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3/31/2010 c18 8illicit.azure
*sob* (all good things come to an end)
3/28/2010 c17 sachiko haruki
ahh well. we're supporting you itachi and sakura! go! *cheers madly while waving a flag that says: Sakura & Itachi, Gambate!*

p.s. happy b'day sakura! XD

reviewed!
3/27/2010 c17 Missfire1
that was fantastic. it's much more better that the previous chapter. everything is very well described. nothing is out of place.

i like that you made them split in different groups with different goal and enemys, it makes things more exciting.

And also that makes each group oblivious to the outcome of both "tasks"; well they are confident about their ability but sometimes things didn't turn out the way you wanted or expected to be(but i don't thing that will be the case).

About sakura that was really unexpected that she revealed her face to the court, but as always I liked the way she stands up to all of them, you are simply the best in this fild (not only this one) ^.^

About Sakura that was really unexpected that she revealed her face to the court, but as always I liked the way she stands up to all of them, you are simply the best in this field (and not only this one) ^.^ and I was happy to read that she is trying to combine herself but also a bit sad ‘cause (if I get it correct) she won’t be as power full as before (because to much power makes people lose themselves) , but if I rethink about it she will only “seal” her power so, in case she needed it, it will be there (but I doubt she will ever need it again since she’s seeking a peaceful life)maybe her medic part will be the most outstanding.

About Itachi I really liked the way you described konohas fight it wasn’t boring at all, you wrote only the essential (it would have been really hard to read-and also for you to write- every single fight) and I presume you will start the “show” as soon as madara appear (that’s an intelligent choice-I’m sorry if my deduction is wrong -well you can write every think you want, I’m sure it will be fine).I’m happy to read that itachi’s doing fine and I also liked the little part where he lead Sakura’s anbu and the war in general. Liked also how you described konohas situation- it’ s a good thing that there were less casualties. As for mikoto she’s a great woman- thinking about Itachi’s wedding in situation like this ahahah ^,^. Ah sorry to ask but what became of kakashi’s team (are they fighting as well?)

I’m really enjoying reading this story it’s really great –thanks for this chapter : -)
3/27/2010 c16 Sarah
Thanks for your reply. I enjoyed it almost as much as the new chapter. Keep up the good work!
3/25/2010 c17 minniemousemom
Great update really good story!
3/25/2010 c17 1xbLoOmZx
YAY! go itachi and sakura! ur both the BEST! hehe update soon! ja ne
3/25/2010 c17 1nightwish635
Its good as ever

UPdate soon!
3/25/2010 c17 1LoverFromAnotherWorld
OMG! i luved it! KYAA! dnt die itachi! lol... but it was soo good! but i hope yu put some more fluff in it :D i can't wait for your next chappie! update soon!
3/25/2010 c17 34Itaweasel-hime
Good chapter! Update soon!
3/25/2010 c17 angel897
love it thanks for updating i think it would be cool if sakura showed up with her ANBU and saved the day with itachi also oh you got have sakura deal with danzo yet too keep writing kay cant wait
3/25/2010 c17 3Princess Ren
Man! Would love to see the court's expressions after seeing sakura for the first time! lol.. Anyways, the chapter was great as always! I can't wait to see Itachi and Madara face each other off! So what happens next? Post soon! Keep up the good work!
3/22/2010 c16 Missfire1
good chapter.the fight was great.I liked the way Seirei fight; as I already said her different characters are amazing, and each one has something unique. but there is also the feeling of incompeteness (that I have to say it's well described- I can sense it through your writing, and sometimes is really frustrating; I don't know how to explain that but it gives the feeling of heaviness deep down in your heart).about seriei:she said she will ask itachi to make her complete; is it because she's aware that he may be the solution of her "misery",because of the feeling sakura has towards itachi!I liked the way Itachi's worring over her, but things should go on and you cant always be there to make sure nothing happens (she also would be offended because that'd mean he's no trust in her capability).

sorry I'm a bit late in reviewing this chapter. thaks for updating so fast...

I'm really curious about the events of next chapter. there is much more that will happen am I right?
3/16/2010 c16 5Neverland Funhouse
This fic like too good, lol. I am loving it, I really am, Itachi to me is exactly how you portraited him, protective, calculative, etc.

Congrats for this really good fic :D

Bye xx
3/15/2010 c16 1nightwish635
its was good, i was wondering if maybe you could fit in the ten sides of sakura and their personalities i sometimes forget who they are and how they are like.

Update soon!
3/15/2010 c16 angel897
love it cant wait for the next update please write more soon kay
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