for FateBlack Reflection5/20 c23 
14Dragon and Sword Master
I have to admit that this is an extremely interesting story that you have here and I like what you have going on so far. Not only do you have Sakura becoming an Arrancar (I think?) but several others things as well. Kinda curious as to how Kurosaki stole the Summoning for Rider though, but I find it interesting that Hichigo doesn't want to play...
DASM
555
Henshin Complete
14Dragon and Sword MasterI have to admit that this is an extremely interesting story that you have here and I like what you have going on so far. Not only do you have Sakura becoming an Arrancar (I think?) but several others things as well. Kinda curious as to how Kurosaki stole the Summoning for Rider though, but I find it interesting that Hichigo doesn't want to play...
DASM
555
Henshin Complete
5/15 c17 8Lucas Bane
Man, I love Ilya's character. I just hate it so much that she and Berserker are killed by Gilgamesh in one of the Fate series, I think it was Extra, I'm not sure.
8Lucas BaneMan, I love Ilya's character. I just hate it so much that she and Berserker are killed by Gilgamesh in one of the Fate series, I think it was Extra, I'm not sure.
5/15 c15 Lucas Bane
Pretty awesome chapter. Hey, I have an outrageous idea for much later chapters if you're willing to listen to one. I think it'd be something great to develop Ichigo and Rider's relationship.
Pretty awesome chapter. Hey, I have an outrageous idea for much later chapters if you're willing to listen to one. I think it'd be something great to develop Ichigo and Rider's relationship.
4/24 c23 Random Guy Redux
Oh, and for those that were curious on the whole Ichigo/Hollow power issue, it has nothing to do with Ichigo's contract with Rider, and everything to do with his current location. I'm sure people familiar with the settings will be able to figure it out.
Oh, and for those that were curious on the whole Ichigo/Hollow power issue, it has nothing to do with Ichigo's contract with Rider, and everything to do with his current location. I'm sure people familiar with the settings will be able to figure it out.
4/24 c23 Random Guy Redux
So, you still planning on continuing this? I realize you must have been pretty ...frustrated, what with the rabid BS that some of the nasu-fans were spouting on Spacebattles, but I for one hope to see this continued. It's progressed pretty far, and is definitely one of my favorite crossover stories.
So, you still planning on continuing this? I realize you must have been pretty ...frustrated, what with the rabid BS that some of the nasu-fans were spouting on Spacebattles, but I for one hope to see this continued. It's progressed pretty far, and is definitely one of my favorite crossover stories.
4/20 c22 Secret Weapon Unit 06
I guess I could agree that Rider is the biggest threat, especially with those hax eyes of hers.
All she needs is one look, unlimited blade works or not.
I guess I could agree that Rider is the biggest threat, especially with those hax eyes of hers.
All she needs is one look, unlimited blade works or not.
4/20 c23 Secret Weapon Unit 06
I'm guessing you're going with the non-romance route?
I'm fine with that, Bleach doesn't focus on romance anyway, just ship-tease.
I'm guessing you're going with the non-romance route?
I'm fine with that, Bleach doesn't focus on romance anyway, just ship-tease.
4/5 c14 redkama
ok to be fare this storie is crap
ok to be fare this storie is crap
4/5 c13 redkama
except the hole caster things fucking it all up it wasnt bad
except the hole caster things fucking it all up it wasnt bad
3/23 c1 Jose19
This story is fantastic because you have implemented the elements of both series very well, and I am huge fan of both these series to begin with so please continue on your good work.
This story is fantastic because you have implemented the elements of both series very well, and I am huge fan of both these series to begin with so please continue on your good work.
3/7 c23 6Twylyte
... I know it's a tendancy of crossovers to have the two sets of heroes fight before they team up but... This is getting ridiculous. It's sitll an amazing story, but no matter how realistic their paranoia and disbelief is it still results in massive fights that, quite simply, serve no purpose, and that grates at me. I hope that something (not too bad I hope) makes them team up soon, as the whole 'fighting instead of talking, and not believing the talking anyway' thing has been going on for a bit too long.
I look forward to the next chapter,-
Twy
6Twylyte... I know it's a tendancy of crossovers to have the two sets of heroes fight before they team up but... This is getting ridiculous. It's sitll an amazing story, but no matter how realistic their paranoia and disbelief is it still results in massive fights that, quite simply, serve no purpose, and that grates at me. I hope that something (not too bad I hope) makes them team up soon, as the whole 'fighting instead of talking, and not believing the talking anyway' thing has been going on for a bit too long.
I look forward to the next chapter,-
Twy
2/24 c23 3ariados26
Alright, I just finished reading all the Chapters and I must say this is indeed quite a good fic, and the action scene parts, especially in this latest chapter... very creative...
However, a few things to note:
The comment of Archer saying that the teamwork is poor may be true. However...
I think Rukia is too underpowered. Remember that she had decades of fighting experience advantage over Archer, so even if her sword style is a dancing style, it shouldn't have been the weak.
But overall, this story is excellent. I just hope you don't abandon it...
3ariados26Alright, I just finished reading all the Chapters and I must say this is indeed quite a good fic, and the action scene parts, especially in this latest chapter... very creative...
However, a few things to note:
The comment of Archer saying that the teamwork is poor may be true. However...
I think Rukia is too underpowered. Remember that she had decades of fighting experience advantage over Archer, so even if her sword style is a dancing style, it shouldn't have been the weak.
But overall, this story is excellent. I just hope you don't abandon it...