for Rapture: a review by The hotel inspector10/2/2010 c1 
4Shadow Aura 64
Hahaha, nice story. Good idea, and quite amusing.
Here's hoping you write more.
4Shadow Aura 64Hahaha, nice story. Good idea, and quite amusing.
Here's hoping you write more.
1/22/2010 c1 4DarkSword512
Took your time :P
Actually, this was well written, although pretty short. Choice of words was very good, as well as grammar (which is something not that popular on this site sadly ¬_¬).
Overall though, good first story, good luck with the rest :D
4DarkSword512Took your time :P
Actually, this was well written, although pretty short. Choice of words was very good, as well as grammar (which is something not that popular on this site sadly ¬_¬).
Overall though, good first story, good luck with the rest :D