for Mismatched and Messed Up1/17 c12
2Broken Jar Of Hearts
You're really used to writing dark stories... Writing style is still good as always, I wish you'll write something light, though... But I understand that you find it hard to write about Neji right now... .
2Broken Jar Of HeartsYou're really used to writing dark stories... Writing style is still good as always, I wish you'll write something light, though... But I understand that you find it hard to write about Neji right now... .
1/16 c10 Broken Jar Of Hearts
My thoughts while reading this chapter are about Neji applying for another school? :-?
My thoughts while reading this chapter are about Neji applying for another school? :-?
6/24/2012 c14 94stephanie
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! I can't believe it's over. I freakin loved this story! It was so good! Very well written and kept me reading and interested the whole time! Loved it!
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! I can't believe it's over. I freakin loved this story! It was so good! Very well written and kept me reading and interested the whole time! Loved it!
6/24/2012 c9 94stephanie
I secretly really liked Tenten and Sasuke together but Neji and Tenten together trumps all! Tenten's and Sasuke's break up was perfect. I don't know how to describe it but it was just as I imagined. LOVE THIS STORY! :D
I secretly really liked Tenten and Sasuke together but Neji and Tenten together trumps all! Tenten's and Sasuke's break up was perfect. I don't know how to describe it but it was just as I imagined. LOVE THIS STORY! :D
11/16/2011 c14
15renzie17
OMG. I LOVED IT! AT FIRST I thought this story was gonna be one of those cliche school girl stories that's full of dialogue and lacks words but then I decided to give it a shot and I thought it was beautifully outlined. :) Although, your epilogue lacks something (because I want mooooaaar xD)... Nevertheless, good job! ♥
rnz17
15renzie17OMG. I LOVED IT! AT FIRST I thought this story was gonna be one of those cliche school girl stories that's full of dialogue and lacks words but then I decided to give it a shot and I thought it was beautifully outlined. :) Although, your epilogue lacks something (because I want mooooaaar xD)... Nevertheless, good job! ♥
rnz17
8/27/2011 c1
1arulent
I can't understand how this doesn't have more reviews! Its amazing, sweet, sensual and characteristically really interesting.
The only problem I can see is that Sakura's and Neji's personalities are not developed all that much beyond being love interests. The interpretation of Sasuke was brilliant, and made me laugh
Loved it :D
1arulentI can't understand how this doesn't have more reviews! Its amazing, sweet, sensual and characteristically really interesting.
The only problem I can see is that Sakura's and Neji's personalities are not developed all that much beyond being love interests. The interpretation of Sasuke was brilliant, and made me laugh
Loved it :D
8/3/2011 c14
4crookedcath
I feel like this story should have soo many more reviews than it does, it was well-written and as usual, you capture Neji and Tenten's relationship more beautifully than any other author I've read. I love the SasuTenNeji and I felt so guilty for wanting her to be with both guys, screw Sakura! But great great story
4crookedcathI feel like this story should have soo many more reviews than it does, it was well-written and as usual, you capture Neji and Tenten's relationship more beautifully than any other author I've read. I love the SasuTenNeji and I felt so guilty for wanting her to be with both guys, screw Sakura! But great great story
8/1/2011 c14
22kevbunny
what a lovely story :) i followed it from beginning to end, & i just have to say that it is one of the best nejiten / sasusaku stories i have ever read. legit.
22kevbunnywhat a lovely story :) i followed it from beginning to end, & i just have to say that it is one of the best nejiten / sasusaku stories i have ever read. legit.
6/24/2011 c14
5Nanoue-Chan
aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I loved the storryyyy so muuccchh! =3333 I'll always remembeeeerr Sasuke's reply "if you don't want your child to be raised a Uchiha!" OH MY GOODD that was genius I LOOOVEED it! So greaat :DDD
5Nanoue-Chanaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I loved the storryyyy so muuccchh! =3333 I'll always remembeeeerr Sasuke's reply "if you don't want your child to be raised a Uchiha!" OH MY GOODD that was genius I LOOOVEED it! So greaat :DDD
6/4/2011 c14 nina lee
*thumbs up* ^.^
*thumbs up* ^.^
5/30/2011 c14 bri
i love that ending a really great story 3 :)
i love that ending a really great story 3 :)
5/5/2011 c14
1gtui
This story was absolutely amazing to read. The characters and the plot were very well written. I enjoyed it very much and look forward to reading more from you in the future!
1gtuiThis story was absolutely amazing to read. The characters and the plot were very well written. I enjoyed it very much and look forward to reading more from you in the future!
3/25/2011 c14
48Lady Callista
Silly. OOC. And frickin awesome! This story is one of two AU's I've ever loved, and I can't believe how amazing your writing is. The fact that I love SasSak makes it even better! I also never thought anyone could make me see SasTen as possible, and with an even slightly IC Sasuke it wouldn't be, but I love this Sasuke so much! Wish you'd posted this as a SasSak fic, cause then I would have found it when you were first writing it, but I've only started reading NejiTen recently. Anyways, sorry for babbling. I find good stories all the time, but it is so rare to find an author that writes so well I want to read everything they've written, even if it's not stuff I normally like. And I consider that the highest compliment.
48Lady CallistaSilly. OOC. And frickin awesome! This story is one of two AU's I've ever loved, and I can't believe how amazing your writing is. The fact that I love SasSak makes it even better! I also never thought anyone could make me see SasTen as possible, and with an even slightly IC Sasuke it wouldn't be, but I love this Sasuke so much! Wish you'd posted this as a SasSak fic, cause then I would have found it when you were first writing it, but I've only started reading NejiTen recently. Anyways, sorry for babbling. I find good stories all the time, but it is so rare to find an author that writes so well I want to read everything they've written, even if it's not stuff I normally like. And I consider that the highest compliment.
