for Written in Blood2/21/2011 c6 
15Smoke
This is cool. I'm loving the characterization of a Kain that doesn't want to be a vampire, searching for a cure. I'm also loving the anti-hero Mortanius being explored a bit deeper.
15SmokeThis is cool. I'm loving the characterization of a Kain that doesn't want to be a vampire, searching for a cure. I'm also loving the anti-hero Mortanius being explored a bit deeper.
2/20/2011 c4 Smoke
The birthing zombie was actually pretty cool. It took me a while to orient myself in the "when" of the LOK universe, but I think having the human Kain involved is amazing. I'm not up much on Stargate, having only caught random episodes from its entire run and only really being familiar with the movie.
The birthing zombie was actually pretty cool. It took me a while to orient myself in the "when" of the LOK universe, but I think having the human Kain involved is amazing. I'm not up much on Stargate, having only caught random episodes from its entire run and only really being familiar with the movie.
6/24/2010 c6 AbyssalDaemon
Thank you for showing us the other point of view, I had forgotten just how nasty the world that the original Blood Omen. Nosgoth has to be one of the few worlds that I can think of where rule under the Ori probably could be considered a fairly good improvement.
And your Mortanius was excellent.
Thank you for showing us the other point of view, I had forgotten just how nasty the world that the original Blood Omen. Nosgoth has to be one of the few worlds that I can think of where rule under the Ori probably could be considered a fairly good improvement.
And your Mortanius was excellent.
6/24/2010 c5 AbyssalDaemon
Very nicely done on Adria and its nice to see her being fleshed out. Her thoughts on the planet, along with the elements of Vala that peeked through in this chapter made me laugh. And Moebius of all people ...I actually feel sorry for her now given how being snaked by Baal is probably a happier outcome then her eventual fate under Moebius and the Elder God. And I have to wonder what its thoughts on the situation happen to be.
Thoughts on how to Adria less cardboardy: the biggest one that I can think of is inexperience. Given her young age I can easily see her over (and later on as her confidence is steadily ground down by events) under estimating herself. She has all that power but her political skills are frankly utterly lacking, especially in a place like Nosgoth where almost everyone and their dog seems to be running multiple xantos gambits for what at times seems to be the sheer hell of it.
Very nicely done on Adria and its nice to see her being fleshed out. Her thoughts on the planet, along with the elements of Vala that peeked through in this chapter made me laugh. And Moebius of all people ...I actually feel sorry for her now given how being snaked by Baal is probably a happier outcome then her eventual fate under Moebius and the Elder God. And I have to wonder what its thoughts on the situation happen to be.
Thoughts on how to Adria less cardboardy: the biggest one that I can think of is inexperience. Given her young age I can easily see her over (and later on as her confidence is steadily ground down by events) under estimating herself. She has all that power but her political skills are frankly utterly lacking, especially in a place like Nosgoth where almost everyone and their dog seems to be running multiple xantos gambits for what at times seems to be the sheer hell of it.
5/10/2010 c6 12Nedy Rahn
Me thinks the Prior just met a Belrog, poor...poor...creature...If a prior were to show up in some of the cities I know from the games I play he would likely find himself on the table of Lolth.
12Nedy RahnMe thinks the Prior just met a Belrog, poor...poor...creature...If a prior were to show up in some of the cities I know from the games I play he would likely find himself on the table of Lolth.
4/5/2010 c4 Dusel
Uh...yeah, disturbing...one of the more original methods of introducing SG-1 to the Supernatural...Reminds me of Painkiller, such a glorious game...Nice one, don't know where you're going with this really, but nice none the less.
Uh...yeah, disturbing...one of the more original methods of introducing SG-1 to the Supernatural...Reminds me of Painkiller, such a glorious game...Nice one, don't know where you're going with this really, but nice none the less.