for No More4/9/2010 c1
10Darin's-Sis
Wow! Can't believe I let that wonderful little story sit in my inbox for so long. Awesome job missy!
10Darin's-SisWow! Can't believe I let that wonderful little story sit in my inbox for so long. Awesome job missy!
1/13/2010 c1
15OuroborosSnyder
*Thud* LOL I'm writing your review in your email now but I figured I should leave a review as well. =) Oh please do continue this. You know me, I love it! And I totally felt the same way about that picture (as you already know).
~Snyder~
15OuroborosSnyder*Thud* LOL I'm writing your review in your email now but I figured I should leave a review as well. =) Oh please do continue this. You know me, I love it! And I totally felt the same way about that picture (as you already know).
~Snyder~
1/11/2010 c1
36DixieH
I like the way she blocks everything out in the beginning. It's like she's coming to a decision and once she's made the decision nobody can talk her out of it. I like Eames driven and focused. Good read! - Dix.
36DixieHI like the way she blocks everything out in the beginning. It's like she's coming to a decision and once she's made the decision nobody can talk her out of it. I like Eames driven and focused. Good read! - Dix.
1/8/2010 c1
7LILKENNY
Great chapter and it goes extremely well with the image. I can very much imagine her snapping like this and I agree that it's probably Ross who'll die or at least get wounded since they're sitting in his office in the second picture. I can't really imagine they'll actually show something like this in the show but it would be so great to have them get together like this.
The story is kind of screaming for a sequel, so I hope you'll someday find the time to write one but if not it's still a good way to end it like that ;)
7LILKENNYGreat chapter and it goes extremely well with the image. I can very much imagine her snapping like this and I agree that it's probably Ross who'll die or at least get wounded since they're sitting in his office in the second picture. I can't really imagine they'll actually show something like this in the show but it would be so great to have them get together like this.
The story is kind of screaming for a sequel, so I hope you'll someday find the time to write one but if not it's still a good way to end it like that ;)
1/6/2010 c1
42The Mominator
I am always interested in how and why people get inspired to write a story, I myself get inspired by the strangest things, anyway fine work on this. Always ready and willing to read a post from you. Later
42The MominatorI am always interested in how and why people get inspired to write a story, I myself get inspired by the strangest things, anyway fine work on this. Always ready and willing to read a post from you. Later
1/2/2010 c1 LadyBlueDevil86
Oh, if only those stinkers on the show would write something as good as this! Thanks for the Happy New Year story. :-)
Oh, if only those stinkers on the show would write something as good as this! Thanks for the Happy New Year story. :-)
1/2/2010 c1
3mitzvahgirl
I loved it. Somehow I always pictured Bobby as the one to need to get away, to leave but I think there is more impact with Eames having enough of the job. I would love to see USA end the series this way, but I don't think we will be that lucky.
Great fic! Thank you for writing.
3mitzvahgirlI loved it. Somehow I always pictured Bobby as the one to need to get away, to leave but I think there is more impact with Eames having enough of the job. I would love to see USA end the series this way, but I don't think we will be that lucky.
Great fic! Thank you for writing.
1/2/2010 c1 besacco
You do really great work as always. You are one of the the few writers that it does not matter how many times I read your stories I never get sick of reading them.
You do really great work as always. You are one of the the few writers that it does not matter how many times I read your stories I never get sick of reading them.
1/2/2010 c1
2Medea Callous
I really liked this! And I hear you about the WIPs. I'll take whatever I can get from your crafty little mind!
2Medea CallousI really liked this! And I hear you about the WIPs. I'll take whatever I can get from your crafty little mind!
1/2/2010 c1
48superfelix
He senses that she's no longer Eames, and that probably, she will never be Eames again...wow, great line.
"You - you wanna come home with me?"...sigh.
"don't analyze this. Just give me this."...snicker.
"I don't want to feel death any more. I want to feel alive, and free, and I want to feel love…and I want to feel all these things with you."...wow, great words.
"Positive…I want you…I need you to make me feel alive."...mhm, really great little one.
I hope you'll continue it in a second story. But I understand that you can just do it your own way.
48superfelixHe senses that she's no longer Eames, and that probably, she will never be Eames again...wow, great line.
"You - you wanna come home with me?"...sigh.
"don't analyze this. Just give me this."...snicker.
"I don't want to feel death any more. I want to feel alive, and free, and I want to feel love…and I want to feel all these things with you."...wow, great words.
"Positive…I want you…I need you to make me feel alive."...mhm, really great little one.
I hope you'll continue it in a second story. But I understand that you can just do it your own way.
1/1/2010 c1
98CycloneT
I really like the idea of this. You had some great one-liners in here that managed to say so much. I hope those pics mean what you've written them to mean. :)
98CycloneTI really like the idea of this. You had some great one-liners in here that managed to say so much. I hope those pics mean what you've written them to mean. :)
1/1/2010 c1
2rindy713
as a one-shot, this is terrific. if there's a sequel as you feel time allows you, i am game! i could see this happening. alex is always the grounded one, the one keeping everything under control, and i could see her finally just having more than she can swallow - and looking to bobby for what she needs to heal her. at first, when i read that line "probably, she will never be eames again," i felt sad. but then i thought maybe that's because from now on she will be alex, and that's great for both of them in the long run.
2rindy713as a one-shot, this is terrific. if there's a sequel as you feel time allows you, i am game! i could see this happening. alex is always the grounded one, the one keeping everything under control, and i could see her finally just having more than she can swallow - and looking to bobby for what she needs to heal her. at first, when i read that line "probably, she will never be eames again," i felt sad. but then i thought maybe that's because from now on she will be alex, and that's great for both of them in the long run.
