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3Princess Ren
Interesting! I love the way you portrayed Seirei! She seems very interesting and the most understanding among her personas... well as much as I think! I can't wait for the next chapter! Post soon!
3Princess RenInteresting! I love the way you portrayed Seirei! She seems very interesting and the most understanding among her personas... well as much as I think! I can't wait for the next chapter! Post soon!
3/14/2010 c16 sachiko haruki
SQUE! IT'S ME! xD
I feel really bad for you [not sad since i have a STRONG feeling that you wouldn't want ppl to ppl you]. guess there's a lil' bit of empathy there too.
back to more joyful matters. *grins again*
this chapter is FUN! okay. you must be "0.0? how can a story be fun?"
well. i'm a visual person and i have this really weird [hey it's so not weird dammnit!] thing. whenever i read the words, i can picture it in my head, THUS MY CONSTANT DAYDREAMING, i mean, love for stories! :D
so...GAMBATE!
reviewed~! ;D
SQUE! IT'S ME! xD
I feel really bad for you [not sad since i have a STRONG feeling that you wouldn't want ppl to ppl you]. guess there's a lil' bit of empathy there too.
back to more joyful matters. *grins again*
this chapter is FUN! okay. you must be "0.0? how can a story be fun?"
well. i'm a visual person and i have this really weird [hey it's so not weird dammnit!] thing. whenever i read the words, i can picture it in my head, THUS MY CONSTANT DAYDREAMING, i mean, love for stories! :D
so...GAMBATE!
reviewed~! ;D
3/14/2010 c16 gemaima11
Interesting. =D
the other personalities of sakura..they're like alters? Will be waiting for your updates.
Interesting. =D
the other personalities of sakura..they're like alters? Will be waiting for your updates.
3/12/2010 c15 Missfire1
thats a great chapter.I loved it. sorry I wanted to write a review sooner but I was so busy and I didn't want to only write "I like it".
I have to say that I loved the interaction between itachi and sakura in this chapter(the kissing scene was perfect ;3),It's getting more and more better and I really enjoyed reading it. Sakura is really good at responding to itachi's word/provocation (sorry I can't find the right word-and I'm going crazy). ANd also itachi is getting even better, now he is starting to show what he can do.
the little confrontation with the fire lord was great but I was a bit disappointed to see the fire lord give up so easily(was it only the first match? itachi 1-Fire L. 0?^-^) it's obvious that the fire lord wont winn against ITachi Uchiha, but it will be a good exercise for him (F lord) to try to stand up to itachi; if he does the court life wont be a problem anymore, and he will be a good ruler; that means that sakura has finished his training.
as for the spelling mistake I had only seen 2(if I remember correctly). since i'm not an english native speacker i can't tell if ther are grammar mistakes. but I had no problem in reading it, everything was clear.
I have to say that I really enjoy your writing style ^-^ .
thanks for this chapter and remember to not overdo,although I'm happy to be able to read every week a new chapter of your story ^-^
thats a great chapter.I loved it. sorry I wanted to write a review sooner but I was so busy and I didn't want to only write "I like it".
I have to say that I loved the interaction between itachi and sakura in this chapter(the kissing scene was perfect ;3),It's getting more and more better and I really enjoyed reading it. Sakura is really good at responding to itachi's word/provocation (sorry I can't find the right word-and I'm going crazy). ANd also itachi is getting even better, now he is starting to show what he can do.
the little confrontation with the fire lord was great but I was a bit disappointed to see the fire lord give up so easily(was it only the first match? itachi 1-Fire L. 0?^-^) it's obvious that the fire lord wont winn against ITachi Uchiha, but it will be a good exercise for him (F lord) to try to stand up to itachi; if he does the court life wont be a problem anymore, and he will be a good ruler; that means that sakura has finished his training.
as for the spelling mistake I had only seen 2(if I remember correctly). since i'm not an english native speacker i can't tell if ther are grammar mistakes. but I had no problem in reading it, everything was clear.
I have to say that I really enjoy your writing style ^-^ .
thanks for this chapter and remember to not overdo,although I'm happy to be able to read every week a new chapter of your story ^-^
3/10/2010 c15 sachiko haruki
*starts grinning like a cheshire cat*
this. [major emphasis on this word! :D] is one heck of a chapter! :D sque!
I'M SO HAPPY! 2 MORE DAYS AND IT'S HOLIDAYS! XD AND I LOVE FF! MWAHAHAHAH... okay enough ranting.
hm..akatsuki? check. battle? check. safety of the people/nin? not confirmed. sa- DID YOU JUST SAY THAT THE SAFETY OF THE PEOPLE/NINS ARE NOT CONFIRMED? DIE KAKASHI! *shakes him around like a rag doll. hey that sounds really nice! :D*
ahaha...*laughs nervously after the...shaking episode* gotta meet with mikoto-san about raven-haired, green-eyed, sharingan wielding babies! ehh...ja!
reviewed~! :D
*starts grinning like a cheshire cat*
this. [major emphasis on this word! :D] is one heck of a chapter! :D sque!
I'M SO HAPPY! 2 MORE DAYS AND IT'S HOLIDAYS! XD AND I LOVE FF! MWAHAHAHAH... okay enough ranting.
hm..akatsuki? check. battle? check. safety of the people/nin? not confirmed. sa- DID YOU JUST SAY THAT THE SAFETY OF THE PEOPLE/NINS ARE NOT CONFIRMED? DIE KAKASHI! *shakes him around like a rag doll. hey that sounds really nice! :D*
ahaha...*laughs nervously after the...shaking episode* gotta meet with mikoto-san about raven-haired, green-eyed, sharingan wielding babies! ehh...ja!
reviewed~! :D
3/9/2010 c15 Sarah
Hi. Your characterization of Sakura is pretty unique. Although it's a bit ironic that she can seem self-assured when she has such a multi-polar personality. Still, I agree with the kick-** heroine bit.
Out of curiosity, have you ever come across a similar personality in life? Sorry if my question sounds rude, am just very interested in where you drew your inspiration from. Also, the societal politics are very realistic. They are my favorite part of the story.
Hi. Your characterization of Sakura is pretty unique. Although it's a bit ironic that she can seem self-assured when she has such a multi-polar personality. Still, I agree with the kick-** heroine bit.
Out of curiosity, have you ever come across a similar personality in life? Sorry if my question sounds rude, am just very interested in where you drew your inspiration from. Also, the societal politics are very realistic. They are my favorite part of the story.
3/8/2010 c15 angel897
once again love it please keep it up kay
once again love it please keep it up kay
3/8/2010 c15 aquamarine-acaia
this is good just one problem though in all of her "personas" she has pink hair don't you think some one would have put two and two together and fegured out that they might be tha same person i mean how many people do we know who have bubble gum pink hair? and you need to watch out for grama mistakes it can make youre story hard to follow some rimes, sorry if this sounds like a flame it was just buging me otherwise good story update soon :)
this is good just one problem though in all of her "personas" she has pink hair don't you think some one would have put two and two together and fegured out that they might be tha same person i mean how many people do we know who have bubble gum pink hair? and you need to watch out for grama mistakes it can make youre story hard to follow some rimes, sorry if this sounds like a flame it was just buging me otherwise good story update soon :)