for Payson's Chance4/17/2011 c10 Serrie
Haha, is that part of the series that Quinn knows Spanish? Why would an alien know Spanish? That's super silly!
Haha, is that part of the series that Quinn knows Spanish? Why would an alien know Spanish? That's super silly!
4/17/2011 c9 Serrie
Why does Ali exist?
Why does Ali exist?
4/17/2011 c7 Serrie
Haha, they should give her an anal probe here. That'd be funny.
Haha, they should give her an anal probe here. That'd be funny.
4/17/2011 c5 Serrie
When does Payson go into space?
When does Payson go into space?
7/31/2010 c15 lucyferr
Now here's a crossover I never thought I'd see. It was interesting. Thanks for writing it! :-)
Now here's a crossover I never thought I'd see. It was interesting. Thanks for writing it! :-)
4/26/2010 c15 
14JoeB1451
This was a cute story. I have to admit that the combination atracted me. I knew little about Make it or Break it and I was curious about how you were going to do it.
All in all I liked the story and am looking forward to the sequeal. I hope we'll see a little more SG-1 action in it.
14JoeB1451This was a cute story. I have to admit that the combination atracted me. I knew little about Make it or Break it and I was curious about how you were going to do it.
All in all I liked the story and am looking forward to the sequeal. I hope we'll see a little more SG-1 action in it.
4/22/2010 c14 12Nedy Rahn
When a story is already up with several posts, I usually wait to review until I reach the end of the last post. I like this story. You tell it very well, but you might want to proof read sometimes and not rely on Spelling and Grammar checking by the computer. There were a few times I found where you wanted to say send and typed end instead or other similar instances. Otherwise you have a good story.
12Nedy RahnWhen a story is already up with several posts, I usually wait to review until I reach the end of the last post. I like this story. You tell it very well, but you might want to proof read sometimes and not rely on Spelling and Grammar checking by the computer. There were a few times I found where you wanted to say send and typed end instead or other similar instances. Otherwise you have a good story.
4/20/2010 c14 2PaysonandNickyfan
Hi! It seems like I am one of he few people who read this story that is a Make it or break it fan and not a Stargate person. It is a good story and I have really enjoyed it, though it is hard for me to believe Payson would give up gymnastics like that, but this is you story and it is a good story!
2PaysonandNickyfanHi! It seems like I am one of he few people who read this story that is a Make it or break it fan and not a Stargate person. It is a good story and I have really enjoyed it, though it is hard for me to believe Payson would give up gymnastics like that, but this is you story and it is a good story!
3/30/2010 c11 Teri
I just wanted you to know that I always enjoy seeing an update of this story.
I just wanted you to know that I always enjoy seeing an update of this story.