5/9 c17 Brit- Britt
Are you talking about me, and my review.
Yes! Alright? The one you got labeled "Guest" on 4/20 was me! I know my review was lame and dumb and I know you could have lived a long happy life without seeing it, trust me, I've been down this road before! I just didn't want to put my name on it because it seems like everytime I put my name on something... everytime i find something that i enjoy it I either hurt someone's feelings or I get bullied! So I'm sorry if I did hurt you, trust me it wasn't my intention. I would never want anyone to feel the way I felt, EVER! If you don't believe me, check out the reviews I got when I tried to get involved on Alvin and Brittany's Talk Show. Looks like she was right about me and most of all I was right about myself. I am a screw up.
I'll just leave you alone then. I promise I'll never review or hurt anyone ever again.

4/20 c2 Guest
Did you notice how at the beginning of the story they were fighting and now where we left off they're fighting again? It's almost exactly the same. They fight, they apologize, they get along: an endless cycle over and over and over again! It never changed! They found something that made them happy for a little while, like a drug that stupid kid uses. "Because it makes me feel good!" He proclaims; then that happy world he's been living in, that connection, that balance: it all comes crashing down! They're angry now, the cycle has started. Except this time, there's just this connection building up between them, I wounded if it can break the tension. I wonder if it can break the cycle, to make them happy in the end. Instead of the same thing replaying like a song on my iPod over and over! Where does it end? Does it end with a kiss? Does it end with a hug? Why does it happen? I think it's because they're both 'munks in denial who need to let go. That's what has to happen to end the endless flow. But Alvin's imbalance is like a rowboat in a sea of emotions: shaking and rocking him, almost riding him. He can barely stay afloat. Poor Alvin is stuck treading water, trying to find his way, back to the island of his Mentality, but his wall of hope is starting away. There's waves coming at him, waves of desire, waves of hunger, but the biggest one is the one that always knocks him 10 feet under. So what will happen to our chipmunk friend? We don't know yet, just wait till the end.
Till next time, I'm out! Keep writing! You really are doing great! (Just so you know, I've already gotten to chapter 16, I'm just rereading! :) )

4/6 c16 jursky214
I am sorry sawyer, but although you clearly stated that you won't too see a review of type "nice chapter", I must say that latest chapter was really nice. ;-) I especially liked the part where Simon was pleading at Alvin's waist for a second chance (and I don't think by that I'd like to see a lemon scene, but that they would be able to set up things right once again and live lives they used to before). Anyway on mention of food you made me hungry, I am calling pizza immediately! So, that's it. See you next time and have fun. ;-)

4/5 c15 6SimonSeville101
wow...since 09...

4/2 c15 6InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere
Congratulations on your children! Take as much time as you need ;) great chapter, by the way! I think you'd do just as fine without a co-writer. :)

11/20/2012 c14 InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere
Update soon! :)

7/17/2012 c14 Guest
Well now I feel real bad for Simon because now he realizes what he had done to Alvin in the attic without Alvin isn't wanting to admit his true feelings for Simon to himself let alone I'm curious to see just how Alvin deals with his feeling for Simon and when/if he will ever tell Simon.

Can't wait for the next chapter _

*Jibun wo shinjite