for Unusual Circumstances: Into the Wild2/5 c1 Guest
how is spottedleaf jaypaws mentor when spottedleaf dies in like the first book?
how is spottedleaf jaypaws mentor when spottedleaf dies in like the first book?
1/22 c14 Rosefur of thunderclan
oooh yellowfang! i 3 yellowfang!
i 3 ravenpawXhollypaw! please hurry and update...PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY! I WILL DIE OF HEART BREAK IF YOU DONT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I LOVE IT!
anyways bye!
oooh yellowfang! i 3 yellowfang!
i 3 ravenpawXhollypaw! please hurry and update...PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY! I WILL DIE OF HEART BREAK IF YOU DONT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I LOVE IT!
anyways bye!
7/24/2012 c14 Guest
This is really good! Please udate soon :).
This is really good! Please udate soon :).
7/21/2012 c5 
69The Gone Angel Gives Brofist
I love this story :) What are the pairings? Will Spottedleaf live?
69The Gone Angel Gives BrofistI love this story :) What are the pairings? Will Spottedleaf live?
7/6/2012 c13 8AlyDmy
awwww I am totally shipping Holly/Raven right now! XD
Great chapter and I can't wait to read more!
8AlyDmyawwww I am totally shipping Holly/Raven right now! XD
Great chapter and I can't wait to read more!
6/22/2012 c13 1SunlitShadow
Aww. Hollypaw and Ravenpaw are so cute together! I love your story so far. The idea is very creative. I know the story is about Hollypaw Lionpaw and Jaypaw, but I'd kinda like to see what Firepaw thinks of all this, or even Graypaw Ravenpaw Sandpaw or Dustpaw. Thinks for writing this awesome story!
1SunlitShadowAww. Hollypaw and Ravenpaw are so cute together! I love your story so far. The idea is very creative. I know the story is about Hollypaw Lionpaw and Jaypaw, but I'd kinda like to see what Firepaw thinks of all this, or even Graypaw Ravenpaw Sandpaw or Dustpaw. Thinks for writing this awesome story!
6/20/2012 c12 2Twistedstep
:D
I really like this story, and I'm glad you updated.
I've been one of those lurkers, reading but not reviewing, that kind of thing.
This chapter was very good c:
.Twistedstep.
2Twistedstep:D
I really like this story, and I'm glad you updated.
I've been one of those lurkers, reading but not reviewing, that kind of thing.
This chapter was very good c:
.Twistedstep.
6/20/2012 c12 6Okami Endless
Could you maybe make a Hollypaw chapter next? Hollypaw/leaf is one of my favorite characters!
Wolfy
6Okami EndlessCould you maybe make a Hollypaw chapter next? Hollypaw/leaf is one of my favorite characters!
Wolfy
5/10/2012 c9 6KoolKat SuperStar DareDevil
I wonder what Jaypaw Lionpaw and Hollypaw are thinking of younger Firestar. Cant wait for the next chapter
6KoolKat SuperStar DareDevilI wonder what Jaypaw Lionpaw and Hollypaw are thinking of younger Firestar. Cant wait for the next chapter
5/9/2012 c9 Pantherstar101
This is awesome! I see no mistakes!
This is awesome! I see no mistakes!