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1/17 c12 2Broken Jar Of Hearts
You're really used to writing dark stories... Writing style is still good as always, I wish you'll write something light, though... But I understand that you find it hard to write about Neji right now... .
1/16 c10 Broken Jar Of Hearts
My thoughts while reading this chapter are about Neji applying for another school? :-?
1/15 c5 Broken Jar Of Hearts
This reminds me of Gossip Girl...
6/24/2012 c14 94stephanie
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! I can't believe it's over. I freakin loved this story! It was so good! Very well written and kept me reading and interested the whole time! Loved it!
6/24/2012 c9 94stephanie
I secretly really liked Tenten and Sasuke together but Neji and Tenten together trumps all! Tenten's and Sasuke's break up was perfect. I don't know how to describe it but it was just as I imagined. LOVE THIS STORY! :D
12/30/2011 c14 2Firefairy001
Best NejiTen I've ever read next to "Right kind of Wrong"
11/16/2011 c14 15renzie17
OMG. I LOVED IT! AT FIRST I thought this story was gonna be one of those cliche school girl stories that's full of dialogue and lacks words but then I decided to give it a shot and I thought it was beautifully outlined. :) Although, your epilogue lacks something (because I want mooooaaar xD)... Nevertheless, good job! ♥

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8/27/2011 c1 1arulent
I can't understand how this doesn't have more reviews! Its amazing, sweet, sensual and characteristically really interesting.

The only problem I can see is that Sakura's and Neji's personalities are not developed all that much beyond being love interests. The interpretation of Sasuke was brilliant, and made me laugh

Loved it :D
8/3/2011 c14 4crookedcath
I feel like this story should have soo many more reviews than it does, it was well-written and as usual, you capture Neji and Tenten's relationship more beautifully than any other author I've read. I love the SasuTenNeji and I felt so guilty for wanting her to be with both guys, screw Sakura! But great great story
8/1/2011 c14 22kevbunny
what a lovely story :) i followed it from beginning to end, & i just have to say that it is one of the best nejiten / sasusaku stories i have ever read. legit.
6/24/2011 c14 5Nanoue-Chan
aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I loved the storryyyy so muuccchh! =3333 I'll always remembeeeerr Sasuke's reply "if you don't want your child to be raised a Uchiha!" OH MY GOODD that was genius I LOOOVEED it! So greaat :DDD
6/4/2011 c14 nina lee
*thumbs up* ^.^
5/30/2011 c14 bri
i love that ending a really great story 3 :)
5/5/2011 c14 1gtui
This story was absolutely amazing to read. The characters and the plot were very well written. I enjoyed it very much and look forward to reading more from you in the future!
3/25/2011 c14 48Lady Callista
Silly. OOC. And frickin awesome! This story is one of two AU's I've ever loved, and I can't believe how amazing your writing is. The fact that I love SasSak makes it even better! I also never thought anyone could make me see SasTen as possible, and with an even slightly IC Sasuke it wouldn't be, but I love this Sasuke so much! Wish you'd posted this as a SasSak fic, cause then I would have found it when you were first writing it, but I've only started reading NejiTen recently. Anyways, sorry for babbling. I find good stories all the time, but it is so rare to find an author that writes so well I want to read everything they've written, even if it's not stuff I normally like. And I consider that the highest compliment.
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