for Easy Tonight1/8 c4 NCIS fan
Wow. What a story. Tony's compassion and love for his friend really shine through here. Well done!
Wow. What a story. Tony's compassion and love for his friend really shine through here. Well done!
12/29/2012 c4 mental samurai
What the hell, that was so bad what in the world were you going for. What ever it was I hope you missed it because that was a bad story.
What the hell, that was so bad what in the world were you going for. What ever it was I hope you missed it because that was a bad story.
11/10/2011 c4 Grace
Liked this story. Don't worry about Smartkid37. Really don't know why she's called that since she's old and has kids and has grandchildren. Gibbs will always care more about Tony and Abby more than he ever will be to McGee.
Liked this story. Don't worry about Smartkid37. Really don't know why she's called that since she's old and has kids and has grandchildren. Gibbs will always care more about Tony and Abby more than he ever will be to McGee.
2/2/2010 c4 
62smartkid37
it was a good story -
would have been a great one except for the fact that Gibbs showed no concern for Tim or even bothered to talk to him at all.
62smartkid37it was a good story -
would have been a great one except for the fact that Gibbs showed no concern for Tim or even bothered to talk to him at all.
1/21/2010 c4 33Amanda Kitswell
Awesome. Loved it. Every word. Well, except that one typo, but you'll fix that, and then I'll love every word. Excellent.
Great story. I can't wait to read more of your work.
Amanda
33Amanda KitswellAwesome. Loved it. Every word. Well, except that one typo, but you'll fix that, and then I'll love every word. Excellent.
Great story. I can't wait to read more of your work.
Amanda
1/21/2010 c3 Amanda Kitswell
I'm surprised Tony was able to talk himself out of that jam! Impressive.
Another very nicely written chapter. Beautiful. I loved it, yet again.
Amanda
I'm surprised Tony was able to talk himself out of that jam! Impressive.
Another very nicely written chapter. Beautiful. I loved it, yet again.
Amanda
1/21/2010 c2 Amanda Kitswell
"...help us find out what they’re plans are.”
They're should be their.
That's all I got for criticism. Other than that, fantastic. Another gloriously good chapter. I really like this story. A lot!
Amanda
"...help us find out what they’re plans are.”
They're should be their.
That's all I got for criticism. Other than that, fantastic. Another gloriously good chapter. I really like this story. A lot!
Amanda
1/21/2010 c1 Amanda Kitswell
HOLY CRAP! MCGEE'S GONE BATSHIT CRAZY!
I really like this. You've sucked me in. The POV is kinda weird, but other than that I love it so far!
Amanda
HOLY CRAP! MCGEE'S GONE BATSHIT CRAZY!
I really like this. You've sucked me in. The POV is kinda weird, but other than that I love it so far!
Amanda
1/18/2010 c2 BE1313
I like this story. A little OOC but I like it. lol I think Tony should just take McGee down b/c he's protective of Abby especially but Ziva and Gibbs too. I think he would try to warn them some how.
I like this story. A little OOC but I like it. lol I think Tony should just take McGee down b/c he's protective of Abby especially but Ziva and Gibbs too. I think he would try to warn them some how.
1/17/2010 c2 Verdad y Vida
Goodness gracious golly geez, lady. That's a dark McGee. I'm horrified but fascinated at the same time. As Tony would say, it's like a train wreck-you want to look away, but you can't. I feel sorry for the real McGee, because he's a good man, but I'm still interested. Update soon! Poor Tony.
Goodness gracious golly geez, lady. That's a dark McGee. I'm horrified but fascinated at the same time. As Tony would say, it's like a train wreck-you want to look away, but you can't. I feel sorry for the real McGee, because he's a good man, but I'm still interested. Update soon! Poor Tony.
1/17/2010 c1 8BnBfanatic
well you have to update right away - you jusr have to! I need to know what's going on!
8BnBfanaticwell you have to update right away - you jusr have to! I need to know what's going on!
1/16/2010 c1 3speedcochrane
*GASP* Why does McGee want to kill Tony? Okay, stupid question maybe. :p Clearly his reasons are pointed out in black and white, heh. But still. I can't wait to see where this goes. :D
Go badass McGee!
3speedcochrane*GASP* Why does McGee want to kill Tony? Okay, stupid question maybe. :p Clearly his reasons are pointed out in black and white, heh. But still. I can't wait to see where this goes. :D
Go badass McGee!