, but I still think that their adventures saving everyone were cool. You really did a good job with this. Onwards to the next chappie! :)
12/13/2009 c6 CaptainThomas
I certainly hope you'll continue this story, it's a great read and I'm looking foreward to finding out what happens nect =)
Keep up the good work!
I certainly hope you'll continue this story, it's a great read and I'm looking foreward to finding out what happens nect =)
Keep up the good work!
12/13/2009 c6 79Lexvan
So are they all in their human form, or the forms the doctor put them in when they became those gems? I'm a bit confused.
Great story so far!
79LexvanSo are they all in their human form, or the forms the doctor put them in when they became those gems? I'm a bit confused.
Great story so far!
12/12/2009 c6 5Greki
I'm right now suffering from severe and deep conflicted emotions. I mean, I'm glad I finally managed to finish up to this chapter so that I could do the work I still ought to do, but I'm heavily frustrated at the fact that I will have to wait a while to see what's next.
Oh well...
It's worth it!
5GrekiI'm right now suffering from severe and deep conflicted emotions. I mean, I'm glad I finally managed to finish up to this chapter so that I could do the work I still ought to do, but I'm heavily frustrated at the fact that I will have to wait a while to see what's next.
Oh well...
It's worth it!
12/12/2009 c6 49Worldwalker Pure
I am very pleased that you decided to put this story back up; I greatly enjoyed reading it the first time.
I know comparatively little about this series - I've read a few of the comics, but I don't have regular television access, so I never saw the show, I'm afraid.
However, from what I do know of the source material, you've managed to craft a story that remains true to the spirit of the original work while vastly increasing the scale of the world it's set in.
There aren't many authors that can be said of, and I would like to congratulate you on the being one of them. Please accept my sincere wishes for you to continue with this work, as I, for one, am eagerly awaiting future installments.
49Worldwalker PureI am very pleased that you decided to put this story back up; I greatly enjoyed reading it the first time.
I know comparatively little about this series - I've read a few of the comics, but I don't have regular television access, so I never saw the show, I'm afraid.
However, from what I do know of the source material, you've managed to craft a story that remains true to the spirit of the original work while vastly increasing the scale of the world it's set in.
There aren't many authors that can be said of, and I would like to congratulate you on the being one of them. Please accept my sincere wishes for you to continue with this work, as I, for one, am eagerly awaiting future installments.
12/12/2009 c5 5Greki
I should be doing some work now, but this is proving to be awfully distracting... in a good way, though.
5GrekiI should be doing some work now, but this is proving to be awfully distracting... in a good way, though.
12/12/2009 c4 Greki
Another absolutely fantastic chapter. You know? I almost always skipped battles in all stories because I found them just a tad bit boring, but yours are just so completely vivid that I don't spin around in circles trying to figure out what is really going on. Great job, indeed!
Another absolutely fantastic chapter. You know? I almost always skipped battles in all stories because I found them just a tad bit boring, but yours are just so completely vivid that I don't spin around in circles trying to figure out what is really going on. Great job, indeed!
12/12/2009 c1 79Lexvan
Holy crap! The ciy's jacked! And now the girlsd are going to be on trial! Hope they got a good lawyer! I also hope Napoleon can get to their friends in time.
Good story by the way!
79LexvanHoly crap! The ciy's jacked! And now the girlsd are going to be on trial! Hope they got a good lawyer! I also hope Napoleon can get to their friends in time.
Good story by the way!
12/12/2009 c3 5Greki
What I do not understand, though, is why if the second channeling matrix was supposed to only be a copy of the first auramere, or at least the copy of the first matrix, how is it that the copy has become a "super-matrix" as you so called it? Is it because it was... created (for a lack of a better word) in the time when there was no sort of limiter, and thus was more or less free to grow?
Anyway, another great chapter!
5GrekiWhat I do not understand, though, is why if the second channeling matrix was supposed to only be a copy of the first auramere, or at least the copy of the first matrix, how is it that the copy has become a "super-matrix" as you so called it? Is it because it was... created (for a lack of a better word) in the time when there was no sort of limiter, and thus was more or less free to grow?
Anyway, another great chapter!
12/12/2009 c2 Greki
A must certainly interesting end to such a complicated situation. I wonder now, if they will retain their human forms in one way or another...
A must certainly interesting end to such a complicated situation. I wonder now, if they will retain their human forms in one way or another...
12/12/2009 c1 Greki
My current favorite Zelda author in W.I.T.C.H... that's awesome! I gotta say I simply love your stories, and your writing style is just superb. I especially like how you write action scenes. Amazing job!
My current favorite Zelda author in W.I.T.C.H... that's awesome! I gotta say I simply love your stories, and your writing style is just superb. I especially like how you write action scenes. Amazing job!