for TUAOA: NaruHina Christmas Story10/23/2012 c1 Guest
Hinata:u just got knocked the ** out
Fan girl:*_*...
Naruto:thats my girl!
Hinata:u just got knocked the ** out
Fan girl:*_*...
Naruto:thats my girl!
6/30/2010 c1 
4Upon a Pale Horse
hmm, intresting. i saw that this was a preqeul so i decided to read this first obviously. i have to say, i am definitely into it. though i dont really see where this is going yet, i still am eagar to find out. the whole sasuke thing is also a little confusing. its just because at this piont, he could either turn out to be a great freind, or he could still turn into a total douche like in the manga. i suppose only time will tell.
also, was that guy in the white suit the devil or something? or was he actually a good guy that was getting an early start at helping them or something.
4Upon a Pale Horsehmm, intresting. i saw that this was a preqeul so i decided to read this first obviously. i have to say, i am definitely into it. though i dont really see where this is going yet, i still am eagar to find out. the whole sasuke thing is also a little confusing. its just because at this piont, he could either turn out to be a great freind, or he could still turn into a total douche like in the manga. i suppose only time will tell.
also, was that guy in the white suit the devil or something? or was he actually a good guy that was getting an early start at helping them or something.
5/9/2010 c1 4Arashigan16
Nice, after reading this I can't wait to see how your Terror of the Einst story is.
4Arashigan16Nice, after reading this I can't wait to see how your Terror of the Einst story is.
3/22/2010 c1 9bijuu go crazy
It's a cool story, really amusing and funny, however i must say that it doesn't have the best grammar and that does make it harder to read, not that I'm saying my grammar is much beater but your story really has a good idea and i love the NaruHina fluff. I'm curently reading Terror of the Einst and it's pretty cool.
9bijuu go crazyIt's a cool story, really amusing and funny, however i must say that it doesn't have the best grammar and that does make it harder to read, not that I'm saying my grammar is much beater but your story really has a good idea and i love the NaruHina fluff. I'm curently reading Terror of the Einst and it's pretty cool.
12/25/2009 c1 LInda
very good story, this bunch always getting in to fights, running away from monsters and killing the monsters, to bad they all got blown up, but they got fixed up too, I like the story its good.
very good story, this bunch always getting in to fights, running away from monsters and killing the monsters, to bad they all got blown up, but they got fixed up too, I like the story its good.
12/19/2009 c1 51Fifth-Of-Fourth
Haha, omg, NICE! Poor Sasuke, NOT. He deserved it~ And omg, Hinata cussed? O.O Gasp, the world must be falling apart xD
Funny ficcy, Love it~!
51Fifth-Of-FourthHaha, omg, NICE! Poor Sasuke, NOT. He deserved it~ And omg, Hinata cussed? O.O Gasp, the world must be falling apart xD
Funny ficcy, Love it~!
12/18/2009 c1 2DarkElite24
This story was awesome ! I like the outmake, but everyone knows if there is a ghost on the loss you have to call Ghostbusters(a priest, shaman, druid, or bishop works too)I can tell you are getting into the christmas spirt. I'm finally have some time to myself and will finish up my new chapter and have it out soon !
2DarkElite24This story was awesome ! I like the outmake, but everyone knows if there is a ghost on the loss you have to call Ghostbusters(a priest, shaman, druid, or bishop works too)I can tell you are getting into the christmas spirt. I'm finally have some time to myself and will finish up my new chapter and have it out soon !