for The Eldest Brother2/20/2012 c1 
12yamina-chan
Here we have an other beautifull story of yours. And I do call it a story.
I like the insight you're granting the reader and I again I have to compliment on your ability to catch the essence of the characters. Well done =)
12yamina-chanHere we have an other beautifull story of yours. And I do call it a story.
I like the insight you're granting the reader and I again I have to compliment on your ability to catch the essence of the characters. Well done =)
7/8/2010 c1 1shadowsamurai83
Oh...wow...that was just...wow. I'm speechless! Brilliantly written, so very, very true, and just...quite moving, really. I loved it, I really did. Especially this part - 'He had a family. A wife named Enterprise, four hundred or so assorted children, and two brothers to help him care for them.' An excellent story, thanks for sharing.
1shadowsamurai83Oh...wow...that was just...wow. I'm speechless! Brilliantly written, so very, very true, and just...quite moving, really. I loved it, I really did. Especially this part - 'He had a family. A wife named Enterprise, four hundred or so assorted children, and two brothers to help him care for them.' An excellent story, thanks for sharing.
2/10/2010 c1 Stonesundial
OMG adorable. It's a bit farther this side of sap than my normal taste but I love it anyway. "Duels or possession or diseases or accidents..." They do get into every conceivable scrape, don't they? I really like Kirk and Spock sympathizing with each other: "Little brothers. What can you do?" and lots of other lines... It's all so warm-fuzzy-making.
OMG adorable. It's a bit farther this side of sap than my normal taste but I love it anyway. "Duels or possession or diseases or accidents..." They do get into every conceivable scrape, don't they? I really like Kirk and Spock sympathizing with each other: "Little brothers. What can you do?" and lots of other lines... It's all so warm-fuzzy-making.
1/19/2010 c1 5Kamai6
That is wow... just amazing! The brotherly love, the description and the power of it, wow just wow!
You write so well.
Please do keep writing!
Kamai6
5Kamai6That is wow... just amazing! The brotherly love, the description and the power of it, wow just wow!
You write so well.
Please do keep writing!
Kamai6
1/16/2010 c1 33Schildkroete
Sweet, gentle, and realistic look at their relationship. I like it a lot!
33SchildkroeteSweet, gentle, and realistic look at their relationship. I like it a lot!
1/4/2010 c1 27MaryChodan
As I indicated in my review of your other story, I have been a fan of Star Trek since 1966. My favorite has been, and still is, Leonard McCoy.
Thank you for this beautifully written character study. It is refreshing-and rare-to see the contemplative, quiet part of James Kirk. You did him credit...you captured his voice.
Even better, you showed us the depth of his love and concern for his friend and brother, Leonard McCoy (who was also well captured).
The 'big three' are definitely safe in your hands. I hope we will see more of your fine writing in the Star Trek universe.
27MaryChodanAs I indicated in my review of your other story, I have been a fan of Star Trek since 1966. My favorite has been, and still is, Leonard McCoy.
Thank you for this beautifully written character study. It is refreshing-and rare-to see the contemplative, quiet part of James Kirk. You did him credit...you captured his voice.
Even better, you showed us the depth of his love and concern for his friend and brother, Leonard McCoy (who was also well captured).
The 'big three' are definitely safe in your hands. I hope we will see more of your fine writing in the Star Trek universe.
1/4/2010 c1 9DocJorgensen
Aw... Very well done. Your Kirk is very reflective and McCoy is just perfect. You've captured them very well.
Keep up the good work!
K.
9DocJorgensenAw... Very well done. Your Kirk is very reflective and McCoy is just perfect. You've captured them very well.
Keep up the good work!
K.