for Rise of the Dragons Five12/25/2010 c11 Hysterical Insanity
Akiza would have won, totally! I imagined her reading Twilight, imagining herself as Bella, and arguing with herself over weather Divine or Yusei would make a better Edward!
~kitty
Merry Christmas!
Akiza would have won, totally! I imagined her reading Twilight, imagining herself as Bella, and arguing with herself over weather Divine or Yusei would make a better Edward!
~kitty
Merry Christmas!
12/25/2010 c10 Hysterical Insanity
I can see this happening! In fact, it probably did happen, and they didn't put it in the anime because it made them look childish. Which they are, more or less.
~kitty
Oh, and I tend to talk like these people are real, and it's a live program, reality show thing rather than an anime.
I can see this happening! In fact, it probably did happen, and they didn't put it in the anime because it made them look childish. Which they are, more or less.
~kitty
Oh, and I tend to talk like these people are real, and it's a live program, reality show thing rather than an anime.
10/20/2010 c26 
20jenuinetears
So it's the end. And a fitting last chapter. Looking out over the Satellite and New Domino- a very nice picture. I liked how Akiza had a new hair curler- the old one had bad memories. It was a nice intricate detail that Luna's powers would suddenly activate. And Goodwin is there also. I also enjoy the little hints of Aki/Yusei.
A promise, indeed.
-Jen
20jenuinetearsSo it's the end. And a fitting last chapter. Looking out over the Satellite and New Domino- a very nice picture. I liked how Akiza had a new hair curler- the old one had bad memories. It was a nice intricate detail that Luna's powers would suddenly activate. And Goodwin is there also. I also enjoy the little hints of Aki/Yusei.
A promise, indeed.
-Jen
10/17/2010 c26 Sunfrost
Lovely one shots! I enjoyed this fic :)
Lovely one shots! I enjoyed this fic :)
10/15/2010 c26 30AnimeKiwi369
I really can't wait for more! I think this is an AWESOME story! So please keep it up and please update soon. ;D
-AnimeKiwi369
30AnimeKiwi369I really can't wait for more! I think this is an AWESOME story! So please keep it up and please update soon. ;D
-AnimeKiwi369
10/15/2010 c26 briochee
Great chapter! I loved it!
But I noticed that your fic isn't complete yet...Does that mean there are still more chapters coming up? *Makes hopeful face*
Haha!
Great chapter! I loved it!
But I noticed that your fic isn't complete yet...Does that mean there are still more chapters coming up? *Makes hopeful face*
Haha!
10/10/2010 c25 20jenuinetears
Ahh, Luna is so adorable in this. So realistic, too. I love how her suggesting Carly was described as "dropped the bomb". XD Ahahaha, that was funny. And the image of Jack doing that to Luna is just so cuuute.
And then the Jack/Carly part. This is what I like about your style, there are these little touches that are just make it so great. Such as Carly knonwing Jack's kind of humor so well. And the last line is a nice ending, leaving the reader curious. :D
Can't wait for Z! Then again, I don't want it to be over o^o
-Jen
20jenuinetearsAhh, Luna is so adorable in this. So realistic, too. I love how her suggesting Carly was described as "dropped the bomb". XD Ahahaha, that was funny. And the image of Jack doing that to Luna is just so cuuute.
And then the Jack/Carly part. This is what I like about your style, there are these little touches that are just make it so great. Such as Carly knonwing Jack's kind of humor so well. And the last line is a nice ending, leaving the reader curious. :D
Can't wait for Z! Then again, I don't want it to be over o^o
-Jen
10/10/2010 c25 briochee
I just finished reading through all the chapters. AND IT WAS AWESOME~
You captured the character's personalities perfectly and I love your themes. You say so much in so little words.
I can't wait for the Z installment!
I just finished reading through all the chapters. AND IT WAS AWESOME~
You captured the character's personalities perfectly and I love your themes. You say so much in so little words.
I can't wait for the Z installment!
10/10/2010 c25 2blue-espeon
Hello! I just wanted to say that I like this fic. It's quite good, and the characters are pretty much all believable. c: Nice job!
Oh, and Z=Zenith. c:
2blue-espeonHello! I just wanted to say that I like this fic. It's quite good, and the characters are pretty much all believable. c: Nice job!
Oh, and Z=Zenith. c:
10/9/2010 c25 6Teal Phoenix
Aww! ^^ It's adorable! Both the pairing (yes, I admit I'm a Scoopshipper...) and Luna and Jack's interactions. Absolutely wonderful. And It made me smile, for that, I give you muffins. *gives fresh-baked muffins*
6Teal PhoenixAww! ^^ It's adorable! Both the pairing (yes, I admit I'm a Scoopshipper...) and Luna and Jack's interactions. Absolutely wonderful. And It made me smile, for that, I give you muffins. *gives fresh-baked muffins*
10/6/2010 c24 20jenuinetears
Yes, I have been here since KnightxXxWitch. And soo many PM's since then... kekekeke.
I liked Winsome. Luna is such a darling little girl, even Goodwin can't deny her charm. :3
As for Xenophobia. (...never heard that word before. Or maybe yes, but in some strange, odd place.) I liked Yusei having attitude. It's so rare to find a Yusei that steps out of the hero guy who is blah blah blah zone. And the conflict... :) Perfectly IC, and the dialogue was very much enjoyable. And such a good idea. The last line leaves you thinking.\
-Jen
20jenuinetearsYes, I have been here since KnightxXxWitch. And soo many PM's since then... kekekeke.
I liked Winsome. Luna is such a darling little girl, even Goodwin can't deny her charm. :3
As for Xenophobia. (...never heard that word before. Or maybe yes, but in some strange, odd place.) I liked Yusei having attitude. It's so rare to find a Yusei that steps out of the hero guy who is blah blah blah zone. And the conflict... :) Perfectly IC, and the dialogue was very much enjoyable. And such a good idea. The last line leaves you thinking.\
-Jen
10/3/2010 c24 6Teal Phoenix
Hoo-ah! Recognition! *dances*
Now for the actual review. ^^
As always, awesome word choice. I also like the fact that you tied in the massive amount of New Domino's hatred for the Satellite in a way that was actually realistic. And aside from that, I just really liked the way Goodwin explained it to Yusei. ^^ Great job.
6Teal PhoenixHoo-ah! Recognition! *dances*
Now for the actual review. ^^
As always, awesome word choice. I also like the fact that you tied in the massive amount of New Domino's hatred for the Satellite in a way that was actually realistic. And aside from that, I just really liked the way Goodwin explained it to Yusei. ^^ Great job.
9/27/2010 c22 20jenuinetears
Oh, Jack. :) He acted just as I would've expected him to. He went to apologize to Yusei... but then he found out that he was already forgiven... and he got ** and Yusei and wanted to punch him. XD Perfect ICness for this.
I liked the bit about how Yusei needs time to think too.
-Jen
20jenuinetearsOh, Jack. :) He acted just as I would've expected him to. He went to apologize to Yusei... but then he found out that he was already forgiven... and he got ** and Yusei and wanted to punch him. XD Perfect ICness for this.
I liked the bit about how Yusei needs time to think too.
-Jen