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2GotCinnamonPunkC13
hehe.
heheh.
I have way to many of these in my favorites box xD
I cant be unhappy about that tho xDDDDDDDD
2GotCinnamonPunkC13hehe.
heheh.
I have way to many of these in my favorites box xD
I cant be unhappy about that tho xDDDDDDDD
9/12/2010 c1 29Unbidden-Angel
I wish to get the word out. There is a war on . Either join or leave. You may remain neutral. It doesn't matter. We can't let the RB win. If we do, they will delete every story on for 1 reason or another. We will not fail! We will not fall! We will not GIVE IN! JOIN NOW! Send a review or PM for info.
29Unbidden-AngelI wish to get the word out. There is a war on . Either join or leave. You may remain neutral. It doesn't matter. We can't let the RB win. If we do, they will delete every story on for 1 reason or another. We will not fail! We will not fall! We will not GIVE IN! JOIN NOW! Send a review or PM for info.
3/2/2010 c1 10ai-08
sexy as hell. made my heart skip a beat or two~ and very well written. two thumbs up!
10ai-08sexy as hell. made my heart skip a beat or two~ and very well written. two thumbs up!
2/23/2010 c1 28MiyukiShinodaMindFreak
^^_^^ Konnichiwa[sorry, I'm too obsessed with Japanese stuff] Jack Of Chocolate! I have been searching for Watson X Holmes fanfic[and also in the process of writing one, XD] and this is one of the best I've read on this site. I love the way you describe about Watson's inner feelings & Holmes' "I am a happy go lucky dude & I don't care what you say" personality. A very good one. And please do continue writing more.
ps. I did feel the same way as you when I was watching the movie. XD
28MiyukiShinodaMindFreak^^_^^ Konnichiwa[sorry, I'm too obsessed with Japanese stuff] Jack Of Chocolate! I have been searching for Watson X Holmes fanfic[and also in the process of writing one, XD] and this is one of the best I've read on this site. I love the way you describe about Watson's inner feelings & Holmes' "I am a happy go lucky dude & I don't care what you say" personality. A very good one. And please do continue writing more.
ps. I did feel the same way as you when I was watching the movie. XD
2/2/2010 c1 10Feeble Pen
Great story. I really enjoyed it. The only criticism (I probably have no right to criticize) i have is in the last two full paragraphs "At that, the detective...making his way down again." is very well written by all means. Just the use of "clavical" and "sternum" were too scientific and almost pulled you away from the scene. Other than that it was great. Don't be afraid to do the "bj" scene. The way you write I'm sure you could pull it off easily.
10Feeble PenGreat story. I really enjoyed it. The only criticism (I probably have no right to criticize) i have is in the last two full paragraphs "At that, the detective...making his way down again." is very well written by all means. Just the use of "clavical" and "sternum" were too scientific and almost pulled you away from the scene. Other than that it was great. Don't be afraid to do the "bj" scene. The way you write I'm sure you could pull it off easily.
1/24/2010 c1 Rissika
Good job!
I really like how you showed it and I much more prefer Holmes with is in love with Watson and Watson which is not aweres of it.
Good job!
I really like how you showed it and I much more prefer Holmes with is in love with Watson and Watson which is not aweres of it.
1/16/2010 c1 NOTCONCERNED
It was well writen and quite sexy... poor watson, he never stood a chance XD
Also loved the "elementary my dear" part, it was so classic and well done.
It was well writen and quite sexy... poor watson, he never stood a chance XD
Also loved the "elementary my dear" part, it was so classic and well done.
1/15/2010 c1 saph-kira33
I'd say you've got plenty of talent :) wonderfully written
I quite enjoyed it so thankyou, do keep up the good work
I'd say you've got plenty of talent :) wonderfully written
I quite enjoyed it so thankyou, do keep up the good work
1/9/2010 c1 Shella
The slash was inevitable, and this particular instance highly enjoyable ^_^
The slash was inevitable, and this particular instance highly enjoyable ^_^
1/6/2010 c1 1Yankee White
Brilliant. Very hot too. :) Overall I think your style of writing is wonderful. Great development of the characters and the moral dilemma with Watson.
Keep it up, I'll read anything else you write.
1Yankee WhiteBrilliant. Very hot too. :) Overall I think your style of writing is wonderful. Great development of the characters and the moral dilemma with Watson.
Keep it up, I'll read anything else you write.