for His Mission8/19/2010 c4 kagome8657
i think u should make a sequal where she brings him back...
i think u should make a sequal where she brings him back...
1/12/2010 c4 
17yamishun
Sorry, I couldn't help but press the next chapter instead of clicking the review button first.
I think by what I previously typed, it's obvious that I consider this as a "page turner". The foundation of the story is pretty good and Ulquiorra's wrong interpretations with Orihime's reactions were perfect.
Overall, I like this fic a lot. It's such a shame Ulquiorra died. But I'm addicted to bittersweet situations like that.
17yamishunSorry, I couldn't help but press the next chapter instead of clicking the review button first.
I think by what I previously typed, it's obvious that I consider this as a "page turner". The foundation of the story is pretty good and Ulquiorra's wrong interpretations with Orihime's reactions were perfect.
Overall, I like this fic a lot. It's such a shame Ulquiorra died. But I'm addicted to bittersweet situations like that.
1/3/2010 c4 1shohei
Awesome :3 All the added bits fit perfectly, and Ulquiorra's change of heart looks very believable.
And nice touch with the open, ambiguous ending. Thank you for writing :)
1shoheiAwesome :3 All the added bits fit perfectly, and Ulquiorra's change of heart looks very believable.
And nice touch with the open, ambiguous ending. Thank you for writing :)
1/2/2010 c4 3deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover
In trying to succeed in earning her love, he had fallen for her.
So poetic.
I hope for a UlqiHime happy ending
Can't wait till the next chapter!
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3deathnoteno1fan-codegeassloverIn trying to succeed in earning her love, he had fallen for her.
So poetic.
I hope for a UlqiHime happy ending
Can't wait till the next chapter!
UP-DATE!REAL!SOON!
1/2/2010 c2 deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover
This one line made me sad an hitericaly happy at once
one gem—a black diamond. (friend gave me a black dimond ,he likes me .*feel sorry for him*opps sorry ramboling)
Her reactions to his court =LMAO
puppy...LMAO
This one line made me sad an hitericaly happy at once
one gem—a black diamond. (friend gave me a black dimond ,he likes me .*feel sorry for him*opps sorry ramboling)
Her reactions to his court =LMAO
puppy...LMAO
1/2/2010 c1 deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover
LOL!Aizen picked an emotionless Arrancar to court a modern age 15 year old .that dude is truely twisted.
LOL!Aizen picked an emotionless Arrancar to court a modern age 15 year old .that dude is truely twisted.
12/31/2009 c4 LilBrokenDolly
Aside from the fact that I bit my tongue while laughing at the "A...a puppy?" part, I really enjoyed reading this story! I think you ended it perfectly. I think both characters were IC and well written. Ulquiorra's attempts at courtship were hilarious.
Great job!
Aside from the fact that I bit my tongue while laughing at the "A...a puppy?" part, I really enjoyed reading this story! I think you ended it perfectly. I think both characters were IC and well written. Ulquiorra's attempts at courtship were hilarious.
Great job!
12/31/2009 c1 Emily Paling
ok. This is good aside from the fact that I don't know a whole lot about the show u based it on. I like it. Except for the insult. ' human females are unnecessarily emotional' not always so true but I suppose it is for the most part and it makes sense that u put here in this short story. thought it was good. just something u felt like u had to write? lol.
ok. This is good aside from the fact that I don't know a whole lot about the show u based it on. I like it. Except for the insult. ' human females are unnecessarily emotional' not always so true but I suppose it is for the most part and it makes sense that u put here in this short story. thought it was good. just something u felt like u had to write? lol.