for Payson's Chance
53/16/2010 c1 anon
Hey good so far.
Can't say I've ever watched 'make it or break it' but the story works well regardless.
My only comment would be payson seem a bit too obliviouse to her aunt's troubles.. you'd think she pick up on at least some of it?
Then again.. kids today ;o)
anyways, good job
Hey good so far.
Can't say I've ever watched 'make it or break it' but the story works well regardless.
My only comment would be payson seem a bit too obliviouse to her aunt's troubles.. you'd think she pick up on at least some of it?
Then again.. kids today ;o)
anyways, good job
3/11/2010 c8 FORD B
It is a very good story and a great read. I just have no idea what, Make It or Break It is to give any help.
It is a very good story and a great read. I just have no idea what, Make It or Break It is to give any help.
2/28/2010 c6 F75
This crossover looked interesting, so I googled "Make it or break it" to know some background info.
And it IS interesting but I am now wondering if there will be more after fixing Payson's back.
Ah well, update soon!
This crossover looked interesting, so I googled "Make it or break it" to know some background info.
And it IS interesting but I am now wondering if there will be more after fixing Payson's back.
Ah well, update soon!
1/25/2010 c1 skye
interesting connection like it so far
interesting connection like it so far