for Three Little Words12/13/2009 c1 
29Ms.GrahamCracker
Definintely not the three little words I imagined, so I was a little suprised at the direction this story took.
I loved Colby's anguish as he drove to Robin's, trying to decide how to tell Don.
Don's denial was heartbreaking and understandable.
Very sad story - very well written.
29Ms.GrahamCrackerDefinintely not the three little words I imagined, so I was a little suprised at the direction this story took.
I loved Colby's anguish as he drove to Robin's, trying to decide how to tell Don.
Don's denial was heartbreaking and understandable.
Very sad story - very well written.
12/13/2009 c1 5Starfishyeti
I don't normally read death fics either - no that's not quite right. Despite not liking them I do read them and then wonder why I did.
I think yours was very well written. Denial is such a human reaction to bad news. You certainly understand the agony behind it - I hope not through personal experience!
Well done! I'll certainly be looking out for other stories written by you.
PS I think this sentence "The feet were peering from under the sheet, and a slip of paper was adjusted to it." should read "The feet were peering from under the sheet, and a slip of paper was attached to one of them". However, I LOVE the next sentence - except perhaps 'rag' isn't the exact word needed here?
5StarfishyetiI don't normally read death fics either - no that's not quite right. Despite not liking them I do read them and then wonder why I did.
I think yours was very well written. Denial is such a human reaction to bad news. You certainly understand the agony behind it - I hope not through personal experience!
Well done! I'll certainly be looking out for other stories written by you.
PS I think this sentence "The feet were peering from under the sheet, and a slip of paper was adjusted to it." should read "The feet were peering from under the sheet, and a slip of paper was attached to one of them". However, I LOVE the next sentence - except perhaps 'rag' isn't the exact word needed here?
12/12/2009 c1 PattyB
Sad but I liked it nevertheless.
Not the "three little words" we usually hear but I think you chose a great title.
Don's denial was truly pathetic and I hurt right along with him.
Sad but I liked it nevertheless.
Not the "three little words" we usually hear but I think you chose a great title.
Don's denial was truly pathetic and I hurt right along with him.
12/12/2009 c1 30Iawen Londea
Very well written. You wrote Don's denial so well-probably the best I have seen. This is really sad. I don't normally read death fics, but this was definitely worth it. Good job.
Next time, please don't kill Charlie. LOL. *This doesn't give you permission to kill someone else, either, LOL.*
30Iawen LondeaVery well written. You wrote Don's denial so well-probably the best I have seen. This is really sad. I don't normally read death fics, but this was definitely worth it. Good job.
Next time, please don't kill Charlie. LOL. *This doesn't give you permission to kill someone else, either, LOL.*