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3/12/2011 c1 25kidenagain
"He tilts his head, blinks slowly and stares right back at his best friend. His head throbs as he rolls his head back, because fuck is Finn tall: tall like his dad was, and everything that's always been out of his reach."

This line, just about forever. I mean really. Perfection.
5/5/2010 c1 Tauriell
Wow, I cant believe this has only gotten two reviews before now! Generally I love reading Puck/Finn bromance stories no matter what they're like, simply because they're are so few on this site! But yours was really special, I must say. It's funny, because before now, if I had imagined the two of them in a fight, I would have thought for certain Puck would come out the winner. But you pull this off so well, and the way Puck was so reluctant to fight to begin with was just so... Out of character for him, yet so in character considering it was Finn involved, if that makes any sense.

My favorite part was when Puck opens his eyes and sees Mr.Schue looking down at him, and the fact that he and his classmates have to practically carry Puck to the nurses ward, he's so beat up. Puck rambling desperately at them that it was his fault, not Finn's just made the whole scenario ten times sadder, too, especially with the weight of Mr.Schue's disappointment on top! I felt really sorry for him. A vulnerable Puck aint something we see very often, but it was really sweet.

Well, hope to see you writing more soon!
All the best,
Autumn
3/30/2010 c1 Dancer167
Oh my gosh I just had to review this after seeing you only got one because this totally deserves more!

There's not many Finn/Puck friendship stories, but yours was super! I can't tell you how harrowing the fight scene was to read, you made the pain and the struggle so clear. The part where you wrote Puck calling after him saying you're my best friend was so painful to read, because you really built up how undone the character has become by then. The part about Mr Schue was great too, very emotional without becoming too melodramatic and out of character.

I'd love it for you to write more Glee stories cos they're my fav characters even if they're quite different! Well done you fab writer :)
1/5/2010 c1 Crimson-Kiss17
Venturing into the Glee fandom is a risky move but I was thrilled to see you'd taken the dive as I adore your Gossip Girl stories. This was very well written and the characters fleshed out well. Any preferences on pairings?

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