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10/23/2010 c1 4Liberrrty
Very good! I really liked the dream. Well done.
9/25/2010 c1 1212121142
The ending to this made me tear up a bit. I know how horrid it feels to be so seething jealous, and I think you've got it with Sirius. Though.. I wish I could see more to his character, such as why he feels anguished about Anthy.

It's a little unnerving to see him get wiped out entirely from all memory, let alone Anthy's stoic reaction to his death. How cold-hearted it is to act as if nothing has happened.
1/6/2010 c1 James Birdsong
Great
12/30/2009 c1 40Setsumi-san
Ho. Ly. Crap.

If I didn't know any better I'd say this was a mising episode from the Black Rose saga. Your prose was a little flowery at times, but I loved the characterization. Keep it up.

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