for Answering the Call12/22/2012 c1 Guest
You misspelled "hoped." Even if you actually did update, I could not continue this story, with the blatant disregard for the English language. Lori would be displeased.
Also, the plot was cute. Next time, use spell check before plaguing the internet with bad spelling.
Merry Christmas.
You misspelled "hoped." Even if you actually did update, I could not continue this story, with the blatant disregard for the English language. Lori would be displeased.
Also, the plot was cute. Next time, use spell check before plaguing the internet with bad spelling.
Merry Christmas.
11/26/2010 c1 Col.Duncan
I love this please make more chapters for this fanfiction please
I love this please make more chapters for this fanfiction please
2/21/2010 c1 
52SnowyWolfe
Aw, very cute so far, I love it; and I really want you to continue its great and fun! Ohh, she seems very misunderstood doesn't she, great character! Please continue!
52SnowyWolfeAw, very cute so far, I love it; and I really want you to continue its great and fun! Ohh, she seems very misunderstood doesn't she, great character! Please continue!