for And She Was Pretty8/27/2011 c1 Me
You brought this to attention. Thank you.
You brought this to attention. Thank you.
12/11/2010 c1 
11Corinne 22
Well, shit! I never reviewed this on here! You sent me the copy in the mail and never thought to look it up on here to give you the love it deserves.
You did the angst well. :) It leaves you walking away and feeling sad after you read it. Even though it didn't go to that extent, I had something like that happen to me at work recently. And, even though I took action against it, some there say I had it coming or started it all. It's all so disgusting and messed up. For years women have had to deal with this kind of shit. You can say we have equal rights now, but not in some sense. We are still viewed as weak and, what's sad the most, women are teaming up against other women. She went through something that will fuck her up for life and some of the other girls just think it's her fault. If that was my daughter, I wouldn't be in the house sighing over her not being able to sleep. I'd be in jail for killing those sick bastards. I can't stand the thought that there are too many people out there in this world that I have to save my kids from. (And now you know the feeling, too. New mommy. hehe)
I want to wrap her up in my arms and heal her.
I love this story and, even though it's been a year, I still grin so hard at seeing this. When I first read this, I cried. It's not an easy thing to be able to make me cry at a fic, either. I've been missing you and all of our past times and thought I'd pop on your page before leaving the house. I need to e-mail you soon when time gets off my back...
Love you and miss you!
11Corinne 22Well, shit! I never reviewed this on here! You sent me the copy in the mail and never thought to look it up on here to give you the love it deserves.
You did the angst well. :) It leaves you walking away and feeling sad after you read it. Even though it didn't go to that extent, I had something like that happen to me at work recently. And, even though I took action against it, some there say I had it coming or started it all. It's all so disgusting and messed up. For years women have had to deal with this kind of shit. You can say we have equal rights now, but not in some sense. We are still viewed as weak and, what's sad the most, women are teaming up against other women. She went through something that will fuck her up for life and some of the other girls just think it's her fault. If that was my daughter, I wouldn't be in the house sighing over her not being able to sleep. I'd be in jail for killing those sick bastards. I can't stand the thought that there are too many people out there in this world that I have to save my kids from. (And now you know the feeling, too. New mommy. hehe)
I want to wrap her up in my arms and heal her.
I love this story and, even though it's been a year, I still grin so hard at seeing this. When I first read this, I cried. It's not an easy thing to be able to make me cry at a fic, either. I've been missing you and all of our past times and thought I'd pop on your page before leaving the house. I need to e-mail you soon when time gets off my back...
Love you and miss you!
10/22/2010 c1 57MidnightsPhantom
awww when rosalie told her story in eclipse when i saw it i just wanted to jump through the screen and hug her! this has to stop rape has to stop. who's with me?
57MidnightsPhantomawww when rosalie told her story in eclipse when i saw it i just wanted to jump through the screen and hug her! this has to stop rape has to stop. who's with me?
5/7/2010 c1 3Treacherous Darkness
This was beautiful. A little unrealistic what with all the people walking by and watching, but gorgeous and well written none the less. Kudos.
3Treacherous DarknessThis was beautiful. A little unrealistic what with all the people walking by and watching, but gorgeous and well written none the less. Kudos.
1/20/2010 c1 Alitrona
K, Argh this is hard. I hate rape fics, hate them. A major, well one of the the major issues I have with orginized religion and the bible is the way woman are protrayed as the temptress, absolving men from wrong doing, this seems to be what Rose is feeling and it is something breed into woman from the year dot. To me Rose was still chaste and I wanted to shake her by her over sized sweater for thinking otherwise, it makes me rage... but then I suppose it's meant to evoke a strong reaction, so you hit the right mark.
Having said that, I think you are a truely talented writer and the story, as disturbing as it was, flowed effortlessly. Your decription placed the reader right inside her mind with her suffering and her efforts to fight, finally as her spirit was broken. A stunning piece.
K, Argh this is hard. I hate rape fics, hate them. A major, well one of the the major issues I have with orginized religion and the bible is the way woman are protrayed as the temptress, absolving men from wrong doing, this seems to be what Rose is feeling and it is something breed into woman from the year dot. To me Rose was still chaste and I wanted to shake her by her over sized sweater for thinking otherwise, it makes me rage... but then I suppose it's meant to evoke a strong reaction, so you hit the right mark.
Having said that, I think you are a truely talented writer and the story, as disturbing as it was, flowed effortlessly. Your decription placed the reader right inside her mind with her suffering and her efforts to fight, finally as her spirit was broken. A stunning piece.
1/15/2010 c1 9Kristen325
Really sad, but it was a really nice story still. You should write a sequel! :)
9Kristen325Really sad, but it was a really nice story still. You should write a sequel! :)
1/6/2010 c1 15Twilightobsessed09
Intense piece..
It was so hard to read yet beautifully written it captured everything perfectly..
I agree that it shouldn't matter the type of person this horrible ordeal happens to just a fact that 'no means no'.
This is such an awful offense that happens all most daily to women and men and children alike.. It is degrading and disgusting of a human being to inflict this on a another...
What angered me also were the comments made by the idiots around her and the positively worst part was when she was going through this ordeal that out of everyone that past no one stopped to help and some even enjoyed the view how digusting!
Powerful words indeed!
Catch u on the next fic!
15Twilightobsessed09Intense piece..
It was so hard to read yet beautifully written it captured everything perfectly..
I agree that it shouldn't matter the type of person this horrible ordeal happens to just a fact that 'no means no'.
This is such an awful offense that happens all most daily to women and men and children alike.. It is degrading and disgusting of a human being to inflict this on a another...
What angered me also were the comments made by the idiots around her and the positively worst part was when she was going through this ordeal that out of everyone that past no one stopped to help and some even enjoyed the view how digusting!
Powerful words indeed!
Catch u on the next fic!
1/5/2010 c1 2O. N. Labbit
Okay, so I read this last night and then my internet connection messed up and I wanted to be first to post, but then... gr. ;P
Sorry, but I really wanted to review this. :)
I loved your writing in this. This one line was spectacular:
"White stains easily, you know?" my mother had warned me dutifully.
The memories placed just at the right length throughout so that it wouldn't mess up the flow of her nowaday, was also really well done.
It was Rose - my fave.
All in all this was so good. Thanks for writing.
Great One-Shot!
~Labbit :)
P.S. How are you doing these days?
2O. N. LabbitOkay, so I read this last night and then my internet connection messed up and I wanted to be first to post, but then... gr. ;P
Sorry, but I really wanted to review this. :)
I loved your writing in this. This one line was spectacular:
"White stains easily, you know?" my mother had warned me dutifully.
The memories placed just at the right length throughout so that it wouldn't mess up the flow of her nowaday, was also really well done.
It was Rose - my fave.
All in all this was so good. Thanks for writing.
Great One-Shot!
~Labbit :)
P.S. How are you doing these days?
1/5/2010 c1 3ShouldHaveStuckToReading
Whoa bb. That was some heavy angst. There were some disturbing lines in there: the "you were pretty" thing got me, and the conversation she heard in the bathroom - awful!
Really, really well written. Corinne's gonna love it!
3ShouldHaveStuckToReadingWhoa bb. That was some heavy angst. There were some disturbing lines in there: the "you were pretty" thing got me, and the conversation she heard in the bathroom - awful!
Really, really well written. Corinne's gonna love it!