for Fight Night, Round 21/2/2011 c1 AgentCharlesCarmichael
Please continue to write these! Very fun, and just the thought of Yvonne and Summer...
Please continue to write these! Very fun, and just the thought of Yvonne and Summer...
1/24/2010 c1 NickyR
WOW liam2, with wep's adorable psycho and your fight nights it keeps me entertained for a while. thank you for part 2, i look forward to part 3, but feel bad for the woman who will end up in plastic at the end of it, haha ;)
WOW liam2, with wep's adorable psycho and your fight nights it keeps me entertained for a while. thank you for part 2, i look forward to part 3, but feel bad for the woman who will end up in plastic at the end of it, haha ;)
1/14/2010 c1
4Fire From Above
I don't have words to describe how awesome this was. I was laughing quite a bit. I think other reviewers have already said the most entertaining parts.
4Fire From AboveI don't have words to describe how awesome this was. I was laughing quite a bit. I think other reviewers have already said the most entertaining parts.
1/13/2010 c1
5Taliesinjoe
Man i loved it until the pshycho maniac thing, it was a abit over the top, kinda felt disgusted at the end :/ I love the fights, like the first round was cool too, but killing like that? i'm sorry, it's not really funny amymore.
5TaliesinjoeMan i loved it until the pshycho maniac thing, it was a abit over the top, kinda felt disgusted at the end :/ I love the fights, like the first round was cool too, but killing like that? i'm sorry, it's not really funny amymore.
1/12/2010 c1
2jagged1
Hahah! Great one liners for Casey, and a great way to start the work day overall. Hilarious. Thanks.
2jagged1Hahah! Great one liners for Casey, and a great way to start the work day overall. Hilarious. Thanks.
1/10/2010 c1
15crystal.elements
My god, Liam, I don't think I've EVER laughed so much reading a fic before this one. Absolutely, inexplicably HILARIOUS. I can't even name a favorite part, because I'd basically rewrite your entire chapter. But I have to say, what stood out the most was the circumcision, Casey's Diary, and Sarah's girl distractions.
This was a GREAT way to start of my night of Chucktivities. I'm kinda glad I was on a ski trip this weekend - got to save this story (along with AP, which is what I'm reading next) for Chuck premiere night! Hell yes, baby. :D
Onto more comedy!
15crystal.elementsMy god, Liam, I don't think I've EVER laughed so much reading a fic before this one. Absolutely, inexplicably HILARIOUS. I can't even name a favorite part, because I'd basically rewrite your entire chapter. But I have to say, what stood out the most was the circumcision, Casey's Diary, and Sarah's girl distractions.
This was a GREAT way to start of my night of Chucktivities. I'm kinda glad I was on a ski trip this weekend - got to save this story (along with AP, which is what I'm reading next) for Chuck premiere night! Hell yes, baby. :D
Onto more comedy!
1/9/2010 c1 annakkas
I really love crazy sarah !
She's so much fun and it's so cute the way she loves chuck!
Loved both Fight Night and of course your version of the adorable psycho series
Really Great
Keep making this fun fics
I really love crazy sarah !
She's so much fun and it's so cute the way she loves chuck!
Loved both Fight Night and of course your version of the adorable psycho series
Really Great
Keep making this fun fics
1/9/2010 c1
25mxpw
Hahahaha, I've already gushed over this thing tons, but the things you changed and added made it even more awesome. First, thanks for throwing in that last line from Sarah about Ana's ass. That's exactly what I was looking for, haha. Also loved the changes to the dildo scene, that was perfect and the shower stuff was great too. Hahaha. I loved Sarah's response to why they were in their underwear. This turned out to be incredibly funny.
This is still probably my favorite line of the fic: Sarah stared incredulously. “The bitch was hitting on my boyfriend and you’re worried about illegal weapons? Get some perspective, Casey.” So freaking funny. And of course, almost all of Casey's comments were perfect, especially the Dear Diary one.
I loved this and can't wait for Round 3! You are so good at writing these kind of stories.
25mxpwHahahaha, I've already gushed over this thing tons, but the things you changed and added made it even more awesome. First, thanks for throwing in that last line from Sarah about Ana's ass. That's exactly what I was looking for, haha. Also loved the changes to the dildo scene, that was perfect and the shower stuff was great too. Hahaha. I loved Sarah's response to why they were in their underwear. This turned out to be incredibly funny.
This is still probably my favorite line of the fic: Sarah stared incredulously. “The bitch was hitting on my boyfriend and you’re worried about illegal weapons? Get some perspective, Casey.” So freaking funny. And of course, almost all of Casey's comments were perfect, especially the Dear Diary one.
I loved this and can't wait for Round 3! You are so good at writing these kind of stories.
1/9/2010 c1
16ne71
"Dear Diary, my partner nearly killed a girl with a fake pecker. It was the best Christmas ever.”
Also...
"Why are we in a hot shower in our underwear?"
"Um... because."
Also, everything else. Holy crap funny.
Nick
16ne71"Dear Diary, my partner nearly killed a girl with a fake pecker. It was the best Christmas ever.”
Also...
"Why are we in a hot shower in our underwear?"
"Um... because."
Also, everything else. Holy crap funny.
Nick
1/9/2010 c1
1shamster600
Very entertaining as usual keep going . A storyline I think would be entertaining for you to do is that you usually focus on Sarah focus a story on Chuck and like make him a bit of a lothario with him with Sarah but also cheating with Sarah with other women.
1shamster600Very entertaining as usual keep going . A storyline I think would be entertaining for you to do is that you usually focus on Sarah focus a story on Chuck and like make him a bit of a lothario with him with Sarah but also cheating with Sarah with other women.
1/9/2010 c1
71Wepdiggy
Heh, I love at the end how defeated and accepting Chuck is of his station in life. He is absolutely the property of Sarah, and there will be no questions.
"Dear Diary, my partner nearly killed a girl with a fake pecker. It was the best Christmas ever.” Possibly the greatest line ever in fanfic. Seriously. Always love to see Casey's inner Jayne come out, and that was pretty damn close.
I don't know what else to say. The whole Fight Night idea is tremendous, and I can't wait to see what is yet to come in this series. Thanks for sharing!
71WepdiggyHeh, I love at the end how defeated and accepting Chuck is of his station in life. He is absolutely the property of Sarah, and there will be no questions.
"Dear Diary, my partner nearly killed a girl with a fake pecker. It was the best Christmas ever.” Possibly the greatest line ever in fanfic. Seriously. Always love to see Casey's inner Jayne come out, and that was pretty damn close.
I don't know what else to say. The whole Fight Night idea is tremendous, and I can't wait to see what is yet to come in this series. Thanks for sharing!
