for ToyHammer Omake Collection2/3 c4 Kit
Awww... no more tyranids. :(
Awww... no more tyranids. :(
7/21/2012 c4 
6TheMysticalFett
Toy hammer omakes rule! That is all.
You seriously have ALOT of originality. Love it. Rock on!
6TheMysticalFettToy hammer omakes rule! That is all.
You seriously have ALOT of originality. Love it. Rock on!
7/10/2012 c4 2Officer Hot-Pants
You wanna have some real fun? Well, two other things infest old (or even new) houses fairly often: Raccoons and bats. Oh, and scorpions (which have a nasty habit of nesting in large numbers sometimes), spiders, centipedes, and more. Don't know if you have palmetto bugs where you live, but they're basically the Godzillas of roaches.
I'm pretty sure an adult raccoon would amount to a furry, adolescent squiggoth, and one with a few friends, at that! Better hope the Orks don't notice that fact...
And of course, let us not forget (actually, let us...) the most devilish of demons ever to defile our otherwise mostly fair planet: mosquitoes. *shudder* I am absolutely convinced the secret to world piece lies in banding together to finally do away with mosquitoes and gnats. Imagine the horror for our toy-boys, though: those things would be down-right deadly!
The pesticus extirminatus service... -us' is my favorite part, due to it's greater focus on the 40Kers. While I like Mike, seeing *them* coping with essentially being half (or perhaps 87/100ths) psychotic versions of the "Borrowers", and seeing them often subconciously integrating 21st century Earth culture into their own- and vice-versa- is just more entertaining then watching someone *else* watch it, so to speak.
2Officer Hot-PantsYou wanna have some real fun? Well, two other things infest old (or even new) houses fairly often: Raccoons and bats. Oh, and scorpions (which have a nasty habit of nesting in large numbers sometimes), spiders, centipedes, and more. Don't know if you have palmetto bugs where you live, but they're basically the Godzillas of roaches.
I'm pretty sure an adult raccoon would amount to a furry, adolescent squiggoth, and one with a few friends, at that! Better hope the Orks don't notice that fact...
And of course, let us not forget (actually, let us...) the most devilish of demons ever to defile our otherwise mostly fair planet: mosquitoes. *shudder* I am absolutely convinced the secret to world piece lies in banding together to finally do away with mosquitoes and gnats. Imagine the horror for our toy-boys, though: those things would be down-right deadly!
The pesticus extirminatus service... -us' is my favorite part, due to it's greater focus on the 40Kers. While I like Mike, seeing *them* coping with essentially being half (or perhaps 87/100ths) psychotic versions of the "Borrowers", and seeing them often subconciously integrating 21st century Earth culture into their own- and vice-versa- is just more entertaining then watching someone *else* watch it, so to speak.
2/11/2012 c4 2edao
Well, that was a nice change of mood, even though the latest chapter had an infestation of grimdark.
Sequence breaks or line breaks or whatever it is called, you need it. You need a way to show when teh focus shifts and scene changes.
Also, the problem with dropped words and letters persists.
The last I'd like to recommend is a timeline of some sort, or comment, to know at which point of Toyhammer the omake chapters take place, vice versa as well.
What I forgot to mention:
Your use of the 4th wall in Chapter 30 was adequately executed. Don't let those readers that didn't like it make you stop employing this tool.
2edaoWell, that was a nice change of mood, even though the latest chapter had an infestation of grimdark.
Sequence breaks or line breaks or whatever it is called, you need it. You need a way to show when teh focus shifts and scene changes.
Also, the problem with dropped words and letters persists.
The last I'd like to recommend is a timeline of some sort, or comment, to know at which point of Toyhammer the omake chapters take place, vice versa as well.
What I forgot to mention:
Your use of the 4th wall in Chapter 30 was adequately executed. Don't let those readers that didn't like it make you stop employing this tool.
9/2/2011 c4 1Eipok
"They were tasty. Better than the Soylens Viridians that were the usual fare for the Cadians." Rofl! Cadians eat Soylent Green? I sincerely hope they're just green wafers made out of plant-matter or something...
Nice references to MW too, first with Foley, now Ghost and MacTavish. It's a shame, though, that a few other reviewers have noticed the MW references, but I seem to be the only one that noticed the Halo ones. I mean seriously! This whole thing is an ODST reference! How can I be the only reviewer to mention that?
1Eipok"They were tasty. Better than the Soylens Viridians that were the usual fare for the Cadians." Rofl! Cadians eat Soylent Green? I sincerely hope they're just green wafers made out of plant-matter or something...
Nice references to MW too, first with Foley, now Ghost and MacTavish. It's a shame, though, that a few other reviewers have noticed the MW references, but I seem to be the only one that noticed the Halo ones. I mean seriously! This whole thing is an ODST reference! How can I be the only reviewer to mention that?
9/1/2011 c2 Eipok
Buck, Dutch, and Mickey... Now they just need Romeo and they'll be all set to take on the Prophets themselves. Didn't know you were a Halo fan, hehe.
Buck, Dutch, and Mickey... Now they just need Romeo and they'll be all set to take on the Prophets themselves. Didn't know you were a Halo fan, hehe.
5/1/2011 c4 Lol
Have you ever seen the fill night at the museum because in my head this was said in Octavian's voice
Are we declaring exterminatus micheal
And I laughed
Hard
Have you ever seen the fill night at the museum because in my head this was said in Octavian's voice
Are we declaring exterminatus micheal
And I laughed
Hard
4/21/2011 c3 16Aleron's Sword
Oh god, I could just imagine how much fun the Orkz will have on the 4th of July...X)
16Aleron's SwordOh god, I could just imagine how much fun the Orkz will have on the 4th of July...X)
1/13/2011 c4 Ancel
Dude(unsure of your gender,forgive me)... These stories are awesome! Loving the comedy. Please give more. :)
Dude(unsure of your gender,forgive me)... These stories are awesome! Loving the comedy. Please give more. :)
12/19/2010 c3 Mr. Sol
Well I certainly do enjoy the humor laced within your Omake stash my dear fellow. Quite the choice read to pass the time for me, keep it going and remember as our green-skined friend say SHARE DA LUUUUUURVE! :D
Well I certainly do enjoy the humor laced within your Omake stash my dear fellow. Quite the choice read to pass the time for me, keep it going and remember as our green-skined friend say SHARE DA LUUUUUURVE! :D
10/23/2010 c4 Antonio
This is great! Just one question, though. When are you gonna let the Inquisitor have his Exterminatus? In the immortal words of Coteaz, "Buses late? Exterminatus. Landlord a pain? Exterminatus. In my experience, tehre is no problem that cannot be treated by Extermminatus...
This is great! Just one question, though. When are you gonna let the Inquisitor have his Exterminatus? In the immortal words of Coteaz, "Buses late? Exterminatus. Landlord a pain? Exterminatus. In my experience, tehre is no problem that cannot be treated by Extermminatus...