for The Eighth Deadly Sin12/7/2010 c12 Slytherin Princezz1992
you did an excellent job on this story! i totally loved and enjoyed reading it!:D
you did an excellent job on this story! i totally loved and enjoyed reading it!:D
11/5/2010 c11 Guest
So... ever gonna continue?
So... ever gonna continue?
7/30/2010 c11 
8Dark Soul of Shadows
Ah, we love your ADD, Evelynn. Of course the chapter was wonderful~! (It was betaed by ME, of course. lawl. Jk.) But then, two guys kissing is sooo hot.
YES! JUNJOU ROMANTICA! That was the first yaoi anime I saw EVER! And if you write it, I KNOW that the fic will be awesome. I noticed that you didn't mention Miyagi and Shinobu... Don't like them?
Do you know what I love best about being your beta? I get to read the chapter before anyone else! BWAHAHAHAHA! Oh great! Your ADD is spreading to me now! I'M LOVIN' IT! :D
{Dark Soul of Shadows}
8Dark Soul of ShadowsAh, we love your ADD, Evelynn. Of course the chapter was wonderful~! (It was betaed by ME, of course. lawl. Jk.) But then, two guys kissing is sooo hot.
YES! JUNJOU ROMANTICA! That was the first yaoi anime I saw EVER! And if you write it, I KNOW that the fic will be awesome. I noticed that you didn't mention Miyagi and Shinobu... Don't like them?
Do you know what I love best about being your beta? I get to read the chapter before anyone else! BWAHAHAHAHA! Oh great! Your ADD is spreading to me now! I'M LOVIN' IT! :D
{Dark Soul of Shadows}
7/29/2010 c11 1SayakoYasumi
Great Chapter again! =D and i love junjou romantica! you should totally write some fics for it!
1SayakoYasumiGreat Chapter again! =D and i love junjou romantica! you should totally write some fics for it!
7/20/2010 c10 8Dark Soul of Shadows
Yay~! You're alive!
Anyway, while you were gone, I became a registered Beta Reader! -puffs out chest proudly- Haha, okay, in all seriousness, I would like to be your beta! ^^ I'm you're number one fan, after all!
Ed is sooo angsty, but I have to agree with him. Al needs to make a choice already. He either needs to break it off between Ed or Winry. (Preferably the latter.) I liked that lightning comparisive.
As for the next sin... Let me think on it, okay? :3
{Dark Soul of Shadows}
8Dark Soul of ShadowsYay~! You're alive!
Anyway, while you were gone, I became a registered Beta Reader! -puffs out chest proudly- Haha, okay, in all seriousness, I would like to be your beta! ^^ I'm you're number one fan, after all!
Ed is sooo angsty, but I have to agree with him. Al needs to make a choice already. He either needs to break it off between Ed or Winry. (Preferably the latter.) I liked that lightning comparisive.
As for the next sin... Let me think on it, okay? :3
{Dark Soul of Shadows}
4/29/2010 c9 5Andomiyu Orokatta
I liked this chapter, & eagerly await the next. Your love life sounds complicated, even more than Ed's *lol*
5Andomiyu OrokattaI liked this chapter, & eagerly await the next. Your love life sounds complicated, even more than Ed's *lol*
4/20/2010 c9 1SayakoYasumi
nice chapter!, its great as usual. and my love life sucks also...i also like someone who has a gf, and this person knows it, and he leads me on,along with another girl,and tells us he likes us...which is soo not right...and then he feels bad and i feel bad for going on with his..."Fun" and such...its soo horriable...its just im not over him, lol. but regardless, i really love this chapter XD
1SayakoYasuminice chapter!, its great as usual. and my love life sucks also...i also like someone who has a gf, and this person knows it, and he leads me on,along with another girl,and tells us he likes us...which is soo not right...and then he feels bad and i feel bad for going on with his..."Fun" and such...its soo horriable...its just im not over him, lol. but regardless, i really love this chapter XD
4/17/2010 c9 22alchemicmonkey
yet another great chapter!
keep up the great work.
.:~*alchemicmonkey*~:.
22alchemicmonkeyyet another great chapter!
keep up the great work.
.:~*alchemicmonkey*~:.
4/17/2010 c9 8Dark Soul of Shadows
HOLY SH*T! WHAT THE H*LL ARE YOU DOING, AL! I think I froze in shock when I read the part where Al is over Winry in a bed, kissing her. Okay, conforting a person, then... that... are two different things!
I think Ed was in shock too(No, DUH Dark Soul!). I mean, he must have been if he went to do paperwork in Central. How in the world did Al wind up in that situation anyway? Did Winry do something, did Al make the first move? Hm...
'Selfish' was a good title for this chapter. Ed wants Al all for himself. He wants to obliterate any completition. Period.
Aw, I'm sorry Evelynn! -hug- It's like Cinderella and the ugly stepsisters! Wait... is it even anything like that? My love life sucks too. I never had a boyfriend in my life. But when I did find someone I really liked, I found out he had a girlfriend that I never knew about and we were both embarrassed. He was sorry for me and I didn't want his pity. We were never as great of friends again...
BTW, wonderful song for the chapter! I love "All About Us"! I have it on my iPod.
Once again, I am on my virtual hands and knees begging and pleading for your next update. LOL.
Ja ne,
{Dark Soul of Shadows}
8Dark Soul of ShadowsHOLY SH*T! WHAT THE H*LL ARE YOU DOING, AL! I think I froze in shock when I read the part where Al is over Winry in a bed, kissing her. Okay, conforting a person, then... that... are two different things!
I think Ed was in shock too(No, DUH Dark Soul!). I mean, he must have been if he went to do paperwork in Central. How in the world did Al wind up in that situation anyway? Did Winry do something, did Al make the first move? Hm...
'Selfish' was a good title for this chapter. Ed wants Al all for himself. He wants to obliterate any completition. Period.
Aw, I'm sorry Evelynn! -hug- It's like Cinderella and the ugly stepsisters! Wait... is it even anything like that? My love life sucks too. I never had a boyfriend in my life. But when I did find someone I really liked, I found out he had a girlfriend that I never knew about and we were both embarrassed. He was sorry for me and I didn't want his pity. We were never as great of friends again...
BTW, wonderful song for the chapter! I love "All About Us"! I have it on my iPod.
Once again, I am on my virtual hands and knees begging and pleading for your next update. LOL.
Ja ne,
{Dark Soul of Shadows}