for Distractions8/30/2010 c1 
1axel100
While I like your writing style, this one come across as incomplete. Freddy just oggles her? I realize you're writing in the moment but you could have gone further with this. Thanks for writing anyway.
1axel100While I like your writing style, this one come across as incomplete. Freddy just oggles her? I realize you're writing in the moment but you could have gone further with this. Thanks for writing anyway.
1/5/2010 c1 Lanter
Well this has just become my favorite (one-shot) New Year’s Seddie story. This is well written, nicely done.
Well this has just become my favorite (one-shot) New Year’s Seddie story. This is well written, nicely done.